Trevor S Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 This is my first set! Royal Knight archetype [img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5295/444361t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6885/444361a.jpg[/img] [img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/4854/444361c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/6279/444361j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/2/444361s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9648/444361.jpg[/img] [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/9648/444361.jpg[/img] Can't wait to see what you guys think of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 [quote name='Trevor S' timestamp='1310186209' post='5339656'] This is my first set! Royal Knight archetype ... ... ... ... ... ... Can't wait to see what you guys think of them. [/quote] [u]OCG[/u]= [b]Great[/b] [i]Minor OCG errors and grammar errors here and there, and some cards needing clarity (like [b]Royal Knight - Dragon Warrior[/b], [b]Castle's Corridors[/b], [b]Royal Knight - Long Blade[/b], [b]Royal Knight - Flaming Skull[/b] and a few other cards with minor noticeable errors).[/i] [u]Images [/u]= [b]Good[/b] [i](heh)... some people will say otherwise... but its not bad... though... some pictures seem... cut out-ish and stuff but who cares really.[/i] [u]Comments[/u]: [u][b](1)[/b][/u] ... first on the list... [b]AAronix, the Dragon Slayer[/b]... is [u]very[/u] OP (overpowered)... to where he's almost broken... ... absorbing a whole [b]ATK[/b] stat per kill is very good for an effect... (one of main reason why [b]Relinquish[/b] is banned)... and [b]AAronyx, the Dragon Slayer[/b] has an effect loop in which it doesn't matter what dragon fights him... or whether he was the one who declared the attack... ... this card would fear no dragons... ... i understand that you're intentions were to create such a card to fear no dragons... but you've created a card that is beyond realistic... and if it were a real card... this card would be thrown into the ban list... even if its effect is only good against dragons... its the way the effect works... ... maybe you can edit him to be more realistic?... ... i dont know... absorb only [u]half[/u] the attack of the slayed dragon... or he only gains the boost in [b]ATK[/b] until your next [u]Standby Phase[/u] or something... ... i know you can come up with something... [b]=I[/b] [u][b](2)[/b][/u] ... [b]Royal Knight - Luster Warrior[/b] is good... has a nice effect... something like [b]Black Rose Dragon[/b] except your card doesn't destroy itself, but it lets your opponent draw cards in return for you being able to destroy his/her monsters on the field... ... this is a pretty balanced effect... since it'll probably cost you [u]3[/u] monsters to bring out [b]Royal Knight - Luster Warrior[/b] anyways (while it only takes [u]2[/u] for [b]Black Rose Dragon[/b] normally)... ... good card... [u][b](3)[/b][/u] ... [b]Royal Knight - Dragon Warrior's[/b] effect is understandable... as in for someone who's played Yugioh for quite some time will know what his effect does... but it [u]could[/u] be made clearer... for those that love the question the game... ... and the effect is pretty OP... maybeeee... i dont know... ... make it to where his effect only works during the turn he is summoned?... or something like that... [u][b](4)[/b][/u] ... [b]Royal Knight - Dedicated Soldier[/b] and [b]Royal Knight - Relentless General[/b] are great... its a nice set of cards that work together... ... i see many ways for them to work together... ... good job here eh... [u][b](5)[/b][/u] ... wow... [b]Royal Knight - Long Blade[/b] has a gangsta effect... to which makes him almost broken... ... but i think its alright... not too bad... and [b]Royal Knight - Quick Saber's[/b] effect is pretty tight as well... not bad eh not bad... [u][b](6)[/b][/u] ... take a look at cards that use a coin in their effects and you'll see why i listed [b]Castle's Corridor[/b] as one of those cards with minor errors in their OCG... ... but other than that this card is not bad... [u][b](7)[/b][/u] ... i dont know man... ... it would bug me to play [b]Royal Knight's Castle[/b] knowing my monsters go down with it... ... i think you can take off that last effect that destroys your monsters... its fine man i've seen more OP field cards (like [b]Dragon's Ravine[/b], which has no downside) [u][b]([/b][/u] ... something about [b]Gentleman's Game[/b] bugs me... ... i think its the effect... or maybe its OCG or the way it was written out... ... cuz i was thinking you can try this:[quote]As long as this card is face-up on the field, if possible, both players must do the following per turn: · Normal Summon or Set a monster. · Enter Battle Phase and declare an attack.[/quote]... but even then... this card's effect seems... i dont know... ... kinda strange for a card... ... for example... what happens if i have no monsters on the field but i [u]have[/u] monsters on my hand... but i dont wanna play it... ... how do you know i'm not "[u]cheating[/u]"... ... you would have to put in the card that both players would have to show hands... but that doesn't sound very... chess-like... [b]xP[/b] [u][b](9)[/b][/u] ... [b]Royal Knight - Twin Slasher[/b] has two very good effects... allowing him to gain [b]ATK[/b] bonus [u]and[/u] allowing him to attack twice (you'll find that often times discarding 1 card is a small price)... ... if you truly want to keep both effects on him still... i'd say the only thing you can do then would be to [u](1)[/u] make him a higher level monster, or [u](2)[/u] decrease his [b]ATK[/b] bonus that he gains to at least like [b]400[/b]... (trust me it adds up, but [b]500 [/b]is too quick/too much)... [u][b](10)[/b][/u] ... [b]Royal Knight - Castle Guard[/b] is not bad... pretty tight... ... and holy shiet [b]Royal Knight - Almighty Emperor[/b] is kick-ass... might be a bit OP but its not bad in my eyes... since it needs two monsters that are not that easy to pull out in the first place... [u][b](11)[/b][/u] ... last but not least... [b]AAronix Unleashed[/b] is very OP... ... he has no negatives... ... nowadays cards have negative effects or costs now... ... like... [b]Five Headed Dragon[/b] may have [b]5000 ATK[/b] but he has no other effect except that he can't can't be destroyed by any other monster type except for Light-types... and he costs 5 monsters in order to be summoned... ... i know you're probably gonna say something like [i]"but this card can be destroyed by Spells or Traps"[/i]... [b]AAronix Unleashed[/b] can finish the game in 2 turns once he's out... cuz he gains attack bonus which could make him doing well over [b]4000+[/b] damage to Life Points per turn... whether the monster is in defense position or not... ... its not often the other player has a [b]Fissure[/b], [b]Dark Hole[/b], or [b]Mirror Force[/b] on their side... ... this card is not bad really... i really like it... ... but it needs a drawback... something like paying Life Points every turn or discarding a card to keep him on the field or something like that... ... rest of the cards are not bad... [b][u]Overall Rating[/u][/b] = 7/10 --or-- [b]+3.5[/b] out of +4 for OCG & Pictures [b]+3.5[/b] out of +4 for "having a theme" (woot!) [b]+1[/b] out of +2 for "attempt to reaching perfection" [b]-1[/b] out of -2 for "having card(s) being broken" ... mybad if it seems like i'm trying to take over your set, i'm not... some of your cards needs work for it to be more realistic and i was just lending my opinion... if you're wondering about how you can make some changes i'd be glad to help out if you want... ... but this is a good set and i'd like to see the re-edited version... if there is one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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