Jake the Sage Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 I am just saying that, if I DO miss anything Nexev or you will come in and point it out. And we are all "adults" here so I doubt there is going to be any fighting about what was posted or not. If there is Nexev as I will certainly put it too an end immediately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu Hansung Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 I assume that the RP will start once a fourth person is accepted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 I will prove we read apps by doing a play by play. [quote name='Techi☺' timestamp='1311284214' post='5375390'] Still looking for a Co-host? I'll Take the position if you'll allow me and if it's vacant... Reading plot now... I'll have my app up ASAP if I feel like joining, either way, I feel like at least helping you manage this whether or not I join... [spoiler=Lucas, my app] Name: Lucas [b]No last name? So does he have no family or something?[/b] Alias/Title: Big Brother(by his little sister, [b]Welp, so much for that theroy. [/b] which I might bring into this if there is a situation that feels right, will make an App for her Before then) Age: 17 [b]Ah always the youngsters who go on epic life threatening quests for godlike powers. It's the hormones.[/b] Gender: Male Appearance: [spoiler= ^^ ] [IMG]http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq299/LouricaKikay/Anime%20Guy/ViolinBoy8.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] Personality: Lucas is usually a very positive and bright young man.[b]You know what I noticed, everyone is smart in rps. It kinda loses meaning just being smart if everyone else is also smart. What about dumb people? I think ycm is biased against people with mental handicaps. Which is hillarious because people in general are retarded on ycm.[/b] Very few things could land outside his comfort zone and he's always been up for adventure. [b][/b]He's only scared of bugs bigger than his hands. [b]Ooooh couragous too. Since I am suppose to pick out flaws I suppose I will nitpick. He seems kinda generic, but I just can't put my finger on...[/b]He'll endure anything too cure his sister's blindness,[img]http://www.freewebs.com/black-wolves-anime/joeywheeler.gif[/img] [b]and noooooooow it makes sense.[/b] even destroy whomever gets in his way. [b][b]possible antiheroritude here, also shows problem with disabled. remenber they are not handicapped, they are handicapable![/b][/b]He pretends not too notice when girls, or even some guys, start too drool over his devilish good looks, but he doesn't mind it unless they start to stalk him. [b]SOMEONE READS A LITTLE TOO MUCH FANFIC ME THINKS?[/b]He loves having friends around, but doesn't mind being all alone and even would be preffered to be left alone at times.[b]I think your doing a excellent job of telling us he has no real personallity. And I am proud of you for that.[/b] At night, he's more energetic and hardly likes too sleep. When he wakes up, he's a bit lazy from sleeping too little but eventually snaps out of it too start his day. Species: 25% cat person, 75% Human. None of his non-human traits appear physically. [b]Cat people? Huh I guess i have more work trying to get backstory for this oh we.... waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaait he's part cat... I'm preeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetty sure that will pop up, trust me, 25% is a lot of genes and I really think that them all being recessive is a HUGE stretch. I mean why even be a cross breed then? It's a extra point in the generic sue mold but doesn't serve to accomplish anything?[/b] Instrument: Violin Weapon: [spoiler= Dagger] [IMG]http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc161/deadzonedragon/Dagger.jpg[/IMG] Skilled in the art of self-defense and sword play, Lucas always keeps this dagger hidden on his body at all times for multiple reasons.[b] Unfortunatly for him, daggers aren't swords. Trust me a few feet of blade makes a LOT of difference in fighting style.[/b] [/spoiler] Chord: While playing his Violin, Lucas can dissappear and reappear anywhere there is shadow with in the immediate area. This is only limited up to a 100 yards. When his abiity is activated, his body will begin to fade in the shadows where hs stands and a soft light is given off. During the Fading process, he can not be touched because it's an illusion. [b]So... he's already teleported but he leaves an illusion there to f*** with them?[/b] He will begin to slowly fade back into the spot of his appearence. [b]which simply means he goes back to where he teleports? So he can make himself immaterial around shadows? That is entirely different from teleporting?[/b] His body is the physically strike-able once his body becomes solid. He can not activate the ability again for 5 seconds after he solidifies. He must be playing his Violin the whole cool-down period and can not defend himself. [b]Which totally prevents this from being anything close to stealthy, which is silly cause shadows imply stealth is a thing that is happening.[/b] Leitmotif: Lucas while finished with his Chord ability, during the 5 second cool-down phase, can strike a note hard and start up a Dissappearing and reappearing dance. The note he plays can only remain being played for up too 30 seconds and the ability is over and his special ability is then down for the normal Leitmotif cool-down phase. [b]this sentance is so aqwardly worded that in structure high even the sentence nerds picked on him.[/b]While the note[b]s, one note will never last 30 seconds, it's multiple notes[/b] is being played, Lucas' body becomes tangent [b]WHAT IF IT WANTED TO BE COSINE? honestly don't you mean (IN)TANGIBLE?[/b] and he can dissappear and reappear any where he wants within the 100 yard area. He can hold his Violin in his left hand and draw his dagger in his right, allowing him to attack swiftly while he is appearing and reappearing. [b]Then how is the string being pulled?[/b] Bio: Lucas and his younger sister Mai, shared the same mother, but different fathers. They were born to the Half neko woman named Lin.[b]apperantly neko's sleep around.[/b] When Lucas was 8 and his sister was 3 years old, their mother died of a Heart Attack. Lin died at the Age of 32, her heart attack was brought upon by a panic-episode that she was used to having, but this time was the last. Lucas couldn't take care of Mai by himself and brought her with him to the next closest village. [b]What about the fathers? The other family menbers? LIN'S PIMP?[/b]In this Village, Lucas and Mai were taken in by the local church and were allowed to stay as long as they wished without any rules besides a bed time and being polite. [b]...it's a church, i'm sorry i love religons and stuff but they are some strict motherf***ers. if you go in the house of god by gosh you have to LEARN IT. [/b]Lucas was encouraged to take up schooling with the other local children. Mai slowly lost her eye-sight by an unknown condition she was born with. [b]you couldn't even be bothered to make on up? not Ludwigatosis which is a result of an overload of musical might and can make you deaf or blind (but you will play a mean pinball)? [/b] Lucas and some of the young priests took care of her closely, [b]the old priests however had altar boys to pork and didn't give a f*** about the kids they took in and practically raised[/b]Lucas mostly, but the Priests helped more while Lucas was at school. Mai soon became bed ridden as her immune system was a little weak. [b]which naturally has nothing to do with the blindness, nope, that would be silly.[/b] Unlike her Blindness, Mai could soon grow stronger and become more immune too all those common illness' [b]rare diseases like supercallifragalicousexhallitosis still get her every time though[/b] and walk again [b]being bed ridden doesn't mean you can't walk, it just means you can't walk far. could she atleast go outside?[/b]. Lucas began to hear rumors, several of them, about this book or sheets of music notes written by the god that could give Lucas the power heal Mai's blindness and her small immune system problem. [b]the sheet music is extremly famous, an entire culture of cowboy prospecting badasses was founded searching for this book and he just now heard of it? what is this church? Saint Under-a-rock?[/b] His determination to find it has grown over the past few years. [spoiler=Techniques/Spells/Etc.:] Pounce- Lucas' body, while taking the direct appearence of a Human, allows him to pounce upon a target quickly like a cat. [b]Or like a football player, they can do this too.[/b]This strike comes quickly and could take down people up too 4X his weight. If paired with a Dagger stab, this could be fairly fatal quickly. [b]however if you dodge it he's pretty much boned[/b] All 4's- Although it'd be uncomfortable for a human to run on all fours, Lucas can. This offers a greatly enhanced speed, but Lucas finds it disgraceful and won't do it in public. [b]so wait, his genes greatly altered his skeletal system but he still looks exactly like a human? Not really logical, at all.[/b] Spells: [b]let me say from the start i don't understand this, i mean we have chords. aren't those pretty much magic? if you want magic to be usuable jake sure I guess but shouldn't it be apart of the chord? otherwise one of these skills negats the purpose of the other. [/b] Frost Paw- Using his tribe/heritage of dark magic [b]wait what? *looks in bio* nope not there[/b], Lucas will randomly start too freeze things that come in contact with his bare feet or hands while he is enraged or in deep fear. Absolute control over this ability is possible, [b]pawsable[/b] but not in the near-future. Flame Paw [b]we get it, it's a cat. even though he looks nothing like a cat or acts like one whatsoever, he's a cat.[/b]- on a More random ocassions, Lucas can become lost too rage and become an animal of survival. Lashing out upon anything that gets too close with fire surronding his fists. Since it takes an entire different mind state that Lucas can't even control for this ability to become active, [b]yes their is a mile difference between angry and really angry, a diffence spanning several upon several of letters.[/b] it is more than likly impossible for Lucas to master this ability wihtin his life time. Star Strike- This is the only ability that Lucas seems to be able to control with practice. All this ability needs is a clear mind and an excess of energy in lucas' body. By pointing his dagger with a straight arm upon his target, lucas can shoot a small white ball of light at his enemy. When this light makes contact it begins a cool burning sensation and will quickly melt whatever it is stuck too till it dissappears. [b]thermite?[/b] Since Lucas can control and activate this ability with ease, he has already begun the steps of mastering it. While it's only one shot per day with lucas' current energy, [b]oooooooh it's a spirit gun! I get it.[/b] it is not surprising if he soon increases the strength of this ability or how many shots he might have in a day. [/spoiler] Other Interesting Facts: Enhanced scent and night vision. Fear of large dogs [b] remember that in the personality?[/b] or bugs bigger than one of his hands. Lucas has an unusual craving for raw fish. Lucas Scored not only top of his class on all test of the current year, but also top 3rd of his whole region. [b]super smart? yeah.... not sue at all...[/b] Lucas' sister Mai is more Neko-cat-being than her brother and retains a tail and ears of a cat from her mother. [spoiler=Theme: Whispers in the dark by Skillet] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9kfi3rN0C50 [/spoiler] [spoiler=RP Sample:] Lucas, a simple boy with a free mind and an easy smile, was frowning with boredum [b]ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh he's frowning, with an easy smile! SH[i][/i]IT IS ABOUT TO GO DOWN![/b] in his classroom. His eyes darting between the paper on his desk and the fairly distracting new student sitting beside him. She was beautiful, with light pink hair that flew through the air like a princess' [b]yes people, princess's can fly. superman had a thing for royals. rowr. [/b] and he well grown body. He had to smack himself lightly to remove his gaze from the spell the woman was putting him under and prevent himself from drooling on his paper. [b]AND THE s*** IS APPERANTLY HORMONES. YAY?[/b] He then looked down with his pencil in his hand as he began too read the first question. One of the shorter students with a well shaved head, opened a window and let the cool morning breeze roll in. This picked up the new girl's scent [b]smelling, the new foreplay? i have to say, usually this only turns up in my... kinkier of... "comics detailing impassioned romance"[/b] and dragged it Lucas' way. He then drifted into a Daze [b]capped for serious bisnasties?[/b] as the soft alluring scent would drive him wild if he didn't let his mind ease. [b]the fact that he had a thing for smells and girls should have been in the personallity app, really. Also he clearly takes after his mother.[/b] With a small sigh, Lucas realized how little of his work he'd be getting done today. [b]....YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH MAD AWKWARD ROMANCE STOOOOOOOOORY TO THE EXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXTREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE[/b] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/quote] TBH i am amused you made an issue of jake NOT reading this. *wink wink* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='Nexev the Supreme Party' timestamp='1311485127' post='5382439'] I will prove we read apps by doing a play by play. TBH i am amused you made an issue of jake NOT reading this. *wink wink* [/quote] You know, I actually found that kind of fun... My problem goes deeper than someone partially reading my app... trust me. Though I'm glad you took the time for that Play-by-play, it was entertaining And you don't think Neko Chicks wouldn't sleep around? I mean... They are part cat O_O ... right? (If you don't know what I'm getting at here, or at least not sure enough for a half-assed guess, it'd be best to just skip this part rather than ask...) I didn't know you were supposed to put turn-on's in the Personality area O_O. I'll try it next time... and if anyone asks, I'm reffering them too you >= D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 When romance puts a play in it turn ones do count. And yes it does figure cats will be affected by that. It even was a issue in a different story. Just thought it bears pointing out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu Hansung Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 Play by play app reading? That's very interesting. Also, when the RP starts will we all be just arriving to central city through different entrances or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 Umm unfortunatly I will be leaving at the end of the week. For a spam of like 3 weeks. So yeah have to drop out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElÆ’ie Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 I don't know if I have yet, but I'm reserving! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 [b]Name[/b]:Haku Shirosaki/Jessica "Panic" Moreno [b]Alias/Title[/b]: The Calm Sea and Raging Wind [b]Age[/b]: 19 [b]Gender[/b]:Haku is male, Panic is female [spoiler=Appearances]Haku is about 5'7" with a head of long, silky black hair, His facial features give him off as Asian in descent. Powerfully built with calculating black eyes that mirror his cold demeanor. He wears white Kendo robes while he is in control and sports sandals and clean, white socks. He keeps his hair neat and tidy to the point where you wouldn't think of him as someone who sees alot of combat. On the back of his left hand the Japanese characters for "White" are tattooed. Panic on the other hand enjoys sporting very short-cut denim shorts, A bright blue tank-top and black, fingerless gloves with silver spikes on the knuckles. She tends to wear a cowboy hat over her short-cut gorgeous blonde hair. She has full pink lips and luscious green eyes that show no hesitation. This is true with friends, men, and her gun which she keeps in a brown holster that she wears on her side. On the back of her right hand, beneath the glove the word "Black" is tattooed.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Personalities]Panic is a definite hothead with a "take no prisoners" attitude on life. While this can make her a fun person to be around. This also applies to her temper. The smallest remark can set her off on either a cursing streak or an attempt on some poor fools life. She charges into her problems without thinking, however in the heat of battle she shows time and time again that she is a brilliant and capable strategist. Haku is almost her complete opposite. He doesn't like letting alot of people in on what he is thinking. He doesn't usually speak unless spoken to. And when he does speak it is in a very polite and dignified manner. He values honor above all else and feels a sense of regret for not being there to help defend his family. [/spoiler] [b]Species[/b]:Although Haku happens to be the spirit of a thousand year old samurai inhabiting the body of a 19 year old human girl...well the body is Human [b]Instrument[/b]: Didgeridoo [spoiler=Weapons]Haku and Panic both have very different tastes when it comes to weaponry. Haku uses a Kusarigama (Two hand scythes linked together by a long chain) as well as a 6 foot long enchanted Katana known as the "Blade Of Susano'o" whose legendary steel is said to be indestructible. Panic enjoys using an MP5 Submachinegun when she feels like a target isn't scared enough of her. And when she's not using her rapidfire weaponry she is using an 1897 Winchester Shotgun left to her by her dad. She lovingly dubbed the Shotgun "Big Daddy". She also uses a Trench Knife when she has to fight close range. This too she lovingly named "The Emasculator" after a rather sadistic move she pulled on a man who tried to make a pass at her in a noisy bar in Houston[/spoiler] [b]Chord[/b]:Upon sounding the Didgeridoo the effect varies depending which persona is dominant at the moment. Haku using the Didgeridoo will summon up a could of extremely thick fog that conceals his movements to his enemy. This Fog cloud moves on Haku's command and he is completely able to manipulate it. Panic playing the Didgeridoo will generate explosive waves of sound that can severely damage opponents. [b]Leitmotif[/b]: "Haku&Panic's Bullet Sakura Scene." Haku enters the scene calling in his cloud of fog. Much to the surprise of his enemy however it is Panic that is shooting bullets at her foe through the blanket of fog. Back to Haku who is causing the bullets not to strike the enemy, but rather to encircle him, via the manipulation of the air around the bullets. The enemy realizes there is no escape as he is now trapped in a whirlwind of bullets just inches from his face. Panic and Haku both tell the enemy that the scene is about to crescendo. And then the bullets strike the enemy from every thinkable angle. All this while Haku and Panic recite romantic dialog to one another. (Panic got the idea for the scene from an old play she read in High School.) [spoiler=Bio]Born in Edo era Japan he was taught the way of the sword since the day he could walk. Haku was destined to become a Samurai.Not the greatest swordsman, nor the most physically powerful boy in his clan, in truth it could be said that Haku was a frail boy. But as his father, and those who saw him train said. "He has a spirit harder than the most durable steel." It was this determination to bring honor to his family that led young Haku on the quest that would end his life. He had heard legend of an unbreakable blade that would grant it's wielder one wish. It was rumoured to have been forged from the beauteous sound of The Great Composer's music. Haku ventured far and wide to find this blade. And one day after 20 years of searching he found the legendary Blade Of Susano'o. However, upon his return to Japan he discovered that his clan had met it's end at the hands of rival samurai. It was then that he made his wish. He wanted his clan to live on. Somehow, Someway, The blade granted his wish and Haku's spirit transcended his body. Haku had become immortal. Quite a while later we come to Jessica Moreno. Born of her father Jessup Moreno and her mother Karen Elwood. She was taught from the day she first learned to sass off to her mom that "If anyone ever disrespects you like you just disrespected me. Belt em' one in the face!" And this was a principle she took with her for the rest of her life. She had a hairtrigger temper and was quick to pull knives on other students in high school for giving her crap. This led to her being transferred all over schools in the southern U.S. and to Juvy once or twice. It was during her 2nd stay in juvenile hall that she met Haku. Haku had been wandering the breadth of the U.S. in search of a new host. It was there he met a soul whose life was in severe need of balance. Upon revealing himself to be a ghost Jessica screamed and hollered so loudly that every glass object in a mile radius shattered. This earned her the permanent nickname "Panic" The two of them were inseparable. Panic took a while to realize Haku was more than a "Creepy ghost guy." Haku was a man of few words. And Panic liked that about him. He was so unlike noisy obnoxious guys she ran into at school and in town. Haku was filled with a sense of warmth that radiated from Jessica. She reminded him of his ambitious, headstrong and confident attitude he had in youth. Furthermore they discovered, upon awakening one day. That they could switch bodies. They had no idea how this worked themselves but to them it was simply a matter of one allowing the other to become the "Dominant" body and they would switch in a flash of light. They learned quickly to use this to their advantage and took up a job as a vigilante team. It was Jessica's idea...Haku insisted she study and get through her 1st year of college. But then she said it was her choice. After all. She was the one who was alive.[/spoiler] [b]Techniques/Spells/Etc.[/b]:While in the process of switching bodies the two of them can combine any of their two weapons. An example being Panic's "Big Daddy" with Haku's Kusarigama once yielded the result of a high powered, pump-action, Scythe grappling hook. Panic's gloves are quite interesting in the sense that they actually make her punches weaker. She feels a need to hold back the lion's share of her hitting strength unless she's really serious about her opponent. Her punches at their unhindered full power can stop a truck going 40 miles per hour. [b]Other Interesting Facts:[/b] Haku has a decided love for flowers and enjoys collecting them. He also enjoys Shogi. (though he's not much good at it) Panic doesn't particularly like the name Jessica. She only lets people she considers friends call her by her real name without getting hit. She also enjoys whiskey, bar fights, barbecue and rock & roll. She and Haku also share an allergy to cats. [b]Theme[/b]: Don't know of any songs about people with Samurai Ghosts living inside them...or that many about split personas...or hell even about a Samurai teaming up with a Gunslinger chick...if you find any let me know. inb4HotandCold. I friggin hate Katy Perry [spoiler=RPsample]She walked about town with an air of confidence. She had just gotten word of a criminal who had escaped and needed to be taken down. He was armed, dangerous, and clever enough to evade the police. Just like she liked her men. "I feel like this is gonna be a good one Haku!" [i]Just remember to switch with me if things get bad Jess[/i] "Now don't you worry your pretty little head. I can take this guy." Panic said smiling as a transparent Haku floated behind her. It was then that a man crossed her path. He looked either like he had a serious mission to fulfill...or he was just emo. Either way she approached him. "Howdy! Don't suppose ya mind tellin me what that look you got about you is all about?" The man didn't bother speaking to her. And she could swear she heard him mutter something along the lines of "troublesome girl" as he walked away. Haku saw what was coming and very unsuccessfully tried talking Panic down. She produced her mp5 from it's holster and opened fire. "NEXT TIME A GIRL ASKS YA SOMETHIN IT'D BE POLITE TO ANSWER HER YA G*DDAMN PRICK!!!" She shouted as she continued to hail him with bulletfire as he ran off. Haku sighed deeply. [i]Could i please take over for a few minutes. I feel as though you may have brought the police down on yourself. I'll be your cover till things die down...again[/i] She agreed and with a sweet smile on her face the two of them swapped places. Haku as the standing body. And Panic the transparent spirit that only Haku could see.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 You know i didn't know winchester is a transdimensional company. Interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 [quote name='Nexev the Supreme Party' timestamp='1311708767' post='5389114'] You know i didn't know winchester is a transdimensional company. Interesting. [/quote] Silly Nexie Winchester, Like Smith and Wesson, is so amazing that the brand name alone allows for interdimensional travel. And therefore, inclusion in about each and every RP I'm in. The same also goes for the United States of America :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 Except that one of your characters is from japan which does not. The funny thing about this is that while you seem to think it takes place in the "real world" your character can stop a truck. Which makes me think your under the opinion this is a comic book. well i will do a play-by-play like... now. [quote name='Taisen Lagann' timestamp='1311708393' post='5389098'] [b]Name[/b]:Haku Shirosaki/Jessica "Panic" Moreno [b]What happened to pain? I miss pain, he was zany.[/b] [b]Alias/Title[/b]: The Calm Sea and Raging Wind [b]Yes, clearly while in juvy someone looked at her and was like, you know what she is like, wind. we should call her windy. I think instead they should have called the two Casper and "Aunt Flo" in cause your wondering Aunt Flo is a reference to pms. it was in south park so you know it's hillarious.[/b] [b]Age[/b]: 19 [b]Gender[/b]:Haku is male, Panic is female [spoiler=Appearances]Haku is about 5'7" with a head of long, silky black hair, His facial features give him off as Asian in descent. Powerfully built with calculating black eyes that mirror his cold demeanor. He wears white Kendo robes while he is in control and sports sandals and clean, white socks. [b]SAMURAI HIPSTER GO![/b]He keeps his hair neat and tidy to the point where you wouldn't think of him as someone who sees alot of combat. On the back of his left hand the Japanese characters for "White" are tattooed. Panic on the other hand enjoys sporting very short-cut denim shorts, A bright blue tank-top and black, fingerless gloves with silver spikes on the knuckles. She tends to wear a cowboy hat over her short-cut gorgeous blonde hair. She has full pink lips and luscious green eyes that show no hesitation. This is true with friends, men, and her gun which she keeps in a brown holster that she wears on her side. On the back of her right hand, beneath the glove the word "Black" is tattooed. [b]the demin proves she is a rebel... a rebel of cowboy stereotypes everywhere. Or something the f*** i care.[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=Personalities]Panic is a definite hothead with a "take no prisoners" attitude on life. While this can make her a fun person to be around. This also applies to her temper. [b][/b]The smallest remark can set her off on either a cursing streak or an attempt on some poor fools life. [b]Meaning of course the "can be fun" is completly hypothetical as you must spend all time you could be having fun to make sure you don't die. You know like abusive family menbers. WHAT CAN BE MORE FUN THEN THAT? Nothing i tell you. Everyone loves fearing for their lives.[/b] She charges into her problems without thinking, however in the heat of battle she shows time and time again that she is a brilliant and capable strategist. [b]So she does not plan until AFTER planning becomes irrelevant. Clearly we are dealing with a incredibly calculating mind.[/b] Haku is almost her complete opposite. He doesn't like letting alot of people in on what he is thinking. He doesn't usually speak unless spoken to. [b]Probbaly because you can't hear ghosts anyway[/b] And when he does speak it is in a very polite and dignified manner. He values honor above all else and feels a sense of regret for not being there to help defend his family. [/spoiler] [b]Species[/b]:Although Haku happens to be the spirit of a thousand year old samurai inhabiting the body of a 19 year old human girl...well the body is Human. [b]good thing pedo is not a species then.[/b] [b]Instrument[/b]: Didgeridoo [spoiler=Weapons]Haku and Panic both have very different tastes when it comes to weaponry. Haku uses a Kusarigama (Two hand scythes linked together by a long chain) [b]I could say something witty but.... kusarigama's don't work that way. THIS IS a kusawhatever. [img]http://www.karatemart.com/images/products/main/ninja-kusari-gama.jpg[/img] notice the second scythe? that's cause it's not their, they use a weight. the tossing a scythe at people is not nearly as effective as you might think from whatever anime you got this from. Probbaly bleach. This also raises the question of where they came from, were they also ghosts?[/b] as well as a 6 foot long enchanted Katana known as the "Blade Of Susano'o" whose legendary steel is said to be indestructible. [b]Yes surely their is no greater weapon that can be wielded by man then the sword taller then oneself, it is just so easy to wield.[/b] Panic enjoys using an MP5 Submachinegun when she feels like a target isn't scared enough of her.[b]and the german submachine gun exists... how again?[/b] And when she's not using her rapidfire weaponry she is using an 1897 Winchester Shotgun left to her by her dad. [b]Clearly her father thought it was best to give her child extremly dangerous weapons, especially when she has been shown to have as much self control as a karkate movie villian.[/b] She lovingly dubbed the Shotgun "Big Daddy". She also uses a Trench Knife when she has to fight close range. This too she lovingly named "The Emasculator" after a rather sadistic move she pulled on a man who tried to make a pass at her in a noisy bar in Houston.[b]it's funny you see it's funny because removing genitals is clearly just punishment for being a flirt. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4JA4EPRbWhQ[/b] [b]Naturally possesing dangerous weaponry including machine guns given her record means she is also inable of actually going into the public or she'd get arrested. You know cause mutalation is a felony.[/b][/spoiler] [b]Chord[/b]:Upon sounding the Didgeridoo the effect varies depending which persona is dominant at the moment. Haku using the Didgeridoo will summon up a could of extremely thick fog that conceals his movements to his enemy. This Fog cloud moves on Haku's command and he is completely able to manipulate it. Panic playing the Didgeridoo will generate explosive waves of sound that can severely damage opponents. [b]cone, shockwave, or blast?[/b] [b]Leitmotif[/b]: "Haku&Panic's Bullet Sakura Scene." [b]I think you forgot to add spell card somewhere there.[/b]Haku enters the scene calling in his cloud of fog. Much to the surprise of his enemy however it is Panic that is shooting bullets at her foe through the blanket of fog. Back to Haku who is causing the bullets not to strike the enemy, but rather to encircle him, via the manipulation of the air around the bullets. [b]a power he does not have. i see no arrows on his forhead and trust me, the wind force required to redirect a bullet makes this redundent. Just throw some sand in the air and you can rip his flesh from his bones. But who am i to question LEEROY PANICS, STRATEGIST OF THE CENTURY[/b] The enemy realizes there is no escape as he is now trapped in a whirlwind of bullets just inches from his face. Panic and Haku both tell the enemy that the scene is about to crescendo. And then the bullets strike the enemy from every thinkable angle. [b]Clearly this is not a autokill in the slightest i mean there is the no esca.... wait no, nevermind, i lied.[/b]All this while Haku and Panic recite romantic dialog to one another. (Panic got the idea for the scene from an old play she read in High School.) [b]Yes nothing is more romantic then forcing your foes into a magical iron maiden.[/b] [spoiler=Bio]Born in Edo era Japan [b]which does not exist[/b] he was taught the way of the sword since the day he could walk. Haku was destined to become a Samurai.[b]who do not exist[/b] Not the greatest swordsman [b]cause you know he was only DESTINED to be one.[/b], nor the most physically powerful boy in his clan, in truth it could be said that Haku was a frail boy. But as his father, and those who saw him train said. "He has a spirit harder than the most durable steel." [b]Diamond however.... yeah the gems got him beat.[/b] It was this determination to bring honor to his family that led young Haku on the quest that would end his life. He had heard legend of an unbreakable blade that would grant it's wielder one wish. [b]what kinda idiot chooses a sword to grant wishes?[/b] It was rumoured to have been forged from the beauteous sound of The Great Composer's music. [b]it's great cause it was made by GOD... just like everything else.... LOOK AT THAT ROCK! IT'S SO SHINY, CLEARLY IT HAS THE POWER OF GOD HIMSELF AS WELL! AND THAT RAINBOW![/b] Haku ventured far and wide to find this blade. And one day after 20 years of searching he found the legendary Blade Of Susano'o. However, upon his return to Japan [b]Clearly a weapon with a japanese name would NEEEEEEEEEEEEVER be found in JAPAN![/b] he discovered that his clan had met it's end at the hands of rival samurai. [b]This samurai went down in history as a badass. I mean damn an entire clan, whichever daminyo (Who also don't exist) picked him was one smart nonexistant bastard.[/b] It was then that he made his wish. He wanted his clan to live on. Somehow, Someway, The blade granted his wish and Haku's spirit transcended his body. Haku had become immortal. [b]by being a ghost making his clan disappear from history. Which would have been a issue had it existed[/b] Quite a while later we come to Jessica Moreno. Born of her father Jessup Moreno and her mother Karen Elwood. She was taught from the day she first learned to sass off to her mom that "If anyone ever disrespects you like you just disrespected me. Belt em' one in the face!" And this was a principle she took with her for the rest of her life. [b]However she missed the implication that if she disrespects people like... she just disrespected people she should get banged on the head.[/b]She had a hairtrigger temper and was quick to pull knives on other students in high school for giving her crap. This led to her being transferred all over schools in the southern U.S. and to Juvy once or twice. [b]Only once or twice? Where i come from you pull a knife and that's it, your out of school and straight to trial.[/b] It was during her 2nd stay in juvenile hall that she met Haku. Haku had been wandering the breadth of the U.S. [b]which does not exist[/b] in search of a new host. [b]Because clearly his homeland would have made to much sense[/b]It was there he met a soul whose life was in severe need of balance. Upon revealing himself to be a ghost Jessica screamed and hollered so loudly that every glass object in a mile radius shattered. [b]pitch shatters glass, not volume.[/b] This earned her the permanent nickname "Panic" [b]not banshee? or crazy? or Annoying b****? just panic, well, uncreative crowd.[/b] The two of them were inseparable. [b]clearly making her scream like a little girl was the start of a beutiful friendship.[/b] Panic took a while to realize Haku was more than a "Creepy ghost guy." Haku was a man of few words. And Panic liked that about him. He was so unlike noisy obnoxious guys she ran into at school and in town. [b]or the noisy, obnoxious, and extremely dangerous girl she is?[/b] Haku was filled with a sense of warmth that radiated from Jessica. [b]yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah not creepy at all.[/b] She reminded him of his ambitious, headstrong and confident attitude he had in youth. [b][/b] Furthermore they discovered, upon awakening one day. That they could switch bodies. They had no idea how this worked [img]http://fuckinmagnets.com/magnets/456px-Stones_of_atraction.jpg[/img] themselves but to them it was simply a matter of one allowing the other to become the "Dominant" body and they would switch in a flash of light. They learned quickly to use this to their advantage and took up a job as a vigilante team. [b]Clearly the superpowerful mutilating girl who is a danger to anyone she remotly does not like is a great choice to allow her to decide what defines "justice"[/b] It was Jessica's idea...Haku insisted she study and get through her 1st year of college.[b]....how did she graduate? she would have been expelled from just about every school at this point.[/b] But then she said it was her choice. After all. She was the one who was alive.[/spoiler] [b]Techniques/Spells/Etc.[/b]:While in the process of switching bodies the two of them can combine any of their two weapons. An example being Panic's "Big Daddy" with Haku's Kusarigama once yielded the result of a high powered, pump-action, Scythe grappling hook. [b]however switching bodies itslef is not one of their powers so this is redundant.[/b] Panic's gloves are quite interesting in the sense that they actually make her punches weaker. [b]one day you will learn that copying characters from animes do not actually make her more cool.[/b] She feels a need to hold back the lion's share of her hitting strength unless she's really serious about her opponent. [b]you know, because she is using a combat knife[/b] Her punches at their unhindered full power can stop a truck going 40 miles per hour. [b]and how is miss she hulk so strong?[/b] [b]Other Interesting Facts:[/b] Haku has a decided love for flowers and enjoys collecting them. [b]probbaly on his grave site since dead people can't touch flowers cause flowers are real.[/b] He also enjoys Shogi. (though he's not much good at it) Panic doesn't particularly like the name Jessica. She only lets people she considers friends call her by her real name without getting hit. [b]which of course given her strength is a death sentence and since no one would have gotten that memo on the first school or so she is also a murderer, and better yet since being repentent of any crimes is not on her persnallity we have to assume she is not. you know i was going to make this great villian but even if i wasn't leaving you already made a more evil character then i could.[/b] She also enjoys whiskey, [b]underage drinking, another crime, it's a really good thing she has super powers or she would be on death row by now. [/b] bar fights, barbecue and rock & roll. She and Haku also share an allergy to cats. [b]Theme[/b]: Don't know of any songs about people with Samurai Ghosts living inside them...or that many about split personas...or hell even about a Samurai teaming up with a Gunslinger chick...if you find any let me know. inb4HotandCold. I friggin hate Katy Perry http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P03pqoBf-Xg [spoiler=RPsample]She walked about town with an air of confidence. She had just gotten word of a criminal who had escaped and needed to be taken down. He was armed, dangerous, and clever enough to evade the police. [b]if it turns out that she's the person mentioned it would be a great plot twist[/b] Just like she liked her men. "I feel like this is gonna be a good one Haku!" [i]Just remember to switch with me if things get bad Jess[/i] "Now don't you worry your pretty little head. I can take this guy." [b]not like her punches can't one shot people after all.[/b]Panic said smiling as a transparent Haku floated behind her. It was then that a man crossed her path. He looked either like he had a serious mission to fulfill...or he was just emo. [b]cause thouse are always identical looking[/b] Either way she approached him. "Howdy! Don't suppose ya mind tellin me what that look you got about you is all about?" The man didn't bother speaking to her. And she could swear she heard him mutter something along the lines of "troublesome girl" as he walked away. Haku saw what was coming and very unsuccessfully tried talking Panic down. She produced her mp5 from it's holster and opened fire. "NEXT TIME A GIRL ASKS YA SOMETHIN IT'D BE POLITE TO ANSWER HER YA G*DDAMN PRICK!!!" [b]or of course just shoot her first as that is far safer.[/b] She shouted as she continued to hail him with bulletfire as he ran off. Haku sighed deeply. [i]Could i please take over for a few minutes. I feel as though you may [b]MAY? THIER IS ONLY A POSSIBLITY THAT THE POLICE THINKS SHE IS A DANGEROUS CRIMINAL? NO DUDE, IT'S WAY TO LATE FOR THAT, I MEAN THE PUNISHER HAS MORE MORALS THEN SHE DOES.[/b] have brought the police down on yourself. I'll be your cover till things die down...again[/i] She agreed and with a sweet smile on her face the two of them swapped places. Haku as the standing body. And Panic the transparent spirit that only Haku could see. [b]and she failed to catch the unarmed criminal, master strategy at work ladies and gentleman[/b][/spoiler] [/quote] yeah i am going to have to say... denied. for like ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 [quote name='Nexev the Supreme Party' timestamp='1311714258' post='5389334'] Except that one of your characters is from japan which does not. The funny thing about this is that while you seem to think it takes place in the "real world" your character can stop a truck. Which makes me think your under the opinion this is a comic book. well i will do a play-by-play like... now. yeah i am going to have to say... denied. for like ever. [/quote] Nex. The hell are you talking about me ripping an anime character? also. >implying i meant for Panic to be liked. She's a gigantic crazy b*tch and I designed her that way. Haku's choice of possessing her is his attempt at balancing her out. It's kinda how a few good stories work. Immature Punk goes into adventure> Character Development > Mature Hero comes out. It's kinda how characterization happens. I'm sorry i didn't make my character little miss perfect and her samurai manservant who serves no purpose but to stand there and look nice. >I said[b] IN BATTLE[/b] she is a brilliant strategist. Pretty much everywhere else she never THINKS about what she does next. >For the record. Shockwave >It was never even IMPLIED in the description of the RP that these people were normal. It's a quest for Godhood for Pete's sake! How the living hell am i supposed to know the standard for power? You've got Lucas who can drop dudes 4X his size PLUS he's got magic, Kazuya's got all kinds of sh*t up his sleeve. How the hell are you gonna stand there and tell me that all of Three powers. One of which involves her getting WEAKER (changing into Haku) is OP? >For the record THIS [img]http://images.wikia.com/souleater/images/b/ba/Tsubaki_-_Kusarigama.png[/img] was also a Kusarigama if anyone recalls. So in conclusion your Play By Play gets a 2/5 kthx But i will make an attempt at making the scenario for the Bullet Sakura scene seem a little more statistical Forgive me for thinking i could make it sound a bit more interesting than "an attack from all directions coming from a cloud of fog herpaderp" And PS regarding your comment on Haku's sword. Why don't you ask Sephiroth how wielding a blade taller than him worked out? Mr.Most Popular villain in Final Fantasy, Mr.Oneshot DEATH in KH, But hey. You're the co-leader. You know everything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 [quote name='Taisen Lagann' timestamp='1311717413' post='5389508'] Nex. The hell are you talking about me ripping an anime character? [b]Lets see super strong character who uses magical clothing to weaken herself.[/b] [img]http://images.wikia.com/bleach/en/images/6/6d/Kenpachi_Zaraki.jpg[/img] [b]Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm no i can't put my finger on it.[/b] also. >implying i meant for Panic to be liked. She's a gigantic crazy b*tch and I designed her that way. [b]Their is a huge difference between unlikable and her. See unlikable characters are people who dislike humanity tend to be quick with insults but still they have some redeeming qualities, maybe they put themself above everyone else because of a bad history, maybe they are psycho b****es because they are so easily offended that they actually do think what they did was eye for an eye, maybe they are just completly misguided, maybe they have bad people skills. Thier is usually something their that makes the character understandable and thus somewhat understandable if not likeable. However you can't like someone who is a unrepentent murderer, mutilater and all around criminal and still has the gall to call herself a hero. A character stops being anyway redeemable when EVERYSINGLE POSSIBLE SIDE has a reason to want her dead. The cops will want her dead because well, she is a criminal. The bad guys want her dead cause she is killing their allies. and her friends.... well i can't imagine they exist. At all. their is venom and their is carnage. Guess which one she is?[/b]Haku's choice of possessing her is his attempt at balancing her out. [b]it's a f***ing retarded way because they didn't even know they could switch bodies and even so what balance is their by making the homocidal maniac more powerful?[/b] It's kinda how a few good stories work. Immature Punk goes into adventure> Character Development > Mature Hero comes out. [b]but see, she is beyooooooond immature, she is evil. pure f***ing evil. she thinks she is justified in killing random people who say stuff she doesn't like because... well it's her. The belief that rules somehow don't apply to you in this way is what defines evil. Doctor Doom is nicer then her. and guess what doom is? protip: not a hero.[/b] It's kinda how characterization happens. I'm sorry i didn't make my character little miss perfect and her samurai manservant who serves no purpose but to stand there and look nice. [b]actually here is the punchline. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/JerkSue You did.[/b] >I said[b] IN BATTLE[/b] she is a brilliant strategist. Pretty much everywhere else she never THINKS about what she does next. [b]well it's not a strategy outside a battle, and no running into battle is not brilliant, the one time we see her in combat she pretty much LOSSES against a unarmed foe. if she fails her objective the battle is a loss don't even try to argue that.[/b] >For the record. Shockwave [b]so unblockable attack with massive damage output with no definitive range. how balanced.[/b] >It was never even IMPLIED in the description of the RP that these people were normal. It's a quest for Godhood for Pete's sake! [b]which directly states none of them are gods[/b] How the living hell am i supposed to know the standard for power? [b][b]the other apps? if you notice one with super strength let me know[/b][/b] You've got Lucas who can drop duded 4X his size PLUS he's got magic, [b]tackling people is easy, haven;t you seen judo? you can lift like anyone with the right skill.[/b] Kazuya's got all kinds of sh*t up his sleeve. [b]eh none of it is really that powerful though, reading magic? it's a utility not a combat, if he can use all those random not very combat spells to become really strong that's just clever character use[/b] How the hell are you gonna stand there and tell me that all of Three powers. One of which involves her getting WEAKER (changing into Haku) is OP? [b]watch. her punches can crumple metal and is pretty much fatal her letitmotif is a unblockable killshot she has higher tech weaponry then every other character so far. and of course she gets to override the law. sooooo yeah op. [/b] >For the record THIS [img]http://images.wikia.com/souleater/images/b/ba/Tsubaki_-_Kusarigama.png[/img] was also a Kusarigama if anyone recalls. [b]animes are not history. even if you don't trust me check wikipedia.[/b] So in conclusin [b]unfortunatly you have yet to explain why she can use nonexistant countries and artifacts so even if i decided your right on everything here, which your not, your STILL denied.[/b] Nex your Play by play reviewing skill gets a 2/5 kthx So in conclusion your Play By Play gets a 2/5 kthx [b]kay bye[/b] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 Okay you two knock it off. Nexev ripping on Taisen's work isn't going to get anybody anywhere. Taisen, just ignore him and please redo the application and I will personally have a look at it. Okay? There. Settled. Done B| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1311720159' post='5389663'] Okay you two knock it off. Nexev ripping on Taisen's work isn't going to get anybody anywhere. Taisen, just ignore him and please redo the application and I will personally have a look at it. Okay? There. Settled. Done B| [/quote] I'm not ripping i am simply pointing out what's wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 In a snippy and condecending attitude. I know what you are doing, but you are saying it in the wrong way. So please go easy and not do so much ripping on people's applications. And before I forget, DMG I will put you in the reserved spot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1311720985' post='5389707'] In a snippy and condecending attitude. I know what you are doing, but you are saying it in the wrong way. So please go easy and not do so much ripping on people's applications. And before I forget, DMG I will put you in the reserved spot. [/quote] Fine next one will try to focus on negative less. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 Thank you man |^^| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 Name:Quackers Alias/Title:The Duck Age:10 Gender: Male [spoiler=Appearance][img]http://images.nationalgeographic.com/wpf/media-live/photos/000/006/cache/mallard-duck_619_600x450.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Personality]Quackers is a man of simple thought patterns. If Quackers sees crackers then he will try to eat the crackers. It makes little difference to Quackers what stands between him and his crackers. Quackers is also oblivious to social norms, the danger present in weapons and warfare, and many other things that most humans understand. Quackers only ever has two things on his mind really. Crackers, and how to obtain more crackers. This is what drove him to seek the power of the Composer. For with that power he could have all the crackers he wants.[/spoiler] Species: A Duck Instrument:Kazoo Weapon(s):His beak and tiny, sharp claws on his webbed feet. Chord:Blowing into his Kazoo allows Quackers to call other ducks to his side. Leitmotif: "Duck Hunt" Quackers calls a massive flock of ducks down on his foe and they begin pecking, scratching and flapping wildly at Quackers' opponent [spoiler=Bio]Quackers was hatched into a family of 4 brothers and 3 sisters. His mom took care of them for the most part as Quacker's father, Sir Quacksalot was never around much. Quackers learned to swim, fly and survive in the world from his mother. But almost as much as his mother Quackers loved crackers, Quackers first discovered crackers walking through a park one day as a duckling. He saw the salty treat being passed out to other ducks by a young human lady who was humming a rather unpleasant sounding tune. Quackers ignored the assault on his ears and made his was to obtain the cracker. Once he took that first bite Quackers' life would change forever. He would make it his mission no his CALLING in life to get as many crackers as he could possibly get.[/spoiler] Techniques/Spells/Etc.:Quackers can fly, he is an excellent swimmer, and he is also capable of letting loose a loud quack to alert people to his presence. Other Interesting Facts:Quackers does not like creatures that eat ducks Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MtN1YnoL46Q [spoiler=RP sample] Quackers The Duck wandered about the streets of an unfamiliar city. People walked all about, towering above him and occasionally tossing him glances and telling him he was cute. As Quackers made his way through the crowd of people, his trusty Kazoo hanging from his neck on a piece of silver thread. Quackers eventually stopped near a very plain looking wooden bench, several people sitting on the bench looked down at him. It was here he would wait patiently for what he had come here to get. As if on cue an elderly woman sitting on the bench reached down to Quackers and gave him a cracker. He happily munched on the cracker until he was satisfied. It was then he began to contemplate his next move. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 *facepalm* Taisen please tell me that was a joke application . . . please please please just state that. Because if you are serious, denied 100 fold Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu Hansung Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 o.O Really, Taisen? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 @Jake Ok ok...just wanted to see if Mr.Welch's list was accurate...(it was...turns out you CAN'T play a Duck in an RPG) Imma just get to re-doing Panic and Haku's app. But can i get some context as to what this world is? A list of nations maybe? Perhaps cultures or what time period we would be in? It's all left a little vague and that gives me the elbow room i DON'T need if I'm gonna make an app that makes sense and extensively tells where my characters come from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 Look a while back and Nexev explained the world for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElÆ’ie Posted July 28, 2011 Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 I think I'm going to have to pull out.. A character for this just isn't coming to me.. Sorry guys.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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