The Unborn Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Will Be Trying To Get Backgrounds made for the cards soon, When (if) I get the set done i will add the lore aswell but for now the cards may be broken, any feedback welcome. Sorry for the page being long as well. [img]http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/9569/412994.jpg[/img] [img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/9569/412994.jpg[/img] [img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/9569/412994.jpg[/img] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/9569/412994.jpg[/img] [img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/9569/412994.jpg[/img] [img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/9569/412994.jpg[/img] [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/9569/412994.jpg[/img] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/9569/412994.jpg[/img] [img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/9569/412994.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 These are actually better than most people's first attempts. Just a few things: 1: On Prime, Lure, Jackal, Hunter, Space Blockade, and Prime Mk. II, the only things that should be capitalized are Trap Cards, Main Phase, Tribute, Field, Standby Phase, Life Points, and Machine-type. 2: On Mk. II, you should probably put either a requirement for the negation or reword the effect. Here it is with a requirement: Once per turn, this card may negate the effect of a Trap Card targeting one face-up Machine-type monster you control and destroy it. Here it is reworded: Negate the effects of Trap Cards that target face-up Machine-Type monsters you control. There's a bunch of other minor OCG (Official Card Grammar) errors I think I see, but I (and the rest of the YCM community) are too lazy to rewrite them from scratch. Please post the effects of your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon7OP Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 I focused more on the art. The card pictures are good in themselves, but i would delete the white background and use something else. I would suggest that, if you find white Background pictures, use a program like Paint.Net to add your own. It lets you customize how they look. Just a friendly suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Your Cap is bad. these card look fine, just for suggestion. Please pick a pics with have a bakcground color, not Black nor White Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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