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[quote][color="#00FFFF"]3 Level 4 Monsters
This card cannot be Special Summoned except by an Xyz Summon. When this card is Xyz Summoned, you can select up to 2 Xyz Material Monsters attached to this card and detach them. You can destroy Spell/Trap Cards equal to the number of Xyz Material Monster's detached from this card. One time only, you can attach 2 LIGHT monsters from your hand to this card as Xyz Material Monsters. When this card is removed from the field, you can Special Summon 1 monster that was attached to this card as an Xyz Material Monster.[/color][/quote]

[color="#000080"]How Is It?[/color][color="#00FF00"]
OCG Fixes Appreciated. I Tried My Best At This New OCG Crap, But Eh...[/color]
[color="#FF0000"]I Give Reps For Constructive Feedback.[/color]
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OCG Fix: 3 Level 4 Monsters
This card cannot be Special Summoned except by an Xyz Summon. When this card is [b]successfully[/b] Xyz Summoned[b]:[/b] [b]Y[/b]ou can select up to 2 Xyz Materials attached to this card and detach them[b];[/b] destroy Spell/Trap Cards equal to the number of Xyz Materials detached from this card. One time only: You can attach 2 LIGHT monsters from your hand to this card as Xyz Materials. When this card [b]leaves[/b] the field: You can Special Summon 1 monster that was attached to this card as an Xyz Material.

Saves more room XD But anyways, it's a pretty interesting monster and can make use of getting some good monsters on the field on the turn you already normal summoned. Anyways, I like it 8/10
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Amusing. There are no OCG errors I could spot (for now mwahahaha) and the card is balanced and good.
You actually take card advantage off of you by attaching cards form your hand, yet it sounds like it could be good to try with Xyz support cards from the starter Deck. Also lets you pretty much Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster from your hand granted the conditions (I know its not [i]exactly[/i] like that because of the attach part but I hope the message made sense xD )
The destruction effect is fair and nowhere hear as easy to do as its X Saber Synchro counterpart (that just plain destroys up to 3 Spell/Trap Cards from your opponent).

I like the pose of the character in the art. Not in the "attractive" sense but in the "somewhat interesting looking" one.
Overall I like.
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Actually Blu's fix is missed some thing

3 Level 4 Monsters
Cannot be Special Summoned except by an Xyz Summon. When this card is Xyz Summoned: You can select up to 2 Xyz Material Monsters attached to this card and detach them; destroy Spell or Trap Cards on the field equal to the number of Xyz Material Monster detached from this card. Once per duel: You can attach 2 LIGHT monsters from your hand to this card as Xyz Material Monsters. When this card leaves the field: Special Summon 1 monster that was attached to this card as an Xyz Material Monster.

i am pretty sure about the ocg. Why we attach 2 monster if in the end only 1 that can be SSed? just make it 1
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