Voltanis the Adjudicator Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Horrible picture.If it was a mother of nature, shouldn't it's Attribute be EARTH? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltanis the Adjudicator Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Isn`t mother nature supposed to be a goddess? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LC Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Then if she's a goddess shouldn't it be Divine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 I have to agree with Deathly. Its effect helps EARTH, nature is EARTH. For my side, As long as this card is on the field, all EARTH monsters gain 500 ATK. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, add 1 Field Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. I'd say high Slifer to low Ra. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltanis the Adjudicator Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 The card seems pretty balanced, maybe a little OP'd. Since all face-up EARTH monsters gain 500 ATK, and you can get a free Field Spell, you could increase a field full of monster's ATK by possibly 800-1000. And it says you can add a Field Spell Card to your hand once per turn. I think it would be better if you could just add 1 Field Spell Card to your hand when it's summoned, since people probably wouldn't have more than a couple Field Spells in their Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 When making a card try to think of the following: - Does the card serve a specific purpose or a versatile purpose. It should be able to serve one or the other.- Does the card effect match what the card itself portrays - In your case you had what appears to be a maiden in bandages, and you made it mother nature, which seems horribly off. Everything else is covered in general, but I'd advise you to remember these two points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 I think there's no relatively between LIGHT and EARTH, so High SLifer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Hello! It's your principal! I would like you to know, I'm calling in for the results of the exam. I'd like them done ASAP so we can get over with it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Hey everybody! I'm back :) SO, what's going on here? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveShakespere Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Hello, I am new to these forums, found this link, and want to join the Acadamy! Please instruct me as to what I am supposed to do to enter! Thank you very much, Steven Shakespere Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Hello, I am new to these forums, found this link, and want to join the Acadamy! Please instruct me as to what I am supposed to do to enter! Thank you very much, Steven Shakespere Post an example of a card you've made, and we'll judge it to decide which dorm to put you in. (Osiris, Ra or Obelisk) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveShakespere Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Post an example of a card you've made, and we'll judge it to decide which dorm to put you in. (Osiris, Ra or Obelisk)Well, you see, the only cards I've really made are of my friends, and they focus on inside jokes... So, some of the card text might not make sense, per say... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Well, you see, the only cards I've really made are of my friends, and they focus on inside jokes... So, some of the card text might not make sense, per say... We can't really judge those. Are you able to make a realistic card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveShakespere Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 We can't really judge those. Are you able to make a realistic card?That's what I was afraid of... Yes, I can try to make one! It'll be my first shot at something that isn't a joke, but we'll see what happens! I will have it up shortly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 That's what I was afraid of... Yes, I can try to make one! It'll be my first shot at something that isn't a joke, but we'll see what happens! I will have it up shortly. Excellent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveShakespere Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Excellent.This is a little closer to serrious card-making... These are the start of a set I'm working on. edit: fixed upload error Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Erm...you know how to post cards? I'm the Principal, by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveShakespere Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Erm...you know how to post cards? I'm the Principal, by the way.Me? Umm... apparently not? Nice to meet you, by the way! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Well, you click the card itself in the card maker. An image code should appear. Copy and Paste the image code in the place you wish to post it. For OCG: Basic, basic, basic. I don't see many OCG errors except "each" should be "all". I think low Ra. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveShakespere Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Well, you click the card itself in the card maker. An image code should appear. Copy and Paste the image code in the place you wish to post it. For OCG: Basic, basic, basic. I don't see many OCG errors except "each" should be "all". I think low Ra.Ah, thank you. And, if you don't mind my asking a very, very n00b question... what is OCG? :unsure: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 OCG is "Official Card Grammar". I agree with Striker on his points, except for the placing. It's obvious you understand basic OCG, but the problem with the cards is that they're not "Realistic" in the sense they are Pop-Culture cards. Now, I'm not entirely sure on whether that was what was originally meant for entries, but to me a realistic card is one that has a relative chance of being produced. An "Azumangah" theme would never truly be produced, by any means whatsoever. However, before I go too into this, I would rather it be cleared up whether we're allowing pop-culture cards, or only "realistic" cards. From what I can see, I'd personally say a high Slifer, but it appears I may be too strict on this, I am currently unsure. EDIT: Also, remember to use full-stops in your OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveShakespere Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 OCG is "Official Card Grammar". I agree with Striker on his points, except for the placing. It's obvious you understand basic OCG, but the problem with the cards is that they're not "Realistic" in the sense they are Pop-Culture cards. Now, I'm not entirely sure on whether that was what was originally meant for entries, but to me a realistic card is one that has a relative chance of being produced. An "Azumangah" theme would never truly be produced, by any means whatsoever. However, before I go too into this, I would rather it be cleared up whether we're allowing pop-culture cards, or only "realistic" cards. From what I can see, I'd personally say a high Slifer, but it appears I may be too strict on this, I am currently unsure. EDIT: Also, remember to use full-stops in your OCG. Thank you. And I was unsure as to what sort of card was meant... There was no "must be realistic or actually viable" disclaimer, so I was unsure as to what to do... If this is the case, I can try again... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 The cards seem pretty balanced. Simple, but balanced. I would recommend High Slifer since the effects are simple and a bit boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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