Kakashi Hatake Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [quote name='Sploosh' timestamp='1329048877' post='5812416'] I still don't see the big deal about screentime...but... eh .__. Regardless Large casts are fine, if you know how to handle them Just look at [b]KS[/b], it has a sizeable cast, but not so large in that I can't handle it. [b]What?[/b] [/quote] I need to pay more attention because I still don't know what we're talkin' about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [quote name='Kakashi Hatake' timestamp='1329052856' post='5812453'] I need to pay more attention because I still don't know what we're talkin' about. [/quote] KS is DL's Naruto fic, stands for Kyuubi Shards. It's pretty pro, but he takes forever updating the story >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1329054250' post='5812477'] KS is DL's Naruto fic, stands for Kyuubi Shards. It's pretty pro, but he takes forever updating the story >_> [/quote] Sounds awesome. How many chapters are there? And link me plox. I cant find it. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 116, but pretty much all of them are short, so it shouldn't be a chore to read like some fics [s]heehee[/s] can be. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/188252-naruto-legend-of-the-kyubi-shards-chapter-116-added/ DL, your last update was over 2 months ago. da fuq bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Assassin Ninjew Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Hehe, Itachi ftw. But why'd I have to die?? Oh and Sven should totally revenge me by doing everything I did and enacting as I did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [quote name='Ultimate Assassin Ninjew' timestamp='1329068203' post='5812738'] Hehe, Itachi ftw. But why'd I have to die?? Oh and Sven should totally revenge me by doing everything I did and enacting as I did. [/quote] That would be epic :'D [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1329055329' post='5812492'] 116, but pretty much all of them are short, so it shouldn't be a chore to read like some fics [s]heehee[/s] can be. [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/188252-naruto-legend-of-the-kyubi-shards-chapter-116-added/"]http://forum.yugiohc...pter-116-added/[/url] DL, your last update was over 2 months ago. da fuq bro [/quote] I'll try to like update it soon D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Aaaand I miss Ninjew because I was eating dinner. That's what I get for living in Switzerland. >.> [quote name='Sploosh' timestamp='1329022265' post='5812012'] ur sharing a comP? [b]... I'll let you get away with it this time. Because I could have stolen Fuse's computer and brought it to Switzerland, because we definitely live in the same house even though we're in different countries.[/b] [/quote] [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1329022807' post='5812031'] It'll definitely be one of the better fics in Creative Writing. [b]OH GOD NO IT WON'T BE.[/b] [/quote] [quote name='Sploosh' timestamp='1329048877' post='5812416'] I still don't see the big deal about screentime...but... eh [b]I still don't see why it's called screen time in a story. >.>[/b] Regardless Large casts are fine, if you know how to handle them [b]This is true except for cameos of people you know, and they are aware that you are using them as cameos, because they might want more screen time.[/b] [b]Sources:[/b] [b]Black[/b] [/quote] And DL, I still have yet to read it, but based on Fusion's comments on your behavior... ... sure you will. Sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 You should read it, it's smex AND I CAN SO UPDATE FAST D< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 I'm not sure. “'Yeah, it’s our secret base. Now come on, my friend s waiting inside.'” Hm... not sure what this means. One friend or multiple? Bah, I'll keep on reading. Hopefully you update before I finish all 116 chapters in about 1.5 hours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [quote name='BlackSkullCortez' timestamp='1329082000' post='5812993'] I'm not sure. “'Yeah, it’s our secret base. Now come on, my friend s waiting inside.'” Hm... not sure what this means. One friend or multiple? Bah, I'll keep on reading. Hopefully you update before I finish all 116 chapters in about 1.5 hours. [/quote] ...I can't recall who said that AND YOU CANNOT READ THEM ALL IN THAT LITTLE TIME O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Yeah, I probably can't. Maybe in about 2-3 times the time. I just underestimated it because I'm constantly checking for updates in between chapters (and also checking definitions/pictures of organizations/characters once they're introduced). But I'm halfway through 18, and it's good so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 yay :'D ...and you say you JUST started reading? O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Pretty much. I tend to read over things quickly. Especially when they're engaging. EDIT: And of course, Daisuke has to be a ladies' man. (Chapter 23) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 yay, my fic is engaging :'D ...I think :'DDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 ... of course Konohamaru's ninth. >.> But how come Konohamaru can use Thunder Chakra on a Rasengan? Wasn't Kakashi unable to do it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 He was only unable to because he hadn't practiced like Naruto it IS really hard to do And yeah, Konohamaru is ninth My fic can't even be canon anymore, I don't think xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Yeah. And honestly, I like the abilities you gave your main cast. They're really interesting and diverse, which is great. Fuuta is probably my favorite Jutsu-wise, despite the fact his Jutsus are so overpowered (Daisuke being second at this point, but I'm not sure how far he goes with his powers. So much potential in water control). Although, I'm pretty surprised that Shikamaru doesn't have an important role (yet. Only at 44, so I shouldn't make assumptions). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 44...you were at 18 half an hour ago... O_o And yeah, I thought hard about each and every power set~ Tho....everyone says Fuuta is overpowered XDD (he so is) It's interesting because Fuuta is nothing like Fusion and wait...why would Shikamaru (specifically) have a big role? O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Well, here's the thing that occurred to me. A group of people steal off the 8th Hokage and get him to go missing. Then, the 9th Hokage is attacked by two people who come from a certain group (don't think they revealed themselves as Kuchiki to him, though). [Also from the same incident as before] Therefore, the Leaf Village would probably need a strategic mind to figure out everything that's going on and plan a counterattack to stop them. Especially with the level of power that their dealing with, they're going to need the best, which, at this age, is most likely Shikamaru. Not only that, but if the Leaf Village is still an ally with the Sand Village, then after the 5th Kazekage goes missing, in my eyes, at least, the Leaf Village would do a similar thing in that case as well. But that's just assuming Shikamaru would actually take the job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 ...for some reason it never occured to me the Leaf Village would actually take action to their 8th Hokage going missing And their 9th Hokage being attacked ...why ;`; ..I mean um obviously the kuchiku are much to well-hidden Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Hence an investigation. But why wouldn't they take action? They took action when Sasuke was taken away. >.> Especially if it's Naruto's son. And even if they're well hidden, Shikamaru could probably figure out something at his age. And with the ninth Hokage being attacked, it's only with the detail that they were also at the 8th Hokage's kidnapping and he knew they were looking for Naruto, I think piece by piece could connect that they're searching for the Kyuubi shards. In other words, it's probably secretive but important enough for a good mind's involvement. Considering that Shikamaru could probably think of a counter based on Konohamaru's description of their attacks. But that's just my opinion of why Shikamaru would have an important role. I'm perfectly fine with the way you did it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 man if I redid KS I would do that ;-; For now I got the final 2 arcs after the current one planned out (kinda) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 That's good. I'll catch up soon; I'm on 59. =D But keep it the way you planned. That makes things so much simpler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 it does :'D Adding an investigation now would be wtfrandom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 I know. The reason I haven't continued with NB is because I kept on changing the ideas over and over again. It's FINALLY resting in my head as a good idea. But it's gone SO far away from Yugioh, it's not even funny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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