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[quote name='BlackSkullCortez' timestamp='1329098241' post='5813786']
I know.
I have it in my head. Just can't get it down in works.
I mean, words.
Okay, I'm getting some sleep.
G'night, people.

EDIT: I looked at all of them.
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goodniiiight~
:'D

[quote name='iRemo' timestamp='1329098366' post='5813795']
At least you have a break tomorrow

I haz teh school
[/quote]
I HAVE NO SCHOOL TILL THE MIDDLE OF MARCH OR POSSIBLY APRIL

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[quote name='Sploosh' timestamp='1329098491' post='5813804']
goodniiiight~
:'D


I HAVE NO SCHOOL TILL THE MIDDLE OF MARCH OR POSSIBLY APRIL
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Son

of

a

Bi[color=#696969]tc[/color]h

I hate you in ways I didn't even know a human could hate another human

Like, it's so hateful, it came full circle and became love

I hate you that much

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[quote name='Ultimate Assassin Ninjew' timestamp='1329068203' post='5812738']
Hehe, Itachi ftw. But why'd I have to die?? Oh and Sven should totally revenge me by doing everything I did and enacting as I did.
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Meh, I thought it'd be more powerful that way. And if I continued DAL, Sven and Hiru would continue being vigilantes putting out crime. Creator managed to quell crime during his rule, but since he left, it would be bound to rise again. So that's how those 2 would keep themselves busy.
And Ninjew was my favorite character by the end, thought you should know.
[quote name='Sploosh' timestamp='1329081766' post='5812981']
You should read it, it's smex


AND I CAN SO UPDATE FAST D<
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PFFFTTT
[quote name='iRemo' timestamp='1329090154' post='5813334']
Wait, Fuse, were you going to rewrite DEF?

Or continue with DAL?
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Rewrite DEF.
Not anytime soon, in the way future after I learn how to write well.
[quote name='iRemo' timestamp='1329091895' post='5813416']
[b]What exactly will change in the rewrite besides number of characters?[/b]
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I'm going to rework certain plot elements and construct a more concrete setting as well as actually [i]prewriting[/i] before writing anything.
[quote name='Relius Clover' timestamp='1329094355' post='5813522']
An ability system
A world to work in. OF course, it's Earth, or an alternate universe Earth, but you know what I mean. I need it to be advanced enough so that technology is believable (Say, 2020s-2030s?), yet not too advanced, and not magic. Somewheere between BlazBlue and FMA.

Anyone got some ideas?
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Mankind has advanced to the point where they're able to extract energy from almost anything. The technology is capable of absorbing kinetic energy from a rollercoaster, potential energy from something being held high in the air, or from certain materials in nature: trees, plants, apples, water currents, etc. I think you get the point.
Anyway, this leads to a world that runs on endless energy resources. Lots of people are able to drive cars running on life energy, basically using it over most other forms of energy like electricity.
However, the government decided to experiment on the what-if scenario of a human being able to harness the power of energy absorption. It performs inhuman experiments on a group of people and it works, but it has a poisonous effect on the body. The experiment subjects manage to break loose and their condition spreads like a virus. Most of the global populace dies out from the condition, but the remaining few manage to survive and develop an immunity, thus gaining the power to absorb energy.
And from that point, over a few generations, most of the human populace functions on absorbing energy. As later generations were born, though, depending on where their parents lived or did in their lifetimes, certain children were only able to absorb energy from certain things. The ability to expel the absorbed energy has developed by this time, and there are only certain abilities in certain people.
One guy could only absorb oxygen, carbon dioxide, and whatever else is in fire to make fire. Same for another guy with hydrogen and oxygen to make water. And so on.
Might need a few kinks worked out, but I think this could work.[/spoiler]

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[quote name='Relius Clover' timestamp='1329103478' post='5814047']
I love how I ask a whole club for help

And only one guy has a good idea ._.
[/quote]I love how you can't appreciate the fact we all tried to help

.-.


AND FINE

I'LL UPDATE ONE MOTHAFAUKIN CHAPTER A DAY, BISH

...after I finish the 5 in a row, then take a bit of a break

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[quote name='Relius Clover' timestamp='1329103859' post='5814064']
I'd appreciate it more if y'all had actually lsitened and not just gone EVOLUTIONADAPTATIONSHOVEOWNTHROAT ._.
[/quote]because that was obviously the only suggestion we had

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