Arekku_Koro Posted February 12, 2008 Report Share Posted February 12, 2008 Leonardo Davinci was an astounding artist, as well as an inventor. He invented the first flying machine, and the first bike. In 2005, a secret underground lab of his was discovered. It included magical inventions, but nobody knew that just 6 inches below the floor there where amazing inventions that would change the world. Since 2008, technology has hardly developed. An amazing discovery in Leonardo’s lab led to a door that housed unbelievable tech. The technology was built so that leonardo’s family was able to access it’s special powers, making the Davinci’s future kings. When it was found out that the amazing tech would not work without the sensors that only his kin could use, all remaining ancestors to Leonardo where shot down, except a few. The technology, need less to say, became part of everyday life. The ones who escaped have amazing power, and call themselves “Cybers” our hero, who is named “Apple Pie” is one of these people. If he can use his amazing powers right, maybe he can avoid being killed by the government, and start a Davinci monarchy. I sure do daydream! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 12, 2008 Report Share Posted February 12, 2008 thats not such a bad idea! but why apple pie? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 12, 2008 Report Share Posted February 12, 2008 I think it's a great idea! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 12, 2008 Report Share Posted February 12, 2008 this idea is awesome, I would love to read it when it's done :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 12, 2008 Report Share Posted February 12, 2008 It starts off excellent. Though the later bit doesn't sound too appealing to me. I hate apple pie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted February 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2008 The apple pie part will be explained later in the story! Thanks, I'll post the first chapter soon. The Name of the story is "Eternal Cyber"! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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