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"When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, select 1 face-down Trap or Magic Spell Card on your opponent's side of the field. The selected card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard."

 

 

Seems like a basic effect.

 

Well I was just testing what someone told me to do. But as you can see, yeah i need some help with wording.

 

"When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, select 1 face-down Trap or Magic Spell Card on your opponent's side of the field. The selected card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard."

 

 

Seems like a basic effect.

 

Well I was just testing what someone told me to do. But as you can see, yeah i need some help with wording.

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Thanks for your comments guys. Here is the card for the exam:

[spoiler=Irine, Paladin of Heavens]392601i.jpg

LORE:If this is the only card in your hand, you can Special Summon it. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. Once per turn you can decrease this cards ATK points by 500 to destroy one Spell or Trap card on the field.

 

Hope you like it please comment and rate.

 

I really liked the idea of Matheus Mariano II.

Once or Twice a week we could have a contest in which two students will battle. The one student who wins gets promoted. We could also have group contests. The students separate into two groups and battle.

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Thanks for your comments guys. Here is the card for the exam:

[spoiler=Irine, Paladin of Heavens]392601i.jpg

LORE:If this is the only card in your hand, you can Special Summon it. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. Once per turn you can decrease this card's ATK points by 500 to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field.

 

Hope you like it please comment and rate.

OCG fixes are in bold. Words like this should be omitted.

 

Overall, the card's got a nice idea to it, but it's basically saying "If this card is the only card in your hand, Special Summon 1 level 8 or lower Synchro monster OR 1 Rank 4 Xyz monster." Which is kinda a shame. The Xyz part I'm not too fussed with though, that'd be fine, however I would recommend making the Special Summoned monster not be able to be used for a Synchro Summon. The S/T destruction effect seems like a pretty good bonus to Warriors, I like that part as it is, since it won't last more than a turn anyway.

 

Overall, really good job. Very minor OCG errors, and only slightly OP'd as is, imo. If you just make it so that the Special Summoned monster can't be used for Synchro summons, it'd be even better.

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Ok, guys, I am going to leave the Academy and therefore will be reinquishing my Principal title. Therefore, I shall have to decide for a new Principal. Normally it should go to Elemental Dragon, however that wouldn't be fun! :lol: So! I shall be putting up a challenge for teachers to go for. Unlike most challenges, it must be Obelisk standard, something I haven't seen here yet. Up for the challenge?

 

By the way, I'll be updating the list for the new principal on request so don't worry. Of course you could make a new club, but whatever the new principal chooses I hope you've enjoyed your time with me as principal, although to be fair I haven't really done much.

 

Ok, teachers, you must make a card that:

 

1) Acts as a Staple: For those who don't know, a Staple is a card that can fit in any and every kind of deck.

2) Is Obelisk Grade: Well, it must be extremelly good.

 

How I'll mark it:

 

1) OCG: Well we all know OCG is official card grammer. It must be perfect.

2) Balancing: It must be fair, but useful to be a Staple.

3) Style: It must not only be good, but it must look good.

4) Perfect Usage of the Card Maker: Ooh, never heard of this one, eh? Well, simply put, it is using the card maker to the best of your limits. This includes understanding of usage for Circulation, Set ID and Serial Number. I will monitor this greatly.

 

The best is principal! Simple, no?

 

Ok then, Teachers. I'm have made a contest for the occasion, so post them here. I will be monitoring them INTENSELY. Below is the link:

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/253698-card-maker-academy-principalship-contest/

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OCG fixes are in bold. Words like this should be omitted.

 

Overall, the card's got a nice idea to it, but it's basically saying "If this card is the only card in your hand, Special Summon 1 level 8 or lower Synchro monster OR 1 Rank 4 Xyz monster." Which is kinda a shame. The Xyz part I'm not too fussed with though, that'd be fine, however I would recommend making the Special Summoned monster not be able to be used for a Synchro Summon. The S/T destruction effect seems like a pretty good bonus to Warriors, I like that part as it is, since it won't last more than a turn anyway.

 

Overall, really good job. Very minor OCG errors, and only slightly OP'd as is, imo. If you just make it so that the Special Summoned monster can't be used for Synchro summons, it'd be even better.

 

Thanks for the comment. While i was making the card I was more focusing on destroying Burden OF the Mighty and i forgot the Synchro and Xyz monsters.

 

BTW does anyone know where i can find elven pictures?

And if someone is looking for image galleries for their cards i can recommend some artists i know:

Genzoman from DeviantArt

El grimlock from DeviantArt

El walrok from DeviantArt

Gabriel Rodriguez from DeviantArt

Sandara from DeviantArt

Death Fiend of Magic (Daemon Here on YCM) from DeviantArt

John Avon (HAs his own site, just search his name on google)

Jazin Kay (From YCM) His gallery is on Photobucket

Kai Hiwatari (Kuroda KAito on YCM) His gallery is on Photobucket

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Kid Gogeta Jr.: Very basic card. It's pretty balanced but it lacks originality. High Slifer.

 

Jurimeep: I think Lv 4 would have suited it better. After all, it can destroy an opponent's monster and deal some hefty damage. Kinda OP'd, I think instead of destroying itself, banishing itself after activating it's effect would be better. Mid Slifer.

 

We should really post some more updates for the Heads, there's been quite a few more people applying to become students.

 

@Kyng of Ice: I'll try to take on that challenge. Don't know if I'll stand a chance against some of these guys though. :lol:

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To be quite honest, I only made the Death Synchro requirement because Max created his own support for it. I think it would have helped if he posted a link to the support.

 

Not at all.

 

People, well, at least the good people in CC, judge based on how usable it is in the meta. That means only counting the cards in the contest and the cards in the game. All three cards were pretty useless in the meta. But, your's was the least useless. :'D

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I think a new thread would be necessary since only the Thread maker can edit the first post. And since Kyng is retiring, the new Principal should have the ability to edit the first post.

 

On another note, if I somehow win and become Principal, all Academy Teachers will be required to wear Tiny Miniskirts! :lol:

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