Simping For Hina Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [center]I like to write poems, so to begin. I want some feedback on them. [spoiler=Time to Forget][b][i]Just a question to begin the start of it all. The answer made my heart fall. I still never stopped thinking. You were there every time I was blinking. Maybe I was too late to ask. Now I feel as if I need to hide behind a mask. I kept my head up and a smile came through. This feeling was quite new. Should I continue to reminisce, What I am about to miss? I am wasting my time with it. Let it go and just quit. Every moment wasted just to spend some with you. Now, I wish I could just undo. The answer was always in someway no. After that, I began to feel like dough Easily it was to get this feeling. It is even harder healing. I made a choice that became a bet. But now I just feel that it is time to forget.[/i][/b][/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Wow, that was beautiful. Never read anything quite like that in the 12 years of English I took throughout my schooling career. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/196071-ycm-poetry-corner/"]Poetry Corner in Literature says hi[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 I didn't flow to well for me, I was hard to keep the rhythm when one line is small, yet the other big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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