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[Finished]Exceed/Xyz Contest!


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I am back! This week we finally get exceed (if Xyz if you prefer) monsters! Lets celabrate by making some!


Rules
1: All general YCM rules apply.
2: Serious card submissions.
3: Written cards accepted.
4: I prefer cards PMed to me rather then posted here. When contest ends I will post all entries.
5: 3 qualities I score based upon- creativity, balance, and playability.

Entry Fee = 1 point.

Prizes
1st: 20 points + 2 reps.
2nd: 10 point + 1 reps.
3rd: 5 points.

Deadline = Monday July 18th.

Task
Send me an exceed/Xyz monster you made. Be sure to review all the rules concerning them and all of the current ones out in the japanese card game so you don't make a duplicate. Also you are allowed to send in up to 3 extra support cards that can be of any card type as long as they support the Exceed/Xyz entry.

HAVE FUN!
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I lack the 'Shop. Time for the real man's/woman's/robot's method: the written card!

ENTRY:

GADGINEER
[u][b]oooo[/b]____EARTH[/u]
Machine/Xyz/Effect

2 Level 4 Machine-Type monsters

If this card attacks, any effects of the attack target that activate or apply on the field are negated until the End Phase. During either player's turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card to select 1 monster in each player's Graveyard and return them to the Deck.
2200/1300

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Ok, here's my entry

[Spoiler=Entry]Galactic Keeper, Sinsaw | Ranks: 4
LIGHT / Xyz / Spellcaster / Effect
ATK: 1200 | DEF: 2400

Lore:
2 Level 4 monsters
This card is treated as a Level 4 Monster. Once per either player's turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and put 1 Galactic Counter on 1 face-up monster on the field. When this card leaves the field, you can select all monster on the field with a Galactic Counter(s) and attach them as Xyz Material(s) to a face-up Xyz Monster on the field.[/spoiler]

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Jurrac Quetzalos
Rank 7
FIRE/Dinosaur/Xyz/Effect
2500 ATK/2000 DEF
2 Level 4 'Jurrac' Monsters
When this monster is Xyz Summoned, all oher cards on the field are sent from the field to the hand. You can Detach 1 Xyz Material monster to increase this cards ATK by 500. Or Detach 1 Xyz Material monster to special summon a Level 4 or Lower 'Jurrac' monster from your Graveyard.

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my contest entry

Letter X : Nor'Krunk Of The 8 Shadow Fiends

rank 4

DARK

Fiend Type

Xyz Monster

ATK 3200

DEF 3200

3 Level 4 Monsters

If this card would be removed from the Field or would be effected by a card effect, you can detach 1 Xyz Materail from this card instead. During the End Phase that this card is removed from the Field you can Special Summon this card in Attack Position. If this face up card has no Xyz Material attached, this card ATK and DEF is halved.

[Spoiler= about Letter Monsters ...]

even though the numbers out "number" (i know lame joke/pun) them there 3 times more numbers than letters (100 numbers and there only 26 letters)

the letters have makes up for that with unbelievable power and effects

all letters are xyz (like the numbers) i know go figure ?

all letters requires 3 monsters for xyz summoning

all letters have "letter" first follow by the letter then the name of the monster

example Letter X : Nor'Krunk Of The 8 Shadow Fiends

all letters have Blank'Blank for their name

example Nor'Krunk

i begin this with X because well duh x is so cool right ?

[/Spoiler]

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[quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1311023638' post='5367079']
you do not have to

i know you like my "Letter" monsters best
[/quote]
Your monster's interesting. Its first effect protects it from battle, Spells & Traps (including Counter Traps--it can block Divine Wrath), and monster effects. It has lots of ATK and a [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/D.D._Survivor"]D.D. Survivor[/url]-esque revival effect, except better because you can use it in any Deck. Being a DARK monster, it has lots of support. It comes back with 1600 ATK.

GG, man. GG!

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I'm joining.

[center][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/3634/12082p.jpg[/img]
3 Level 2 monsters
This monster cannot be destroyed by battle while it has Xyz Material monsters. All monsters you control gain 200 Atk X the number of Xyz Material monsters. Remove 1 Xyz Material monster: Decrease opponents monsters attack by 100 Atk X the number of cards in your hand.[/center]

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[quote name='jkkohles' timestamp='1311038311' post='5367712']
I'm joining.

[center][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/3634/12082p.jpg[/img]
3 Level 2 monsters
This monster cannot be destroyed by battle while it has Xyz Material monsters. All monsters you control gain 200 Atk X the number of Xyz Material monsters. Remove 1 Xyz Material monster: Decrease opponents monsters attack by 100 Atk X the number of cards in your hand.[/center]
[/quote]

Um... I think it's too late to join... The contest is pretty much over... :| Sorry.

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There is really no good excuse for taking so long. I'm sorry.

[spoiler=newhat]
GADGINEER
oooo____EARTH
Machine/Xyz/Effect
2 Level 4 Machine-Type monsters
If this card attacks, any effects of the attack target that activate or apply on the field are negated until the End Phase. During either player's turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card to select 1 monster in each player's Graveyard and return them to the Deck.
2200/1300
[/spoiler]
Pretty good and balanced. The effect negation is limited but very useful which is balanced. The detachment seems strange that there is no limit and during ether players turn but does not seem broken at all.

[spoiler=maximate]
Galactic Keeper, Sinsaw | Ranks: 4
LIGHT / Xyz / Spellcaster / Effect
ATK: 1200 | DEF: 2400

Lore:
2 Level 4 monsters
This card is treated as a Level 4 Monster. Once per either player's turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and put 1 Galactic Counter on 1 face-up monster on the field. When this card leaves the field, you can select all monster on the field with a Galactic Counter(s) and attach them as Xyz Material(s) to a face-up Xyz Monster on the field.
[/spoiler]
Very strange. In reality this seems too powerful. It is easy to get this out while you have another exceed (maybe even summoned that turn) and then just add 2 of your opponent's monsters to your other exceed.

[spoiler=DozzerGrez]
Jurrac Quetzalos
Rank 7
FIRE/Dinosaur/Xyz/Effect
2500 ATK/2000 DEF
2 Level 4 'Jurrac' Monsters
When this monster is Xyz Summoned, all oher cards on the field are sent from the field to the hand. You can Detach 1 Xyz Material monster to increase this cards ATK by 500. Or Detach 1 Xyz Material monster to special summon a Level 4 or Lower 'Jurrac' monster from your Graveyard.
[/spoiler]
You mean rank 4??? Bouncing everything already seems very powerful and not very Jurrac-ish. The detach effects are too powerful too really.

[spoiler=Psychid45]
Malefic Leviathan Dragon
DARK/Dragon - Xyz - Effect/Rank 3/?/0
This card cannot be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck, except by removing from play 1 face-up "Number 17: Leviathan Dragon" you control. (This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon.) This card's original ATK is equal to the removed monster's ATK. When this card is Special Summoned, attach to this card the removed monster's Xyz Material Monsters. There can only be 1 face-up "Malefic" monster on the field. Other monsters you control cannot declare an attack. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card to have it gain 500 ATK.
[/spoiler]
Not really. Seems overly complicated. Plus it just doesn't fir the Malefic archtype.

[spoiler=Doom Chaos]
Doom Striker
DARK/Warrior/Xyz/Rank 3
2 Level 3 monsters
If this monster destroys a monster by battle: you can detach 1 Xyz Material toallow this card to attack again. During the End Phase: if this monster has no Xyz Material overlaid on it: Banish it.
2400/1600
[/spoiler]
The first effect is identical to Kachi Kochi Dragon. The rank is lower, the ATK is higher, and it has a self-destruct effect. Despite being similar it is different in enough ways to make it interesting and stand out as a good card.

[spoiler=Herman the German]
[img]http://i56.tinypic.com/10if9t1.jpg[/img]
Letter X : Nor'Krunk Of The 8 Shadow Fiends
3 Level 4 Monsters
If this card would be removed from the Field or would be effected by a card effect, you can detach 1 Xyz Materail from this card instead. During the End Phase that this card is removed from the Field you can Special Summon this card in Attack Position. If this face up card has no Xyz Material attached, this card ATK and DEF is halved.

[img]http://i54.tinypic.com/ibksxf.jpg[/img]
Letter Y : Worsz'Geah
3 Level 4 monsters
Once Per Turn during your or your Opponent's Standby Phase you can reveal 1 Xyz Material on your side of the Field this card Gains ATK and DEF equal to half of the revealed monster's original ATK and Def and that card effect(s) until the End Phase. During your Opponent's Stanby detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. if this card has no Xyz Material attached to this card return it to your Extra Deck.
[/spoiler]
I like the details of the archtype you sent but these things are just way way too powerful.

[spoiler=jkkohles]
[img]http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/4606/12082i.jpg[/img]
3 Level 2 monsters
This monster cannot be destroyed by battle while it has Xyz Material monsters. All monsters you control gain 200 Atk X the number of Xyz Material monsters. Remove 1 Xyz Material monster: Decrease opponents monsters attack by 100 Atk X the number of cards in your hand.
[/spoiler]
Ehh cannot be destroyed by battle is powerful without a drawback. Then the Gachi Gachi Gantetsu effect. Plus a weakening effect that would probably not be used more then once so it stays invincible. Not too great.

[spoiler=Winners]
1: newhat
2: Doom Chaos
3: maximate
[/spoiler]

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