Techi☺ Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 This will be updated with an added Chapter roughly once per week unless you wish to convince me otherwise. Any and all comments will be read, but only compliments or criticism will be replied to and appreciated. In the next update, each chapter will have it's own spoiler. [center]Intro:[/center] It was raining. The ground was covered in slush as it rained. The sky was dark and the clouds meshed together. A young boy was running on the side walk, he turned through a large gate that lead to a large dark building. As the boy was running through the building, his brown hair waved around violently. There was blood all over the place and a good trail of it lead up a large flight of stairs. The boy grew tears in his eyes as he shook his head and started to walk up the stairs. In his head, he kept asking himself were his parents were, how would his brother let this happen. He reached the end of the stairs and followed the path of blood. He tried to insure himself by thinking that his parents and his brother were to strong to die like this, that they had power unlike anything he's ever seen before and that nothing could do what he feared. He slowly opened a large black door at the end of a long white hallway. There was a big brown desk and nothing else in this large room other than three bodies laying around that appeared to be dragged to this room. The body of the boy's father sat in the desk's chair as his body appeared to be disintegrating into blue dust. A woman on top of the desk in a soft white dress that was stained in her own blood was also disintegrating, this was the boys mother. The last body was on the other end of the room. The boy quickly realised this was his bother. The boy ran to him and kneel beside his brother and noticed the large whole in his brothers chest. The boys brother was still alive but he didn't have the strength to talk. The boy cried as his eyes turned red with pity and sorrow. The boy turned his view out the large window at the side of the room as he watched the rain fall hard and he felt a small twinge of Regret and hate. [center]Chapter 1:[/center] The sun was beginning to set on a nice beach view. The water was so deeply blue and the sand appeared so animated that it could have been a very beautiful painting. Nearby there was a large cliff that cut off and fell straight down to the beach. On the top of this grass covered cliff, there was a teen aged girl and boy that was taller than her but seemed to look around her age. They were both sitting near each other with their school stuff close behind them. The girl had long blond hair that was very princess like and a very cute small face with a button nose and very clear grey skin. The Girls eyes were blue, but the boys eyes were a soft green. The boy had longish brown hair that waved violently as the wind picked up, he was also very handsome. "Dein, I know its none of my business... But before you moved here, where did you come from?" The Girl asked as she turned here head to the boy, whose name was Dein. "Karen... you know I've been here for two years now. I don't see why its so important to you now and more so than a year ago." Dein didn't look in Karen's direction, he didn't need to. He could just sense that the girls cute face was matched by a cute little frustrated frown since he evaded the question. "C'mon Dein! I just wanna know." Karen replied, she was still looking at Dein's face while hers started to blush. "I'm sorry, but I left my past behind when I came here. So please, don't make me think about it." Dein's eyes rested on a small black cloud out in the distance. His eyes narrowed and displayed a deep resentment for even starting to remember that night. "Whatever Dein, I'll just remember this the next time you need me to help you with school activities." Karen pouted and folded her arms as she swung her head in the opposite direction. Dein turned his view from the cloud to Karen and gave a small grin. "You are looking more and more like a princess every day..." Dein didn't say this out loud, but thought it about the very attractive young woman sitting next to him. He chuckled out loud and stood, turning to pick up his stuff and begin to walk away. The end of the cliff shoots ouf from a large lush forest and it makes a lot of rustling noises as the wind blows through often. Dein was used to walking through the forest, it was starting to get dark and he had nothing to be afraid of. He kept walking, he'd shortly be to a small path way that actually lead to an abandoned cabin that Dein made his home. With the help of the towns folk and some influences from his Past, Dein got the old trashed Cabin turned into a decent home with a shower and electricity. Dein sighed as he kept walking through the forest. The strong shade in this forest with but the tiniest cracks of light from the sun-sight peeking though, any body who didn't travel regularly through here would easily mistaken it for night or not to long before it. Dein stopped walking suddenly. He noticed a shady figure that he recognised. The figure stepped out of the shadows with a grin, it appeared to be a man. This man seemed to be pleased at how easily Dein caught him this time. The man had long silver hair and a red light to his eyes. He was about a foot taller than Dein and Dein was almost the tallest boy in his class. This man was clean shave and he had pale white skin that seemed to match with his devilishly handsome good looks. He lifted his face to Dein and began to speak in a deep voice that seemed to have spoken through experience. This experience had been accumulated over this man's very long lasting life. "Lord Dein, it's only been 20 years... are you sure you can really be at peace with the death of your father, Lord Rain and your mother, lady Marralyn?" Dein shook his head and he looked to the ground so his eyes were covered by his hair. "The only death I'm still grieving is my brothers... None of the others ever tried to over me their condolences over his death. His lost seemed to mean nothing to anyone but myself. This is why I'm not moving on... I'll find his killer and destroy everything it held dear. You understand? Joseph?" Dein looked up, his eyes seemed to have changed to a deeper and darker red. Joseph nodded. While being much older than Dein and having more experience, Joseph still had to respect Dein because Dein was a pure-blood, something so rare and so strongly respected in any circumstance. "Yes, I understand fully. But please don't over exert yourself. I'm still grieving the lose as well, and I'm still regretting that I wasn't there to fight along their side against their assailant, whatever it was." Joseph tried to admit how much he regretted his decision to take his vacation. How foolish he was to leave his masters side for even a week. Dein just nodded. "If you need me, I'll always be near-by." And with his Closing statement, Joseph disappeared and Dein continued his lonely walk with his back-pack hanging over one shoulder and his white dress shirt partly unbuttoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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