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[Simping For Hina]

The picture is for the Archtype, I know it is not my best, but it works.
With the ATK gain, what would you guys suggest?

[Classic]

[color="#008080"][font="Century Gothic"][center]You could simply drop it to 200. Or you could give it an ability to banish 'Fateful Fighter' monsters on it's own and change the effect to:
'for each 'Fateful Fighter' monster banished by this cards effect: Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 300.

BTW
OCG fix in that line anyway:
For each banished "Fateful Fighter" monster: Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 300.[/center][/font][/color]

[Simping For Hina]

Classic, thank you ^^.

[Classic]

[center][font="Century Gothic"][color="#483D8B"]No problem. But you may want another opinion, balance is my most recurring problem with card making xD.[/color][/font][/center]

[Simping For Hina]

Max was the old Balance Head, let me see what he has to say about it.

[Max Darkness]

@ Daemon: The problem is, given that it can fuel its own ATK gains, its ATK is already quite good for its Level. Lower the ATK, restrict the ATK-gain to only monsters that were banished by its effect. (ie 'While both monsters banished by this card's effect remain banished, this card gains ...') It should also have a limit on how many times it can activate its effect.

[Simping For Hina]

For an ATK lowerage, what is your suggestion?

[Max Darkness]

[quote name='Daemon' timestamp='1309374688' post='5319986']
For an ATK lowerage, what is your suggestion?
[/quote]

Consider "Arcanite Magician's".

[Simping For Hina]

I find that a little low, since only 2 "Fateful Fighter" monsters can be banished by this card's effect and the gain is 300.
So 1000 is kind of low.

[Lightning Bagon]

@Dae
Maybe 2000ish?

Comments on card please:

[img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3640/149222.jpg[/img]

When this card is Normal Summoned you can select 1 "Gadget" card in your deck or 1 "Ultimate Offering" and add it from your deck to your hand. If this card is destroyed by a card effect you can add 1 "Red Gadget from your deck to your hand.

[Simping For Hina]

Name is more like a trap or spell.

[Lightning Bagon]

lol i know i suck at coming up with names, any suggestions?

[Simping For Hina]

I need a picture first.

[Lightning Bagon]

i have none

[Simping For Hina]

I have no idea. I suggest JazinKay for image beginners.

[Lightning Bagon]

think i have a better name and pic:

[img]http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/3640/149222.jpg[/img]

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

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[font=tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif][size=2]Ledakan: Explosion Insect

|Ledakan Egg|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|1||0|0|This card can not be used for a tribute summon except for a "Ledakan" monster. This card is cannot be destroyed by spell, trap and effect of an effect monster. Once per turn, Increase this cards ATK by 100|

|Ledakan Queen|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|7||0|2400|This card cannot attack unless you tribute 1 monster you control.When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, increase this ATK of this Monster by 100 for each face-up Insect-Type monster on the field. Special Summon 1 "Ledakan Egg" from your Hand, Deck, or Graveyard in Attack Position at the End Phase that this card destroys a monster your opponent controls. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK.|

|Ledakan king|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|7||0|2400|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 2 "Ledakan" monsters you control to the Graveyard. decrease this Monsters ATK by 500 to destroy 1 monster Card your opponent controls. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK.|

|Ledakan Hatch|0|LEDA|Spell Card|Spell||||| Tribute 1 "Ledakan Egg" monster you control, Special Summon 1 "Ledakan" monster whose level equal to the ATK of the Tributed monster by incriments of 100 from your Hand or Deck. If this card is in your Graveyard, you can decrease the ATK of one LEdakan monster by 300 to return this card to your Deck and shuffle it.|

|Ledakan Parasite|0|LEDA|Inscet/Effect|Fire|4||0|1200| When this card is destroyed by your opponent card (either by battle or card effect), Special Summon this card to your opponent's side of the field in Defense Position and your opponent take 200 damage at the End Phase. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK.|

|Ledakan Swamp|0|LEDA|Spell Card|Spell||Field|||During your end phase, all "Ledakan" monster gain 100 ATK. When a non-FIIRE or Pyro-Type monster is Summoned, that monster lose 100 ATk equal to its level.|

|Ledakan Hive Breakout|0|LEDA|Trap Card|Trap|||||When a "Ledakan" monster you control is destroy by battle, you can Special 1 or more monsters with combined level equal to the ATK of destroy monster, in incriments of 100, from your Deck.|

|Ledakan Web|0|LEDA|Trap Card|Trap||Continous|||if a non-FIRE or Pyro-Type monster declares an attack, that monster lose ATK by 300 then inflict 100 damage to your opponent times the level of that monster.|

|Ledakan Spider|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|3||0|1500|If you have 4 or more "Ledakan" monsters on your field, you can Tribute this card to destroy all face-up Defense Position monsters your opponent controls. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK.|

|Ledakan Larva|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|2||0|500|This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing a "Ledakan Egg" monster. By sending this face-up card from the field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Ledakan King" from your hand. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK.|

|Ledakan Bee|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|3||0|800|Once per turn select 1 monster your opponent control, that monster lose 200 ATk times that monster's level. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK.|

|Ledakan Butterfly|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|4||0|1300|Once per turn, decrease a monsters ATK in increments of 100 to Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard whose level equal to the ATK removed this way. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK.|

|Ledakan Moth|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|6||0|2100|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set.This card can be special Summoned by tributing a "Ledakan Larva" monster that has an ATK of 600 or more.This card gain 200 ATK for each Insect type monster on the field. When this card destroy a monster, inflict 200 damage to your opponent times the level of the destroyed monster. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK.|

|Hive of the Ledakan|0|LEDA|Continous Spell|Spell|||||each "Ledakan" monster you control gains 200 ATK.|

|Ledakan Worm|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|6||0|2100|If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can add 1 "Ledakan" monster from your Deck to your hand. If you don't control at least 1 other "Ledakan" monster, destroy this card during the End Phase. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK.|

|Ledakan Beetle|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|5||0|1900|This card can be normal Summoned without a tribute if you control 2 or more "Ledakan" monster with 500 ATK or more. Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK of a "Ledakan" Monster you control by 300 destroy 1 Spell or Trap on the field. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK.|

|Ledakan Ant|0|LEDA|Insect/Effect|Fire|3||0|1200|Each turn, Decrease the ATK of one "Ledakan" Monster you controls 500 to special summon a "Ledakan Ant Token" (Insect-Type/FIRE/3 Stars/ATK 0/DEF 1200) on your side of the field. If this card is destroyed, all "Ledakan Ant Token(s)" are destroyed also. If a "ledakan Ant" monster is removed from the field, Deal damage equal to that monster ATK.|

|explosive Double-edge|0|LEDA|Spell Card|Spell|||||Select 1 "Ledakan" monster you control, double that monsters ATK until the end turn.|

|Mass Reproduction|0|LEDA|Spell Card|Spell||Quick-Play|||If there are two or more "Ledakan" monsters face-up on your side of the field, increase the ATK of all Ledakan monster on the field by 400.|

|Fire Stingers|0|LEDA|Trap Card|Trap||||||Acticvate this card when a "Ledakan" monster you contorl is selected as an attack target. Before damage calculations Increase the selected monsters ATK by 100 x the monsters level.|

|Ledakan Defender LV 1|0|XXXX|Insect/Tuner|Fire|1||0|500|This card can only be special summoned by the effect of another Ledakan monster. While this card is in Face up defense position your opponent cannot select another Insect Type monster as an attack target. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK. You can send this card from the field to the graveyard to special summon one Ledakan Defender LV 5 from your hand.|

|Ledakan Defender LV 5|0|XXXX|Insect/Tuner|Fire|5||0|2000|This card can only be special summoned by the effect of another Ledakan monster. While this card is in Face up defense position your opponent cannot select another Insect Type monster as an attack target. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK. You can send this card from the field to the graveyard to special summon one Ledakan Defender LV 7 from your hand.|

|Ledakan Defender LV 7|0|XXXX|Insect/Tuner|Fire|7||0|3200|This card can only be special summoned by the effect of another Ledakan monster. While this card is in Face up defense position your opponent cannot select another Insect Type monster as an attack target. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent equal to this monsters ATK. IF an insect type monster is sent to the graveyard while this card is faceup on the field, shuffle it into the respected owners deck instead.|

|Ledakan Rage Insect|0|XXXX|Insect/Synchro/Effect|Fire|6||0|0|1 Tuner + 1 or more non tuners.
When this card has 2000 atk, destroy this card and deal 4000 damage to your opponents life points.|[/size][/font]
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[StealthyTyranitar]

[img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/9163/289079.jpg[/img]

I need some help with this card, especially OCG

[Classic]

[font="Century Gothic"][color="#FF8C00"][b]@ [u]Lightning Bagon[/u][/b][/color]
Maybe Ruthless Engineer for a name? That guy Doesn't look very Gadget-Like =P. Its a bit bland IMO but it does its Job ^^. Either way there are still some errors. You forgot the quotation mark at the end of "red Gadget" and Deck is capitalized.

[color="#8B0000"][b]@ [u]sǝlnɹʍʇp[/u][/b][/color]
That's allot of cards o.o.. ok! (xD)

[u]Ledakan Egg[/u]
Seems nice. OCG is a bit off. Name is fine i suppose. Tribute is capitalized. The last sentence shouldn't be arranged like that it should be closer to:
[color="#FF0000"]"Increase this card's ATK by 100 during each of your Standby Phases."[/color] [color="#0000FF"]~ When doing an effect like this you should select a phase for when it gains the ATK.[/color]

And the second Sentence should be:
[color="#FF0000"]"This card cannot be destroyed by card effects."[/color] [color="#0000FF"]~ When listing it cannot be destroyed by Spell, Trap, or Monster effects you can just say 'card effects'[/color]

Overall decent job on this card seems a bit Underpowered though.

[u]Ledakan Queen[/u]
Name Seems fine, especially since most races of insects have Queen's not Kings. OCG is a bit off. Seems VERY Underpowered. Maybe make it 300-400 ATK per Insect on the field at the time.
OCG Fix (Sentence by Sentence. The order of the sentences should be the order i fix them in.):
[color="#FF0000"]"When this card is Summoned,increase this card's ATK by 100 for every face-up Insect-Type monster on the field."[/color] [color="#0000FF"]~ Where you said Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, only summoned is necessary. the reason this sentence is first is because it regars the monsters Summoning.[/color]
[color="#FF0000"]"This card cannot declare an attack unless you Tribute 1 monster you control."[/color] [color="#0000FF"]~ Tribute is capitalized and the wording was off. This is the second sentence because it is a General Effect.[/color]
[color="#FF0000"]"During the End Phase of a turn this card destroys a monster, Special Summon 1 "Ledakan Egg" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard."[/color] [color="#0000FF"]~ Hand is not capitalized, and it was not worded correctly. This is the third sentence because it is another general effect.[/color]
[color="#FF0000"]"When this card leaves the field, inflict damage to your opponent equal to this card's ATK when it was destroyed." ~ It was mis-worded. 'Removed from the field' is now 'leave the field'."[/color] [color="#0000FF"]This is the last sentence because it involves the monsters destruction.[/color]

Overall another Decent card.

BTW i will review your other cards later for now i must review Mohican's. P.S. Do you need help finding Pic's?

[color="#000080"][b]@ [u]The First Mohican[/u][/b][/color]
Lots of OCG errors but thats alright ^^. Pic is decent, fits the name which fits the card ^^. Though it looks more like a canyon then a peak. The card is OP maybe make it remove 2-3 counters instead of 1?

[u]OCG Fix[/u]:
[color="#FF0000"]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, whenever a Warrior-Type monster destroys a monster, Place 1 "Peak Counter" on this card (MAX:4). Once per turn, you can remove 1 "Peak Counter" from this card to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.[/color] [color="#0000FF"]~ Warrior-Type has no space between it and it is capitalized. Graveyard and Deck are also capitalized. When you talk about counter's Capitalize the type of counter and the word counter and put them in quote's. You don't destroy counter's on cards, you remove them ^^.
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Normally my posts are centered, but its easier to read it at the left xD. Hope this helps you guys ^^[/font]

[Simping For Hina]

Mohican, pic is decent as said by Classic, but it looks to drawn :/

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

images would be apreciated, but i am using them for a CCG, thats why they are in that format

[Nathanael D. Striker]

@Daemon: I don't know if the card maker would let me take out the Effect part, and I suck at using templates.
@Max: Thank you for your concern, but I think it is necessary.

[Classic]

[font="Century Gothic"][size="1.5"][color="#483D8B"][center]@ Mr. Striker
Do you mean replace effect with a custom sub-type if so just make the card copy the URL post it in a new tab,go to where it says 'Subtype=effect' and change 'effect' to whatever you want.

@ sǝlnɹʍʇp
I can find images any preferences for what you want them to look like? BTW apply my fixes on the first 2 cards to the other cards most of them has similar errors. I'd type them all up myself but both my arms are broken Q.Q (xD)[/center][/color][/size][/font]

[Simping For Hina]

Classic. Get the link :3.

Striker: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/251983-how-to-create-your-own-sub-type-in-the-card-maker-version-2/

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

@classic: Ill look and do the fixes, but id just like a pic of the bug type it says, they have to be realated to fire though, and perferably in a swamp.

BTW feel better!