Sotos Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 [img]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/194/7/e/dawn_by_seths49-d3ntjat.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 Clouds and sun can use work. I however like the mountains. And what happened to vfx? I couldn't load the page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 Please do not bother posting below 1/2 done wips. We can't really help you if you haven't done anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [quote name='So Legit You Quit' timestamp='1310614934' post='5353391'] Clouds and sun can use work. I however like the mountains. And what happened to vfx? I couldn't load the page. [/quote] [font="'Comic Sans MS"][color="#00ff00"]Thanks ( ), and I don't know, vfx works for me...what's your name there again?[/color][/font] [quote name='CAVEMAN.' timestamp='1310620724' post='5353551'] Please do not bother posting below 1/2 done wips. We can't really help you if you haven't done anything. [/quote] [font="'Comic Sans MS"][color="#00ff00"]Why not? I mean, I'm merely a beginner in designing and I could use any advice I could get. For example, catman told me to work on the sun and mountains. I kinda knew that already, but there isn't such thing as "bad advice". Plus, someone could help me more, with the lighting etc...[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 No no you're not getting my point. If its a wip it means you're still working on it. So telling you "Add more dabs on the mountain" or something else wouldn't be bright. Since its not half finished. But if you insist I'll help. Focus mostly on having multiple tones as a base structure for the mountains. Then build up by texturizing and making rocky objects on it. The sun shouldn't be that big. It should be small and white. If its sunset then the sky will have to be orange. If its dawn then it should be darker but never as yellow as this (only in some cases). And remember to project it high and not below the mountains, otherwise you'll have to change a lot of stuff. The clouds should be bigger. Taking most of the background. And for a realistic look add long tails instead of fluffy and curly (this will only work with large clouds). Then remember to dab it from light dark grey to white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [font="'Comic Sans MS"][color="#00ff00"]Oh. I see your point, you're right, but still, you helped me now, I hadn't thought about larger and more clouds...The sun is just to provide a source for the lighting, I'll work on it...You see? By commenting on a wip, you direct me somewhere to finish it...Thanks [/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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