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hey people i am a newbie here, but can i join too ?? :unsure:

i wrote it, might as well post it : :huh:

[b]Personal Info[/b]
Username: Murar Bonefang
Name: Bonefang
Race/Age/Gender: Demon / 1728 / Male
Affiliation: Eclipse
Alignment: Neutral
Hobby: Flute playing, swimming,


Appearance: The first appearence of this gentle gaint is shocking to most.
Murar is a 6'8" gaint of a man (?). he has blackhair, which is usually lose, but sometimes in good mood, he will tie it in a pony tail.
Murar looks pale, almost as if there is no blood in his system, he is quite and can be frequently seen doing oddities for strangers with nothing asked in return.
But then, some have reported Bonefang to be a terrible beast, who is black and very wicked demon who would tear humans and animals alike from bone to bone, and seems to enjoy the flesh of his prey even as warm blood drips from the corpse.
Hence he has long been driven away from general populace, yet he agrees to helpout when ever some one asks of him, which is very rare.

Personality: Split

Bio: "Not many know of his past; but somewhere it exists. The long lost pages would have informed the reader that the creature that is now Murar Bonefang is not even from this plane. Murar Allir was a temple priest who dabbled in ancient rites from the temple storage. one such scroll informed him abour calling forth beings from the other plane. Something with the summoning circle went wrong, and out came the terrible beast,as if the reincarnation of Lucifer himself. The devil noticed the young priest in the summoining cirlce, and as if by magic the devil entered the body of the preist.
it is from that time that the creature called Murar Bonefang has been a curse on the human society, for once he was the good preist, and at another time the devil inside, It seems there is a constant struggle as to who can take over the body, god forbid what will happen if the devil actually does win."
~ as told in an interview, from the minister's chambers, who wishes to remain unnamed.

Notes: He most probably can not speak, some have heard him grunt odd peices of sounds.

[b]Combat Info[/b]
Ability(s): he seems to repair the damage sustained very fast. also in his demonic form, his steps makes the ground vibrate, mildly.

Weapon(s):a slingshot, used to hunt birds.

Power(s):
[b]Bind[/b] : when in the good form, and he is attacked by someone, he will try to fight off the person, in human form, here he can use the "Bind spell" where in the target person is unable to move. Here murar will usually try to reason out why they should not fight, using hand gestures. but this spell lasts very short time and this effort usually fails.

[b]Demonic Takeover[/b]: while in demonic form, Bonefang will consume anything in his surroundings, to regenerate the damage sustained while in human form. If the target consumed, had any skills, bonefang has access to all his skills. He has been seen to yeild a bastardsword and longnow with equal ease. Demonic takeover can only happen when the target creature to consume has lost the hope of winning the engagement or has fainted.

[b]Doom[/b]: Doom makes the target lose a certain percentage of health every second. The mana inside the person burns and it burns an equeal amount of health as well. by the time the doom is eradicated, the person has already fainted.
If bonefang comes back to his human form, before the battle is over, he can use the bind spell to disengae the Doom spell. also on him touching the person's body there is an automatic regenaration of the H P of the person, and he is usually up and awake.
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Am i doing it right ?? :rolleyes:

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Oh wow, you really are a noob, with a grand whoping 2 posts! XD I'm not being mean, I'm just gladd your first two posts were in the RP section ^^ makes me smile at night... Alright, since I'm the first one on the scene apparently, I'm going to give you the dos and don'ts of this app.

First off, his appearance. Don't tell it as it it were someone else looking at him. Tell it like it is, tell how he looks when it looks. Simple as that.
Secondly. Personality. It lacks description. You know that rule Location, Location, Location? Description, Description, Description.
Third, the bio. Now, this one would work just fine in other RPs, more than likely at least. Not really any problems with it. But, in this RP, you're playing with Gods, namely m y character Thanatos, who is death in a human husk. I'm going to know all about your life because I've been watching you from the very beginning. So, an interview with a minister, isn't going to cut it in this one. Although, I give you props for creativity ^^
Fourth, Abilities. Is that really all that he has? Quick healing and ground shaking? I mean it's not bad or anything, but it's kind of like a bland mixture of Spawn and Goro. I mean, you're supposed to be a demon. Get demonic -_-
Fifth, your weapon. Entertaining as it was, you're on the good side, which means that you're fighting for the survival of Terra. A slingshot, versus metal clawed gauntlets, the scythe of Death, chained and unchained, and an hour glass that slows time and shows souls, my votes going to the other guys.
Lastly, your abilities. The bind one is fine, though it's a bit passive for a demon. As for Demonic take over, there are a few questions. When consumed, is a person dead and gone? or are they spit back out later? Can he use skills that he has consumed in the past? And why dose he wait until they're fainted or have no hope of winning? is he a pansy who can't take control of a situation? AS for your last ability, This isn't Final Fantasy, this is Titanomarchy. It's a war of gods, so god damn it, get in this to KILL!!!!!!!!!!! If you cast doom, it had better be able to kill a person, not just make them faint! They h ave plenty of time to break the spell by kicking your ass or some other means after the spell is cast, so KILL THEM!!!!!

Okay, I believe I've covered everything. Take another look over at your app and uh, revise it. I'm only telling your his for your own good because, frankly, if I were in charge of this, I would decline you one the spot, be you a noob or not.

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That's okay, I understand. Bumping the OOC thread.

Gonna make another character to help move along: if you guys want to as well, be my guest.
If you guys are getting bored/annoyed with this RP: I understand if you want to leave.

Not gonna lie, Cronus is so much fun to RP with. I personally think he's OPed along with Ancient Titans in general, so I'm going to make my new character up to par with Vince and Ka'Lees.

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Is that why you killed off your first character?

Just a question though... how exactly can Cronos travel to the real of the dead and back without Death's say so? I'm just curious because, well, it was a bit insulting to Thanatos, that last post of yours. Whatever happened to respect your elders? XD

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Yeah, Elnell started to become a bit of a let down after a while. He wasn't really fun anymore.

Mother Earth provided Cronus with an absurd amount of powers. She gave him anything that could aid him in recovering the Ancient Souls, no matter the significance. Astral Projection is one of those powers, on the off chance the Ancient Soul attempted to hide itself in the ethereal plain.

If you don't believe that... Cronus complained like a little baby with a temper tantrum until Mommy gave him his shiny green toy. :lol:

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Wow... we havn't even gotten started with this thing yet, and you just killed out your main hero. You get bored to easily -_-

see, this is why I make an interesting character every time! XD

Regardless of what mother dearest got him, that's Thanatos' territory in which you have just crossed without permission. Prepare for the consequences!!! *thunderclouds and lightning from the heavens above* Bwahahahahahahahahahahaha!

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I liked the idea of Elnell, it's just my method of portraying him bored me. I'll keep his design but try to rework some of his personality.

Your lightning and gravity powers are no match for my tree powers! *grows a flowerbed* Fear the daffodils of despair! Tremble before the marigolds of misery! Cower beneath the tulips of tragedy!

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My flowers, no! *cries in corner*

Alright, just unloaded one heaping helping of power-up. Cronus is to die as soon as this battle is over. Elnell is being revived soon after by Celestia. Then!


Then, I need to come up with what to do next. Why did you make your OC Death? How am I supposed to fight Death without going to a mystic tree for a [s]fire flower[/s] power-up? Prepare to taste the rainbow!

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Thanatos is still a God, one of the Greek Gods as it happens. That being so he can still be killed, Ironic no? Also, Thanatos and Vincent fighting was entirely the result of coincidence on the part of Vincent. He just got fed up with having Cronus use the shadows to seed chaos throughout the world and decided to eliminate him. As soon as Cronus was dead Vincent would just go along his merry way...well, until Thanatos decided to go all "APOCALYPSE RAAAAAAAA!" and what not.

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sounds good to me ^^ Though, I suppose that once Cronos is dead, Thanatos will be the only bad guy left so... yeah, destroy the physical body if you can, and the planet is sfae ^^ if you can't... preapre to die with your dying planet ^^. Any objections to Thanatos becoming supreme bady after Cronos dies?

And of coruse he's one of the greek gods and thus is able to die. I'd be god modding if I couldn't die >< and besides, I'm not even full god, just demi-god because of his human husk. Now, as for the apocolypse comment. Say you have a secret, a secret no one knows but you have a friend, a friend you trust nto entirely with the secret, but with the location of the secret. Imagine that friend going and taking that secret and exposing ti to everyone he knows. Yeah... that's kinda what Cronos did in Stealing Ellenel's soul after it had passed on. AS far as Vincet being there goes... bad timing on his part I guess. *shruggs*

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At least it can be done. Perhaps some God of War may help me in my god-fighting ways? Our meeting seemed like one between classic big name trios (I'll use the console wars for an example.) PS was getting into a fight with Nintendo, ready to knock him out, when X-Box also showed up to fight the latter. Before going in for the kill, X-Box noticed PS was there and thought, 'You're here, too? Two birds with one stone'. Then they fought each other while Nintendo slipped away to come back with a brand-new Wii U.

Sure, Thanatos can be the big bad. Elnell will need to recover the Ancient Souls in Cronus' place, as his body can now shelter them. He'll only do it for the sake of protecting them, though.

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*touches his shoulder, Cronos dies* Sorry ma'am, it had to be done. 8shruggs*

anyways, I just got a brilliant idea on how this can end. Personally, i think the best ending would be for the earth to die but Celestia and Elnell and Vincent survie or something like that, But I don't think that they're very fond of the planet dying. So, here's my big idea. Thanatos is Death, he is simply eternal. End of story. Celestia is the embodiment of life, not life itself, that's Eros. however, in Thanatos' human form he is in fact vulnerable. He is very much able to die. However, since Elnell is basically already dead. I think that what should happen is that, int he end, Celestia will combine her being with Thanatos' human one, effectively killing the both of them. Since Thanatos' body is gone, he will have to return to his original diety form and since he is a god then, he isn't allowed to just take life as he pleases, he has to wait until this new Terra ends naturally. If he tries to end Terras existence by force as a god, then he will suffer the wrath of hte old gods.

It sounds like a good end to me. What do yout hink?

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Sounds like a plan to me. But then who shall be our new villain? Or should we just end it there? Elnell would need to convince Celestia to sacrifice herself for the greater good, no challenge there. Eclipse will rework itself in the background to cope with the loss of their leader. All-in-all, a good plan.

TBH, I had absolutely no idea how to fight you. My next post was going to be 'Elnell tried to do stuff. Didn't work. Thinks of a plan while Celestia plays cheerleader'.

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