Night Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Latest tag, an abby to be exact. [IMG]http://i882.photobucket.com/albums/ac28/Amirzmom/NWSTATIK.png[/IMG] Let's hope i get more cnc on this piece than i did the last. Took the great advice ken gave the last time I made an abstract piece, let's see if I've incorporated it correctly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 I like it. Lighting seems good and so does flow. The text looks slightly un-natural however. Is the sparks off the large 'energy balls' pen-tooling or something else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Love your abstracts. <3 Atmosphere in this one is sick. Sparks are neat, was it a stock? And text fits well IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Thanks for the cnc. And no, i'm terrible at pen tooling, not even a question ;P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Can you provide me with the stock/c4d/fractal? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Energy Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Great atmosphere, can't think of what to criticise right now. Mind linking me to some stocks or something? Edit: Guess i'm not the only one who loves this tag Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 <33333333333333333333333333333333 And I'm in love with those straight lines for some reason. ;D Not a huge fan of the giant wave of blue in the bottom left though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Uhh... I really don't like it. Its very cluttered and over done. There's too much going on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 [quote name='CAVEMAN.' timestamp='1308948857' post='5307923'] Uhh... I really don't like it. Its very cluttered and over done. There's too much going on. [/quote] I assumed so. I'll keep trying to get that Dyst feel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 i think this one looks really nice. im not really diggin' the big blue stripe on the left and it may just be me, but it took me a bit to notice the i and the k. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 [quote name='NightWalker' timestamp='1308962952' post='5308511'] I assumed so. I'll keep trying to get that Dyst feel. [/quote] Dyst's artworks contain minimal background design and maximum focus on the subject. All you have to worry about now is giving the focal interesting looks and such. Keep the background minimal-istic (faded lightings and such, perhaps add fading circles, or even vector some wavy thick lines). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PowerlinX Posted June 26, 2011 Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 I love it, although the IK in Statik is very hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted June 26, 2011 Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 gotta agree w/ ken here. I love the atmosphere, I just think it's a bit too cluttered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Lines and circles ftw!! Pretty nice. I just wanna see this without sparks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Vibrant, I like. Too cluttered tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Madsen is my child btw. Thanks for the cnc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 NW is my mommy and Haris is my other mommy and Seta is my brother <3 And I'm they're daughter <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 True story<3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 I'm not a gfx expert, but all I can say is this: 1.) It hurts my eyes to look at it. 2.) Somehow, the colors just aren't working. 3.) It's very cluttered, as said. 4.) The text is hard to read, as I believe was mentioned once or twice. ...and I think the blue line is fine, it just hurts to look at it against that background/background color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 [quote name='Fuzzie' timestamp='1309443858' post='5322097'] I'm not a gfx expert, but all I can say is this: [b]I'm aware of that.[/b] 1.) It hurts my eyes to look at it. [b]You know it's going to be a bad critique when it starts with "hurts my eyes".[/b] 2.) Somehow, the colors just aren't working. [b]Colors are fine.[/b] 3.) It's very cluttered, as said. [b]It has been said 5 times, i already acknowledged it. So why repeat it?[/b] 4.) The text is hard to read, as I believe was mentioned once or twice. [b]Again, why repeat it? And text is fine if it were any more visible it'd draw away from the piece.[/b] ...and I think the blue line is fine, it just hurts to look at it against that background/background color. [b]aww, i'm sorry it hurts you, next time i'll tone it down just for you.[/b] [b]And on another note, nice to see you again.[/b] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Energy Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 Doesn't seem to hurt my eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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