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The first of my Wraith cards


Umbrax

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2 Tuners + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Summoned, your opponent sends one card they control to the Graveyard. When this monster destroys a monster in battle, your opponent sends one card they control to the Graveyard.

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For something that hurts your opponent for destroying their monster, it has too many ATK points. Only a very select few boss monsters have 5000 ATK, and usually have a drawback rather that just pure benefits. It's also way too easy to summon - everything is generic, and a lot of decks will have absolutely no problem getting out the materials in just 1 turn.

With 3000-4000 ATK and more specific materials, and perhaps make the second effect based on battle damage rather than destroying a monster and/or preventing other monsters attacking it would still be powerful but not insanely broken.
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[quote name='MidknightTheHedgehog' timestamp='1310103156' post='5337322']
Don't change it. These are just opinions. I personally think it's perfect.
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Well.. opinions give people ideas that other people would like. Just because your the only 1 who thinks its fine doesn't mean the whole thing is fine.

Yea...at least lower the attack to 3000.
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in response to all of you, i will probably have to have a specific tuner and monster. just haven't got around to it yet. as as for its attack. Did you see the NAME? you're facing 5000 ATK. you will be in despair.

[quote name='Nightm@re-X' timestamp='1310102160' post='5337297']
Overpowered O.O! make the attack maybe......2500....and lower the level for heck's sake
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Red Nova Dragon is LV 12 thank you very much and i have no prob summoning him. be thankful i didn't make it 2 tuner and 1 or more non tuners
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[quote name='Umbrax' timestamp='1310160592' post='5338757']
Did you see the NAME? youre facing 5000 atk. you will be in despair.
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Did you see the EFFECT? youre facing up to 31200 atk. you will be in overdragon.
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Meet the only real monster in the TCG to include despair in it's name: [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Despair_from_the_Dark"]Despair from the Dark.[/url] Note how it's a boss monster, but still has under 3000 ATK. Yes 5000 ATK may inspire despair, but the card doesn't need to actually induce despair in the opponent. It's only a card game.

It should seriously have some drawbacks. For a start it should only be summonable by Synchro Summon (so no Monster Reborn or the like), and I would still advise not going over 4000 even for an ultimate boss (bear in mind no existing Synchro Monster has more than 4000 ATK, and given that they're relatively easy to summon 4000 seems like a reasonable cap for this type of monsters). Maybe lose the effect when it summons - your opponent losing another card when this destroys something is probably enough, especially since it's unlikely to lose a battle. With those and some specific materials it would probably be OK, provided that the materials aren't designed to get themselves out too easily.
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