Žäīἢ Posted July 6, 2011 Report Share Posted July 6, 2011 [center][img]http://i1021.photobucket.com/albums/af339/redeyesclan/ImagineAnything-1.png[/img] I know, it's not that great. CnC is appreciated.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mors Secundis Posted July 6, 2011 Report Share Posted July 6, 2011 Its Okay I like the idea its nice. One big criticism though, is that supposed to be an explosion if so why does it cut off at the window line...It makes it look a bit tacky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Žäīἢ Posted July 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2011 No, It's just supposed to be a bunch of dense, mystical clouds she's imagining. And it cuts off at the window because that's all she can see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 Can you link me to the original stock? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Žäīἢ Posted July 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 [quote name='So Legit You Quit' timestamp='1310003653' post='5333687'] Can you link me to the original stock? [/quote] I don't see how this is considered CnC. Anyway, I might, if you actually [b]do[/b] CnC on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 Zain, the original stock would give us more of a feel of what you have done to the stock other than adding the window sill stuff, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 [quote name=': ҉ Žäīἢ' timestamp='1310007721' post='5333887'] I don't see how this is considered CnC. Anyway, I might, if you actually [b]do[/b] CnC on it. [/quote] lolfail Stop being mean bro. He just wanted the stock. Besides, you said Cnc is appreciated. He doesn't have to give you anything. As for the stock [spoiler=Here you go] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/291c0mr.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Žäīἢ Posted July 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 Sorry, I was in a bad mood when I posted that, and I didn't mean to come off like that. I apologize. And like I said, It's not that good because I didn't do much to change it other than the window. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 Thank you Yondy. As for CnC: You have an alright concept, but your execution is lacking. This piece would be alot better had you done a few things... -Instead of making the clouds occur out of that single window pane, have it occur in all of them. -Take advice from whats stated above, and try make it look "destruction-y", as if the world is ending. I.E. Buildings crashing, explosions, etc. -Blur what you don't want the viewer's eyes to automatically be drawn to, as everything in this piece is to sharp. -Where explosions are or your clouds, make sure they blend, as in having colored light bounce on your focal, and what surrounds the clouds/explosions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Žäīἢ Posted July 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 Thank you. This will help me out greatly on future pieces, as well as let me improve on this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 And lose the text brah, I forgot about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Žäīἢ Posted July 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 I planned on it, for the more I look at it, the more out of place it seems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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