Deep Ice Warwolf

[Birkeland]

[center][img]http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l167/mofubiki/YGO%20-%20Fighting%20Dawn/DeepIceWarwolf.jpg[/img]

[b]Once per turn: You can detach a Xyz Material from this card to target 1 face-up monster on the field; that target loses 1000 ATK and DEF. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent.[/b][/center]

[Not-so-Radiant Arin]

Both of these effects seem pretty generic for the upcoming Xyz Monsters. The only question is getting the two level 6 monsters out on the field at the same time. It almost seems too easy with that Gagaga Magician or whatever it is called which can make itself any level it wants too. If you wanted it to be more realistic and balanced, and I'm not saying that you can't change it to better suit your style, the Xyz Material Monsters would probably be have to be WATER-Attribute. That would make it more balanced and a little harder to Summon.

But with that being said, there aren't many level 6 WATER monsters out right now that can easily Summon themselves to the field. Perhaps if you made more cards contributing to this Xyz Monster, then it might not be that bad, but still...

EDIT: FIRST!!

[MibeR]

Fair enough for me though, keep it this way

Fair enough for me though, keep it this way

[DARKPLANT RISING]

Amazing card design. You're pretty skiled at creating balanced Xyz aren't you?

It has a nice ATK, and also has a reasonable shrinker. It also Pierces. I can see Frognarchs running this if it comes out.

Awesome. Nice, short, and to the point.

[.Nu-13]

When I see a card in RC and think "Oh, I'd run this", it says a lot. Card is awesome, nothing to change IMO

[ragnarok1945]

pic doesn't look suited for WATER attribute

I'm a little unsure if the 1000 atk loss should be permanent or not, I guess it can be fine if it is

so I'll give you 9.5/10