bogey67 Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Well the stories like another installment of the Dragon Ball Universe. The story starts 4 years after the ending of GT. The main character is Rentustu (My Fan Char). [spoiler= Chapter 1: Arrival!] As always Goku and Vegeta were sparring. Vegeta gathered purple energy in his hands, and jolted, "GALICK GUN!!" "Instant Transmission!" Goku yelled, teleporting before it hit him. Vegeta growled, "Drat! Big Bang Attack!" The move failed to hit goku because a pod went in front of it! The pod landed with dents from Vegeta's move. The door opened slowly. A boy about Pan's age came out of the pod. He had a brown version of Goku's hair with black gloves and a red shirt. He yawned. Vegeta yelled, "Who are you?!" "Huh? Oh sorry. Im Rentustu. And You are? Vegeta and Goku?" Goku laughed, "You know our names?" "Yep! Only the two best warriors alive!" Ren jolted. Vegeta growled "Hear that Kakarot?! Someone thinks I'm strong!" "I came here to recieve training from one of you. I still need help controlling my Super Saiyan..." Vegeta grinned as Ren tucked in his tail, "I'll train you!" Ren smiled, "Thank you, Master Vegeta!" [/spoiler] [spoiler= Chapter 2: Master Vegeta] Rentustu quickly learned to control his super saiyan. He trained with Vegeta for hours. Then hours became days. It'd been about a month since Ren arrived. Vegeta said, "Okay! Give it a shot!" Ren got lightning around him but then it faded. "What am I missing?!" Ren scowled. "Your close to becoming a SSJ2! Don't Worry! Just as I taught Trunks, Never give up on your training if you wanna be strong!" Vegeta echoed. "I know, Master Vegeta..." Replied Ren. "Good. Oh and Rentustu! Here." Vegeta handed Ren white gloves. "I used to wear them. You can have them. But your lucky, I'm not always this generous!" Rentustu nodded as he replaced his black gloves with the white ones. "Awesome." Ren told Vegeta. "And Ren, no training tommorow. Okay?" "Yes master!" Replied Ren. Ren went to his house that he had rented. "What can I do tommorow...?" He thought. [/spoiler] [spoiler= Chapter 3: One's Love] Rentustu had an idea! He had recently been dating Pan. He called her and they would go on a date tommorow. The next day... Ren's arm was around Pan. They were drinking milkshakes as they were at a drive in movie theatre. Everything was going well, till the screen got ripped! A man calling himself "Android #77" appeared! He blasted everyone. Then he grabbed Pan and started squeezing her! "Hmph, Cmon and save your girlfriend, boy! Hahahaha!" "L-leave her alone!" Electric sparks gathered around Rentutsu and his hair turned yellow. He was a SSJ2! " You better let her go before I kill you!" Android #77 looked at Ren, "What is this?!" Ren replied in a serious voice, "This?! 'This' is my power!! I'll save you, Pan!" [/spoiler] [spoiler= Chapter 4: This is My Power!] "You understand, right?!" Jolted Ren. "Hmph, simply transforming won't help!" Said #77 uneasily. "Get ready!"Ren said as he kicked the Android's face. He dropped Pan, but Ren caught her. Pan looked him in the eye and said "Hehehe, thanks..." Ren let her down, "Let me finish him real quick!" Ren punched him in the face. "Hmph. Barely worth a worry... GALICK GUN!" #77 was finished but before he blew up he told Ren and Pan, "Just wait! Dr Gero wants vengeance! #78, #79, and #80 will show you! AHAHAHahahahah...." #77 fell with a devastating blast. Ren was glad Pan was safe. Pan said "Did you get hurt?" "I'm fine if your alright Pan." Ren replied. [/spoiler] [spoiler= Chapter 5: Senzu!] It was the next day and Ren and met up with his mentor, Vegeta. "Look Master Vegeta!" Ren turned Super Saiyan 2. Vegeta replied, "So your finally a Super Saiya-" Vegeta was interuppted do to a falling pod. Ren smiled. Vegeta looked at Ren yelling, "Why are you smiling?!" "My friend Senzu's finally here." Senzu popped out of the pod saying, "Gee Hi Ren..." GRUMBLE "Oh sorry I'm hungry..." Rentustu said, "Lets get you some food." Senzu ate some sushi and some pork and was satisified. 3 days later... Senzu started acting strange. Although Ren wasn't worried, there was something going on with him and Ren's not stopping till he finds out. [/spoiler] [spoiler= Chapter 6: A Secret?] Ren was investagating alot lately, but one day, Senzu caught him spying. "Why are you spying on me Ren?!" Senzu yelled. "None of your business..." replied Ren. "Oh really?!" "Yep" Ren said. Senzu smiled, "I'll make a deal with you. We'll go to the fields to spar. If I win, You'll tell me what youre up to. You win, you get off the hook." "Fine!" Ren said quickly as he blasted off. Later... "Ready!!" They both called out. The two both sent out a barrage of punches, exchanging their blows. "Huff..." Ren groaned. He went SSJ2. Senzu could only go to SSJ. "Thats it Senzu! Im using my finishing move!" Ren called out. Senzu blinked, "HUH?!?!" A dragon came out of Ren's palm. Another one came out of the other palm. The two wrapped around Senzu. "DRAGON'S FLARE!" Ren yelled as the dragons exploded. Ren didn't make the explosion that big because they were only sparring. Senzu moaned, "You win..." "But I'll tell you anyway," said Ren, "Your hiding something, I know! I'm gonna find out what!" Senzu laughed, "Heh...ya got me...Heh...But, It's only fair if I tell you. I have a crush on Bulla..." "Huh? Vegeta and Bulma's daughter?" "Yup." Ren replied. Ren laughed. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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