Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Ok, this is my second set of cards. I promise it won't be as long as the first one. (if you would like to see the first one, here is the link: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/253051-strike-of-the-heavens/) Wind of Salvation revolves around the various birds that you might find in nature. I didn't really have a backstory making these cards, like I did with my last set, but nevertheless, I hope you all enjoy. CnC appreciated. [spoiler='Monsters'][img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/7997/374045z.jpg[/img] [img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6259/374045y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/9296/374045ed.jpg[/img] [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/1659/374045j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/3070/374045n.jpg[/img] [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/2667/374045k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/7426/374045a.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Spells/Traps'][img]http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/3782/374045g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/1115/374045r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/825/374045s.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Synchro Monsters'][img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/1065/374045d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8093/374045.jpg[/img] [img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/1115/374045r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/8093/374045.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Hmm, the pictures look a bit compressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 [u]OCG[/u] = [b]Perfect[/b] [i]Didn't see any errors here[/i] [u]Images[/u] = [b]Good[/b] [i]This part isn't too important, but could be better if you wanted[/i] [u]Comments[/u]: [u][b](1)[/b][/u] ... was it intended that [b]Crow Leaf - Eagle Edge's[/b] effect can be activated during [i][u]either[/u][/i] players Battle Phase?... giving him 500 [b]ATK[/b] per turn?... ... pretty... cool... o_O ... ... very powerful card too then... [u][b](1)[/b][/u] ... i have to say... ... [b]Final Song[/b] is [u]OP[/u] if not [u]broken[/u]... ... and i know you never intended on that... but with it you can easily pull an OTK, if not a comeback... [u][i]and[/i][/u] your monsters get to [u][i]come back[/i][/u]... ... i dont know how you're gonna fix it... but i think it [u]could[/u] be fixed to be more reasonable... [u][b](1)[/b][/u] ... damn... dude... ... nice monsters... everything is great!... man... it even has a theme going on... ... wow... i'm... so impress... xP ... throw in [b]DNA Sugery[/b] in this deck and your monsters will be untouchable!... [u][b]Overall Rating[/b][/u]: [b]9.5/10[/b] --- or --- [b]+3.5[/b] out of +4 for OCG & Pictures [b]+4[/b] out of +4 for "having a theme" (woot!) [b]+2[/b] out of +2 for "attempt to reaching perfection" [b]-0[/b] out of -2 for "having too many broken cards" ... is this set finished?... i'd like to see the finished set if its not... =J Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 Well, lvl1hero, there were OCG errors. You mixed up Caps and mins. It isn't Hand, it's hand. Same with monsters, face up / down. Otherwise, not bad. so 9/10 would be more accurate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 [quote name='lvl1hero' timestamp='1310580815' post='5351747'] [u][b](1)[/b][/u] ... was it intended that [b]Crow Leaf - Eagle Edge's[/b] effect can be activated during [i][u]either[/u][/i] players Battle Phase? Actually, I didn't specify. Nice eye on that one. It really should only be activated during YOUR Battle Phase. I will fix that. [/quote] [quote]You mixed up Caps and mins. It isn't Hand, it's hand. Same with monsters, face up / down.[/quote] Yes. I realized that now after looking at T.G. Monsters. Thank you for spotting my errors, Ice. [quote]... damn... dude... ... nice monsters... everything is great!... man... it even has a theme going on... ... wow... i'm... so impress... xP ... throw in DNA Sugery in this deck and your monsters will be untouchable!...[/quote] I really only made this to kill time. I've just been really bored lately. lol But I also tried to make these monsters work with other types/archetypes, too. The goal I had in mind was to make these monsters work well with "Blackwings". That's really the only thing I was looking for. [quote]... is this set finished?...[/quote] That's a negative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 No problem, I try my best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 [quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1310582098' post='5351790'] Well, lvl1hero, there were OCG errors. You mixed up Caps and mins. It isn't Hand, it's hand. Same with monsters, face up / down. Otherwise, not bad. so 9/10 would be more accurate. [/quote] ... i see... mybad guess i was reading too fast and overlooked them... ... by the way your "Don't Look" spoiler was tight... xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 The pics are really cool, but cramped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 Thanks lvl1hero, I do try! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 [quote name='Varion' timestamp='1310455602' post='5347384'] Hmm, the pictures look a bit compressed. [/quote] [quote name='Varion' timestamp='1310589454' post='5352196'] The pics are really cool, but cramped. [/quote] I don't get it. I think the pictures are fine from where I am standing. The only real compressed one to me is "Awakening to Song" (that pic was really hard to get right), but other than that, they all seem fine... And it wouldn't make any sense to try and grow the pictures back up, because that's only going to make things worse. And compressing them doesn't help, since, apparently, that's the problem. Nevertheless, I do encourage the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 Varion, rate the cards, not just the pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 UPDATED: Added three new Spells/Traps to the set. Will be working on the monsters soon. I might have to update my old set before i get around to doing that though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 I found enjoyed them, dnt scale OCG but overall I find most of the cards pretty realistic and useable, of course with the exception of Final Song, it's like bringing an nuke to a stick fight, or sephiroth to a strugge battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [quote name='Deschwitat1170' timestamp='1310926667' post='5363352'] I found enjoyed them, dnt scale OCG but overall I find most of the cards pretty realistic and useable, of course with the exception of Final Song, it's like bringing an nuke to a stick fight, or sephiroth to a strugge battle. [/quote] I actually updated Final Song quite a while ago, but I've never gotten around to actually posting it on the forum. It's a bit more bearable now (hopefully to all of you). I still want to see Sephiroth vs. Bruce Lee... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 UPDATED: Added 5 new Effect monsters and 2 Synchro Monsters called the "Daedalus Beaest" Monsters. These monsters gain beneficial effects whenever there is a "Daedalus Warrior" monster on the field. Also will add the Trap Card later on today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 LOL! Worgen is from WOW! OM EFF-in G!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 [quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1311023971' post='5367101'] LOL! Worgen is from WOW! OM EFF-in G!!! [/quote] Anything else you wanna point out? And besides, it's not like these cards are ever going to be used for anything. I just post them to have a good time. I actually had an old picture that would probably suit better and that wasn't copied from a massive fan-base, but I lost it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 ... how come you combined your "[b]Crow Leaf[/b]" set with your "[b]Daedalus[/b]" set?... ... by the way... ... [b]Final Song[/b] is [u]MUCH[/u] better now... =j Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 Bump, probably the last one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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