Cross Battle Dimensions

[❤ Lovely Warrior ❤]

here is my fan comic there are only three pages so far but im going to update as often as i can.

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sorry page three is so small i will fix this soon
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there will be a total of 30 characters in this comic and as you can see 6 are already in the comic on the next page a new character will be introduced

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1. Sasuke
2 Sakura
3 Vegita
4 Roll
5 MegaMan
6 Princess Peach (Toadstool)
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and you can leave a comment for who you would like to see in the comic

EDIT: added a cover page its only temporary though and introduces some characters not in the comic yet

[❤ Lovely Warrior ❤]

can any one reply so i know people are actually reading it

[Catterjune]

There's no plot, there's just a bunch of characters do something for some reason. I have no reason why I should care for any of these people.

Also, 30+ characters and all their adventures running all at once is a terrible idea because you spend too much time setting up all these characters and all their adventures that you never get to the plot, or after introducing all these people your plot is running thin because it has to find a way to tie all 30 people into it.

[Supreme Gamesmaster]

As the first person to post a sprite comic on YCM, I'm proud to inaugurate the first sprite comic troll on YCM.

Actually, this is pretty good stuff. More Sweet Bro and Hella Jeff than Powerup Comics, if that makes any sense. Comics here tend to be terrible gag-a-days, though. (Especially mine. *shudders* Bloody obvious it was all written by a thirteen-year-old, looking back.)

Be sure to update about six times in one day and then disappear for a month, too. That's a popular one.

[s]The font in your sig. WHERE DID YOU GET IT[/s]

[❤ Lovely Warrior ❤]

[quote name='Supreme Gamesmaster' timestamp='1310000041' post='5333505']
As the first person to post a sprite comic on YCM, I'm proud to inaugurate the first sprite comic troll on YCM.

Actually, this is pretty good stuff. More Sweet Bro and Hella Jeff than Powerup Comics, if that makes any sense. Comics here tend to be terrible gag-a-days, though. (Especially mine. *shudders* Bloody obvious it was all written by a thirteen-year-old, looking back.)

Be sure to update about six times in one day and then disappear for a month, too. That's a popular one.

[s]The font in your sig. WHERE DID YOU GET IT[/s]
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[s]some one made it for me[/s]

and i dont know if i should continue and the story is thin right now becuase theirs only three pages

[quote name='PikaPerson01' timestamp='1309980786' post='5332541']
There's no plot, there's just a bunch of characters do something for some reason. I have no reason why I should care for any of these people.

Also, 30+ characters and all their adventures running all at once is a terrible idea because you spend too much time setting up all these characters and all their adventures that you never get to the plot, or after introducing all these people your plot is running thin because it has to find a way to tie all 30 people into it.
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true i think i might shorten it to 15

and right now i am stuck and to just tell the story with out you guys having to read a bunch of pages before its out there


[spoiler=dont read unless you want to spoil the story]black heart wants to control everything so he devises a plan to fuse all universes into one so its easier to controll thus bringing the characters together and then eventually they start forming together ex. sasuke sakura and vegita when demons start atacking the fusing worlds so once the worlds are about to be completely fused the remaining 15 (was going to be 30) heroes of the worlds ban together and kill him causing the worlds to return to normal and all the peole who were killed on the fused worlds come back to life and the heroes return home but lose the memory of these events[/spoiler]