q2r5o900 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 [/color][/size]people can join my fan fic any time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 right im making a new fan fic for england and america. join any time!episode 1 the start of the beginnig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ingo Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 First of all This isn't Fan Fic and second DONT TRIPLE POST !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 here we go hope you enjoiy it! remember my poll! episode 1 the start of the begining.  One day there was a boy called Ash and he wanted to win the finals of the elite 4and he said "it's time to start my pokemon jouney!"Now he ate is breakfast and asked his mum that he will be going away for a long time.She said "here is your bag."Ash said "thanks Mum!"So he set of.He said "i am going to meet Markus at his house."He opened the door "THUD!"Markus and Ash said "ouch!"  to be continuedi will triple post!right did you like that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ingo Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 DO NOT TRIPLE POST !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 episode 2 the verity lake Diasaster! I want to speak to daj,darmaster and ycmaker please! Markus said "let's go to lake verity!"Ash said "ok."So they set off to lake verity and saw saw Dawn and Professer Rowan!Markus said who are they."Ash said that is Proesser Rowan and my freind Dawn."Markus said "freind! i am your freind!"Ash said she is my second best freind!"Markus said who is first best freind."Ash said "you."Markus said "really!"Ash said yes."Markus said hooray!"Until Dawn and Rowan went back to rowan's lab.Rowan said "excuase me."Dawn said "by Ash."leaving rowan's breif case behind.Markus said "let's get our selfs a garados!"Ash said"ok!"Suddenly 2 starly's went to atack Ash and Markus!Markus said "let's see whats in the breif case!"Ash said "ok!"there were 1 pokemon in a pokeball there were 3 pokemon altogether and three pokeballs.Markus said "i choose you chimchar lvl 10!"Ash said i choose you turtwig lvl 10!"To Be Continued! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Ok!right then were is daj,darkmster and yc maker!i am 8 years oldby by see you tomorrows series fan fic!by by! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ingo Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Still now you posted 4 times !! And that doesn't mean anything that you are 8 years old !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 i am Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ingo Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Like i know that you are but that doesn't mean you have to triple post twice ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Posts Merged. Â Ban, see you in 5 days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ingo Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Posts Merged. Â Ban' date=' see you in 5 days.[/quote']Â Ban ?? You didn't Ban him .. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Posts Merged. Â Ban' date=' see you in 5 days.[/quote']Â Kaze hes not banned yet lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 im back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 episode 3 Markus and Ash get in to trouble! Ash said "Turtwig razor leaf!"Markus said "chimchar flame wheel!"suddenley Dawn went to veritey lake!She said "sigh some one's been in thebreif case."Ash said "it was us see Turtwig and Chimchar."Markus said yeah we were the one'swho did it."Dawn said "well come with me."Ash said "ok."Markus said "ok."So they went to professer rowan'slab.When they got there professerrowan was unhappyAsh and Markus said "here is yourpokemon."Rowan said "no there your's now."Markus said "really."Ash said "really."Rowan said "yes."Ash said "cool."Markus said "hooray."Rowan said here is yourpokedex and pokeballs."Ash obtained thepokedex AshAlso obtained thepokeballsMarkus obtainedthe pokedex Markusalso obtained thepokeballs.So they went to tell there mum.After that they went tooreburgh city.Suddenley "BUMP!" to be continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 episode 4 defeating roak. Suddenley "BUMP!"Ash said "ouch!"Liam said "aghh!"And Nathen said "god!"Markus said "who areyou."Liam said "i am Liam."Nathen said and i amNathen."Ash said "do you want to come with uson our journey."Liam said "ok."But Nathen said "No."and he also said "i am going on my own."Liam,Ash and Markus said "that isok."Until they went into oreburgh city.roak said " i will battle Ash first!"Ash said "ok!"Both of them said "let us start the battle!"Ash said "Go Turtwig!"lvl 11 50 hpRoak said "Go Onix"lvl 15 80 hpAsh said "Turtwig razor leaf!"It took 40 hp!onix 40hpTurtwig 50hpRoak said "defence curl!"Ash said "razor leaf!"Onix o hpTurtwig 50 hpRoak said "return onix and gogeodude!"Ash said turtwig sythreisis!"Geodude 80 hpturtwg 90 hproak said "what the!"Ash said "earthquarke!"gedude and crandios ohpAsh said yeh we got theboulder badge! the next 2 episodes will be out tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 sorry i have changed it and the 2 episodes are going to be on today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 episode 5 ash starts to battle gardina. Ash,Markus and Liam went to the pokemoncenter in oreburgh city.Nurse Joy said " haveyou defeated the gymleader."All of them said "yes!"Until they saw nathen!Ash said "what are youdoing here."Nathen said"i am havinga rest from my battle."Markus said "you came with piplup."Nathen said "i no."Markus said "what are yourpowers."Nathen said "water gun,bubblebeam,tackleand growl."Nathen got upand set off toertana city.Nurse joy said"here are yourpokemon.Ash said "thank you."When they got out sidethey went through a caveand they found a pokemon.Also Ash captured a onix,Markus captured mediteand Liam captured geodude.After they went throughthe cave they gotto jublife city.They went to the TVcentre.They went todress up therepokemon.After that theywent into a forestand caputured a pokemon!Ash captured bidoofMarcus captured shinxand liam captured starly.In the mean time they gotto floroama town.After floaroma townErtaner city!They got in the gym.gardner said"Ash challengeme"Ash said "ok."Ash said"Go starly"lvl 10gardner said "Goroselia                                          To be continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen Moon Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 5 posts in a row! dont do it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MasterOfMagicians Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Keep going with it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 This is really really really bad. I am sorry q2r5and alot of digits, but the level of this fanfic is bad, really bad. -10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 here comes episode 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 episode 6 a meeting in velingstone and liam leaves. So Ash and his freindswere in ertana citygym.So they continued thebattle.Ash said"starly steel wing!"starly 40 hproselia 40 hp.gardner said"magical leaf!"starly 10 hproselia 40hp.Ash said "starly wing attack!"starly 10 hproselia 0 hp.Gardner said "returngreat battle there Ash!"Ash said "thanks!"Gardner said "Go cherrybuie lvl 19!"Ash said "starly steel wing!"starly 10 hpcherbuie 0 hp.Gardner said "you have done itagain."Gardner said "for my last pokemonis bilbareil lvl 20!"Ash said "wing attack!"Gardner said "dodge it!"Ash said "earthquarke!"Gardner said "no!"Starly 10 hpbilbareil 0 hp.Ash said "i ot the forest badge!"Until they came outside.There was some stealers over there!Ash said "who are you!"unkown said "we are team galactic."Ash said "let's have a battle!"Grunt 1 said "ok!"Grunt 2 said "ok!"Liam said "Go chimchar lvl 17!"Grunt 1 said "Go purley lvl 19!"Ash said "Go Turtwig lvl 17!"Grunt 2 said "Go wurmple lvl 10!"Ash said "razor leaf!"wurmple 0 hppurley 0 hpchimchar 60 hpturtwig 60 hp.Grunt 1 and 2 said "we are blastingoff again!"So they went to velingstoneand Liam said "i am leavig!"Ash said "ok!"  To Be Continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
q2r5o900 Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 sorry fokes i will be back dudes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 triple posting and the chapter is still of very bad quality. Look at other people`s fanfics and try to learn of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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