Guest Daemon Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Striker, can you fix the OCG on mine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Man I sucked ;o; oh well, that's why I'm here to learn. FACT ;) || We all are here to this :D I have a question. As Head of Balancing, can I comment on posted cards, or do they have to be OCG-perfect before then? I think that there's no need to wait to balance a card since you advice how to change the effect itself for being fair and not the Grammar of the Card ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mr. Striker Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 2 Level 4 Fiend or Spellcaster-Type monsters.This card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. Equip Spell Cards cannot be equipped to this card. You cannot increase the ATK and DEF of this card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot be the targeted by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. On the third End Phase after Summoning this monster, return it to your Extra Deck and Special Summon the Xyz Material Monsters used to Xyz Summon this monster. You cannot Xyz Summon this monster after 3 Standby Phases have passed after this card returns to your Extra Deck. Bold is fix.Italic is confused wording. Since I don't know much about Xyz monsters yet, I did what I could fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Daemon Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Okay, I shall send out an assignment for those who want it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 I am ready to teach. Anything I can do to help some students? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Kyng of Ice Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Ok, examiniation time. [spoiler=The Question]Your up against a duelist with Blue Eyes White Dragon in Attack Position and 1000 Life Points left. He also has Burden of the Mighty. You have 500 Life Points and a monster in your hand. You must make the monster in your hand that will win you the duel. The more card's you destoy the better the effect. It MUST be Level 4 or Lower. It cannot be a Spell/Trap/Ritual/Fusion/Synchro/Exceed. [spoiler=ADVICE]Remember: Try get your OCG right. 3/3Try to keep it balanced. 3/3Try to make it look good, with a nice overall flow. 3/3Then a special 1/1 that only I can give out. An exam must be completed by EVERY STUDENT, whether they are accepted or not. This way we can even put unaccepted students in a dorm. Due by date is: Tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Daemon Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 One question, can it lead to us losing as well, like a draw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Kyng of Ice Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 no, there are no winners or losers, we just want to see your progress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Daemon Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 No want I mean is, can the effect of the card allow the person and the opponent lead to a draw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 I feel special I guess :U, anyway on the card. I already have an idea :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Kyng of Ice Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 well, do you win in a draw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Daemon Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 No, but if it makes you win, it could lead to being OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mr. Striker Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 no, there are no winners or losers, we just want to see your progress. Also student badges now up: [spoiler=Badges][spoiler=shadowserpent] {img}http://www.iaza.com/work/110612C/iaza15504646153800.jpg{/img} [spoiler=funky99] {img}http://www.iaza.com/work/110612C/iaza15504631329100.jpg{/img} [spoiler=Kazooie] {img}http://www.iaza.com/work/110612C/iaza15504622362800.jpg{/img} [spoiler=MMII] {img}http://www.iaza.com/work/110612C/iaza15504615712600.jpg{/img} Put them in your sig if you want. Anyone missing, PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funky6399 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 ok this exam souds fun! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Do I pm it? Or can I post it here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Daemon Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 I suggest you post it here so all the teachers can give you a grade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funky6399 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 here from funky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Daemon Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 I'll start. I've seen that image on a real card, I forget which.Divine should never be used as an attribute.The name is more suited for a subtype based on feelings. Picture is more for a warrior. Type does not work with the entire card.1/3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Well *coughs uncomfortably*Let's just see what the Ocg master can tell you.To me, it'd be slifer...... What Daemon said too.You need originality, proper grammar, inspiration and style. Guess that's why you're here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Well, since I'm a Balance Teacher, I'll talk about it's Balance. It's pretty OP'd. A card like Man-Eater Bug, destroys 1 monster, while this card lets you banish 2 monsters. In terms of balance, I think an effect something like: "When this card is Summoned, banish 1 face-up monster your opponent controls with the highest ATK." is more balanced. I also recommend decreasing it's ATK a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 @ Funky: Balance-wise, it's not good. A Level 4 Fiend that can banish your opponent's trumps without cost. 0/3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 What dorm should I go in?Also I have to say I dont do my own OCG (people fix it for me) , and no I dont want to learn. [spoiler=] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 @Kyng of Ice- Thanks for PM'ing badge. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Daemon Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 I suggest Ra.I really do not see your card as a fiend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 So you see it as a? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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