Raze. vs PenguinZ -Vote-

[Rehva]

[size="1"][b]1st to comment with card is accepted.
Make a level 8 DARK monster.
No Synchros, divines, or tuners.
1st to get 5 votes wins. 3 reps to winner.
1 rep to loser
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[spoiler=Raze.] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/f1z09e.jpg[/IMG]
This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be destroyed by battle while in Attack Position. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) If this card is in Defense Position, destroy it. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to swap the ATK and DEF factors of this card until the end of the turn in which this card's Effect was Activated. When this card is destroyed or banished from the field (except by its own Efffect), destroy all face-up monsters on the Field. [/spoiler]

[spoiler=PenguinZ] Image Credit Goes to HP DOOM.
[IMG]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/1613/122078.jpg[/IMG]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by paying 1000 Life Points. Every turn you lose 100 life points or destroy this card. Once per turn during you Standby Phase you can activate one of the following effects: ●When this card is Successfully Special Summoned you can destroy one monster on your side of the field to destroy one Attack Position monster on your opponent's side of the field with equal or lower ATK. ●Randomly select one monster in your Graveyard and remove it from play, this card than gains ATK equal to the monsters level x 100. ●You can tribute one Machine-Type monster on your side of the field to have this card gain ATK equal to the tributed cards original ATK or DEF (whichever is lower). ●For every Trap Card in your hand this card gains 400 DEF. [/spoiler]

[PenguinZ]

[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/1613/122078.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by paying 1000 Life Points. Every turn you lose 100 life points or destroy this card. Once per turn during you Standby Phase you can activate one of the following effects: ●When this card is Successfully Special Summoned you can destroy one monster on your side of the field to destroy one Attack Position monster on your opponent's side of the field with equal or lower ATK. ●Randomly select one monster in your Graveyard and remove it from play, this card than gains ATK equal to the monsters level x 100. ●You can tribute one Machine-Type monster on your side of the field to have this card gain ATK equal to the tributed cards original ATK or DEF (whichever is lower). ●For every Trap Card in your hand this card gains 400 DEF.


Not my best, Just a quick remake of a card I've been working on.

[Rehva]

Accepted , Same goes for me. i just edited a card i made recently.

[PenguinZ]

Will you put pic credit to Hp Doom in for me? Hey, even though I'm using old OCG do you think it would be fair to have the voters vote equally on the OCG? If not i don't mind.

[ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ]

EDIT: Yes I read that Penguin was using old OCG. I did not take marks off for it.

Raze
Name - Creative +1
Pic - Nice pic seems to suit the name. +1
Effect - Effect seems quite balanced. A couple of OCG errors. +.5
ATK/DEF - He wouldn't be hard to blow up and pretty much gives a free direct attack to your Life Points. 3500 seems suitable. +1

Penguin
Name - Creative +1
Pic - Clear image and suits the name. +1
Effect - I think he's OP'd due to the fact he is an easily Summoned beatstick. If by some miracle I drew 3 first turn I could drop all 3 plus my Normal Summon. FTK much? OCG has errors. +0
ATK/DEF - These seems good for his Level and to go with his effect (other then his summoning condition). +1

Raze - 3.5
Penguin - 3

My vote goes to Raze good job guys.

[PenguinZ]

[quote name='ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ' timestamp='1309015274' post='5309676']
EDIT: Yes I read that Penguin was using old OCG. I did not take marks off for it.

Raze
Name - Creative +1
Pic - Nice pic seems to suit the name. +1
Effect - Effect seems quite balanced. A couple of OCG errors. +.5
ATK/DEF - He wouldn't be hard to blow up and pretty much gives a free direct attack to your Life Points. 3500 seems suitable. +1

Penguin
Name - Creative +1
Pic - Clear image and suits the name. +1
Effect - I think he's OP'd due to the fact he is an easily Summoned beatstick. If by some miracle I drew 3 first turn I could drop all 3 plus my Normal Summon. FTK much? OCG has errors. +0
ATK/DEF - These seems good for his Level and to go with his effect (other then his summoning condition). +1

Raze - 3.5
Penguin - 3

My vote goes to Raze good job guys.
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Ya the original is less OP'ed, this is not advertising or anything but here is the original if you want to look at it: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/253694-zirak-archtype-by-penguinz-6-made/page__pid__5309836#entry5309836

1-0 to Raze

[ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ]

I looked and he is less OP'd but also on both of them his once per turn effect hasa when he's successfully summoned effect in it it can't be activated once per turn if it's ony when he's summoned. >.> just thought I should let u no.

[PenguinZ]

[quote name='ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ' timestamp='1309049640' post='5310834']
I looked and he is less OP'd but also on both of them his once per turn effect hasa when he's successfully summoned effect in it it can't be activated once per turn if it's ony when he's summoned. >.> just thought I should let u no.
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Thnx

[Rehva]

Vote pleaseee.

[PenguinZ]

Vote pls

[PenguinZ]

Come on people

[Yang Xiao-Long]

Raze. GMV

His card has better overall OCG, a pic that, imo, better suits the card, and an effect that fits it perfectly.

[<haxx/>]

I think PenguinZ's card is a lil' bit better then Raze's.

[PenguinZ]

2-1 to Raze.

[PenguinZ]

Votes needed