Max Darkness Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='Jack Slater' timestamp='1312570954' post='5417115'] Yeahaa this one needs a OCG Fix .. the old version was crappier than this one: [img]http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/6639/118928.jpg[/img] During the turn this card was played: You must Summon 2 monsters; place 3 Spell or Trap Cards; destroy 3 Cards your opponent controls; or destroy this card in your End Phase. During your next Standby Phase: Special Summon up to 3 "Surreal Tokens" (Beast-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 2000). During your Main Phase: Tribute a number of monsters you control with 2000 DEF or more; inflict 700 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each monster Tributed by this card's effect. If your opponent's Life Points are decreased by 2800 or more: You can Special Summon up to 2 Monster Cards with 0 DEF from your Graveyard . Destroy this card during your next End Phase. [/quote] During the turn this card was activated: If you did not Summon 2 or more monsters, Set or activate 3 or more Spell or Trap Cards, and destroy 3 or more cards your opponent controls; Destroy this card during the End Phase. During your next Standby Phase: Special Summon up to 3 "Surreal Tokens" (Beast-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 2000). During your Main Phase: You can Tribute any number of monsters with 2000 DEF you control; Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of monsters Tributed x 700. If your opponent takes 2800 or more damage by this card's effect: You can Special Summon up to 2 monsters with 0 DEF from your Graveyard. If you activate this effect, destroy this card during the End Phase. [quote name='Jack Slater' timestamp='1312570954' post='5417115'] And here you go Support.. [img]http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6639/118928.jpg[/img] Must be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 monsters you control with 2000 DEF or more. While you control this card face-up: The DEF of each monster you control is treated as 2000. [/quote] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 monsters with 2000 or more DEF. Face-up monsters you control have their DEF treated as 2000. Both are pretty terrible. The first will never be used; and the second is an awful waste of monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Max said everything there is to say. "Creativity" and "Viable creativity" are two different things. You should be aiming for the latter. For example, Max's "Placing" monsters on the field or "Death synchros" both are creative ideas, and both are viable in the game. They would be able to have a competitive use. When designing a new idea, you should be sure to make it competitive. Messing with DEF values isn't very creative at all, unfortunately, and is far from competitively viable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 eeeh yeah too obvious huh..i tried my best .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Maybe one day you'll be good enough to be a teacher, but for now just keep working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Hey teachers, how's the Academy doing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 I shouldve added more smileys huh? xD A remake of 2009's cards - Wich were meant to be cool but not playable.. guys..seriously..they were cool but never meant to be used in a duel An yeaaah i shouldve added some more smileys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='Jack Slater' timestamp='1312576624' post='5417415'] I shouldve added more smileys huh? xD A remake of 2009's cards - Wich were meant to be cool but not playable.. guys..seriously..they were cool but never meant to be used in a duel An yeaaah i shouldve added some more smileys [/quote] You're missing the point. Greatly designed cards are cool [b]and[/b] playable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 As i said. I suck at design .. The whole Surreal stuff...(BTW..do you know what "Surreal" is? ) well, sorry but it wasnt meant to be playable. And since the effect was pretty messed up, just like the ocg, i needed OCG fix. So i know better for the future. someday i really gonna apply with a card wich is made in more than 2 minutes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1312576443' post='5417405'] Hey teachers, how's the Academy doing? [/quote] Not much is happening because a lot of people are on holiday. [quote name='Jack Slater' timestamp='1312576995' post='5417431'] The whole Surreal stuff...(BTW..do you know what "Surreal" is? ) [/quote] Esoteric and bizarre. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostNinja Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Student Application [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/7034/433434h.jpg[/img] i have made 60+ cards in the maker, but I have been talked into posting them to get opinions... so yeah. anyways, as far as expected class, i have learned to never expect anything, always take it as it comes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 If you post the lore, I'll make the correct OCG changes. The card itself is OP'd. Pumped up version of Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys with exponential ATK for the effect. A card that returns so easily from destruction (As implicated by Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys and Stardust Dragon) should not have such a large ATK stat that it can single-handedly run over almost every single card in the game. Also, it'd be nice to see a more creative effect, instead of a Sacred Phoenix copy with an LP Drain effect added. Personally, I don't feel like I can rate the dorm for you, it feels like you could've just C&P'd Sacred Phoenix's effect, which shows no true knowledge of OCG from your part. Of course, I may be mistaken but that's what it appears like to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostNinja Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 i had to google Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys, ha ha thats almost creepy that thay are pretty much the same... hmm ill make a new one and reapply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='GhostNinja' timestamp='1312587245' post='5417918'] i had to google Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys, ha ha thats almost creepy that thay are pretty much the same... hmm ill make a new one and reapply [/quote] If that's the case then if you want to use that card as an entry, I'll go with Ra. OCG's not up-to-date, but it's accurate for the old OCG, the effect in itself is ok, but the stats are far too high. You show decent potential at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostNinja Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 well i have already started on a new one, so ill post it as reentry and maybe between the two you guys can get better judgement? and on a side note, all of my cards will have old OCG, last time i was updated was about the conclusion of battlecity, so i've not learned it yet. from what i have heard though it sounds awfully similar to MTG, or am i just imagining? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 I'll give you the basics. [spoiler=Effect Format] Old OCG had the use of commas and the word "to" to diffenentiate condition, cost, and effect. When this card is Summoned, you can banish 1 monster on the field to Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard. New OCG uses colons and semi-colons. When this card is Summoned: You can banish 1 monster on the field; Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Word changes] Remove from play = Banish Is removed from the field = Leaves the field Hero = HERO During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. = If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. Selected as an attack target = Targeted for an attack[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostNinja Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 ok, you know give the terminology, is it normal to be falshing back to magic the gathering? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LCÂ Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center][spoiler=A card from my new set][IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/ih1kyx.png[/IMG][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 Level 4 or below "Vortexian" monster on the field. Tribute 1 Level 4 or below monster on the field; Special Summon 1 level 4 or below "Vortexian" monster other than "Vortexian Alpha" from your hand. Pay 500 Life Points: This card gains ATK equal to the Summoned monster. This card cannot attack during the turn it's Special Summoned.[/spoiler][/center][/center] [center][center] This is a card from my new set the Vortexians. It's my debut using the New OCG on one of my cards.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 May I use three cards for my student application? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas the Flame Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 just got back from vacation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostNinja Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 ok, lets try this huh? [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/83/433435.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [quote name='Inferno Knight LC' timestamp='1312597093' post='5418371'][center][center][spoiler=A card from my new set][img]http://i53.tinypic.com/ih1kyx.png[/img][/center][/center] [center][center]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 Level 4 or below "Vortexian" monster on the field. Tribute 1 Level 4 or below monster on the field; Special Summon 1 level 4 or below "Vortexian" monster other than "Vortexian Alpha" from your hand. Pay 500 Life Points: This card gains ATK equal to the Summoned monster. This card cannot attack during the turn it's Special Summoned.[/spoiler] This is a card from my new set the Vortexians. It's my debut using the New OCG on one of my cards. [/quote] >New OCG >Old effect format >RAEG [quote name='Dwarven King' timestamp='1312597439' post='5418396'] May I use three cards for my student application? [/quote] No.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Why not Striker? The three cards work together! D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [quote name='Dwarven King' timestamp='1312605547' post='5418777'] Why not Striker? The three cards work together! D: [/quote] It's your LV Monsters, aren't they? Fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Soooo, I know I haven't been super active here, but I want to. Only problem is that that card making can get tedious without good pics or creative ideas. When I find good pics, I can't think of good effects for them, and when I think of an idea for an archtype, or just an effect, I can't find any good pics for it. If anyone has any ideas, I'd like to hear them. Until then, I'll be working on some kind of set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Of course they are my LV monsters. They are my most recent cards that I like the most. I will post when I get on my laptop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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