First sig in a while

[hoodinium]

I though I would atempt at making a sig because Im bored....
Ideas?
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[Funky6399]

its ok but for me way to dark i like stuff funky like me

[Cin]

Funky please provide actual CnC. The text is very distracting from the actual focal/render, also the render and background don't seem to interact because of the lack of render flow.

[.Rai]

Text is distracting, and generally text shouldn't be placed in a corner. It's a very common mistake to make. The C4D above the render is distracting from the render, obscuring it from view. It's also unnecessarily dark. Very empty also.

Maybe read some tutorials and download some .psds for improvements.

[Funky6399]

blood rose whts a CnC

[Smear]

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blood rose whts a CnC
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Get out of the Showcase Section. >_>

The focal is too far away from the text and the light colour of the test makes it distracting.
And it lacks depth, flow and lighting.

[~Energy]

The render should be closer to the center and it would look better bigger and the sig doesn't need to be so wide. Try doing some effects around the render to give the sig an atmosphere. You'll also want a light source which is where the light comes from to make it feel more natural. The light would be brightest near the light source so you will want it near the focal which would be the render so that your eyes are drawn to it. This sig is too dark because you havn't done any lighting. You need to have a general flow to the sig too. You shouldn't add text until you can do the basic because it can mess your sig up by adding a second focal.

Keep working on it, read tutorials and look at other peoples work to see what sigs should be like. After some practice you should be able to produce an attractive sig with all the basics.

[quote name='funky99' timestamp='1309989635' post='5332977']
blood rose whts a CnC
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Cnc is constructive criticism which means you are commenting on the sig and saying how to improve it. You'll get used to the showcase section soon, not everyone here is so negative.