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[Max Darkness]

What dorm should I go in?

Also I have to say I dont do my own OCG (people fix it for me) , and no I dont want to learn.

 

[spoiler=]

 

 

It's rather unpowered. I take it that it's a game-ender, or designed to turn a duel around. However, considering you'd need 15 "Tiki" monsters in your Graveyard to give it decent ATK, and it has no defense against effects, so that counts against you. I'd said Ra.

[Alexis Rhodes]

Max, why do you always find at least something wrong with my cards.

 

Those comments make me want to go re-make the card.

[Guest Daemon]

So you see it as a?

I see it more as a Rock.

[Max Darkness]

Max, why do you always find at least something wrong with my cards.

 

Those comments make me want to go re-make the card.

 

Because I rate honestly.

[CMRenji]

@Alexis Rhodes: I would up the ATK boost, since you'd nee a good portion of your Deck in the Graveyard for it to be useful. And perhaps increase it's DEF to like 800-1000.

[Alexis Rhodes]

lol I'm getting attacked by comments on how to make it better.

 

The next time I make a card I'll make sure theres nothing wrong with it.

[Guest Daemon]

There is always going to be something wrong with a card.

[Anti-Apocryphal]

"This card can only be Summoned by it's own effect. When you have fewer Life Points than your opponent, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. This card's ATK is equal to the number of monsters with "Tiki" in their names in your Graveyard x200."

 

 

If another OCG teacher sees something wrong with this, please correct it- because I'm not sure, although 90% sure, about the "fewer." "names".

[Guest Daemon]

Future, do a rating on Funky's. It is for the contest.

[Anti-Apocryphal]

Alright.

 

@Funky- Here's the OCG correction.

 

 

"When this card is Summoned, you can banish two of your opponent's monsters with 1800 ATK or more."

 

 

 

 

 

 

1/3

[shadowserpent]

My turn

 

 

Lore: This card cannot be normal or set summoned. This card cannot be special summoned unless you have 1000 life points or less left. You take no battle damage involving this card, also your opponent cannot attack you directly while this card is on the field. If this card is attacked, and destroyed while in face down defense position, your opponent takes half of his strongest monster's ATK as direct damage.

[Max Darkness]

My turn

 

 

Lore: This card cannot be normal or set summoned. This card cannot be special summoned unless you have 1000 life points or less left. You take no battle damage involving this card, also your opponent cannot attack you directly while this card is on the field. If this card is attacked, and destroyed while in face down defense position, your opponent takes half of his strongest monster's ATK as direct damage.

 

I don't know if I'm able to give an OCG fix, so I'll just look at balance.

 

It's very situational (best used with the "Archfiends"), and a dead draw unless the time is right. Also, since it doesn't specify that it is Summoned in face-down Defense Position, and the fact it can't be Set means its final effect can never be used. It's far too weak to ever be used except in the condition described, which I don't think is the idea. 0/3 for balance.

[shadowserpent]

:U, maybe I mis understand what set means I was always told that set meant like tribute (from my friend in rl ( _ _))

 

What does set mean then o3 o It was meant to be able to go down in face down position.

[Guest Daemon]

My turn

 

 

Lore: This card cannot be normal or set summoned. This card cannot be special summoned unless you have 1000 life points or less left. You take no battle damage involving this card, also your opponent cannot attack you directly while this card is on the field. If this card is attacked, and destroyed while in face down defense position, your opponent takes half of his strongest monster's ATK as direct damage.

Image needs work. I cannot tell what it is and text should never be in it.

It does match the name, a little.

It should not be a fiend for it looks like a human too much, if I am right.

Maybe a fairy, they can be dark.

1/3.

[Max Darkness]

:U, maybe I mis understand what set means I was always told that set meant like tribute (from my friend in rl ( _ _))

 

What does set mean then o3 o It was meant to be able to go down in face down position.

 

To Set a monster is to place it face-down, usually in Defense Position, the field.

 

However, your card says that it cannot be Set, nor can it be Special Summoned except by its effect, so it will never be face-down on the field.

[Guest Daemon]

You cannot Special Set. It is only face up Defense or Attack Position.

[shadowserpent]

ahh I understand, well then I might want to try to create a differnt card. :U //trys again

[Max Darkness]

You cannot Special Set. It is only face up Defense or Attack Position.

 

But you can Special Summon in face-down Defense Position (eg "The Shallow Grave")

[Guest Daemon]

Okay, unless specified otherwise.

[shadowserpent]

ahh now I know what I need to do, I need to specify in the card that this goes face down, or something like that , got it now. let me fix it.

[CMRenji]

My turn

 

 

Lore: This card cannot be normal or set summoned. This card cannot be special summoned unless you have 1000 life points or less left. You take no battle damage involving this card, also your opponent cannot attack you directly while this card is on the field. If this card is attacked, and destroyed while in face down defense position, your opponent takes half of his strongest monster's ATK as direct damage.

It can't be Set and considering only a complete moron would attack it while it's face-up, so that part needs changing. How about allowing it to be Normal Summoned and Set, but it's effect only works if your LP are below 1000.

 

Besides that, I think it's fine. The fact that the card is very situational with low ATK/DEF and has plethora of Positive Effects, I think the card balances itself out.

[shadowserpent]

oh that's a good idea :o now i deleted this card by accident so... I'll try to use gimp

[Guest Mr. Striker]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned unless your Life Points are 1000 or less. You take no battle damage involving this card. Your opponent cannot declare a direct attack while this card is on the field. If this card is destroyed by battle while in face-down Defense Position, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of their strongest monster.

 

Wow, so many errors. Some originality that is poorly executed. 1/3

 

[spoiler=More Grades from my OCG Exam]

[spoiler=Alexis Rhodes]N/A

 

[spoiler=Kazooie]I'm starting to think you belong in Obelisk with your OCG. I am impressed. You even asked the essental question that most people missed. 10/10 or A+.

 

 

 

[spoiler=OCG Exam Answer]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by banishing 2 Warrior-Type monsters. From where was the essential question. For this, I will say from your Graveyard. When this card attacks, destroy all face-up Spell Cards your opponent controls.

 

 

There you go.

[Guest Daemon]

Okay, so

2/10 for Funky so far and

2/10 for Siempre.

[Anti-Apocryphal]

@Mr. Striker- Isn't "...battle damage..." "...Battle Damage..."?