Classic Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 [color="#2F4F4F"][center][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]Title says almost all. I don't really sketch much but i do it occasionally for fun. Usually when I'm bored at school/home lol. Took roughly 15 minutes, but i thought it turned out looking kind-of cool >.<. Anyways Critique/Criticize all you want but there will most likely be little improvement to my sketching xD. A finalized version with color will be posted later.. Lack of shading is due to this lol. Anyways Here: [Spoiler= Its 1024 x 955 pixels so i put in spoiler] [IMG]http://i677.photobucket.com/albums/vv140/gefhx/scan0005-1.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] My Deviantart Account is AMProfessional.deviantart.com just to make sure there's no confusion. [/b][/font][/center][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 I see a few issues in the arm on the left woth the way the lines are draw making it look impossible as there aren't the needed dimensions also there is a line under the head that messes up the flow of the front of the body The feet are also serioisly confusing me, especially the one on the left... plus they don't habe the same style, one is point claws while the other appears more box like Yeah... thats what I have to say... keep on doodling and you might be able to get really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 [color="#2F4F4F"][font="Century Gothic"][center][b]=O you got a name change! OT: I forgot to post the style: one side (right) was supposed to be demon-like, and one (left) was supposed to be angel-like (xD thats the reason for foot/ wing-arm differences) Anyways I'm planning on touching it up, thanks for your opinion, btw some of those lines on the left arm were supposed to be erased.... Lol, will touch up when I get on my comp... (on iPad ATM) Also thanks for the critique so soon after post ^^'[/b][/center][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted June 8, 2011 Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 No problem... and yeah, everyone be doin' name changes atm and the differences in style, angel demon us easiest to show with colors or wings or hair style or outfit design... not the appearance of claws, Lol and awesome about the extra lines, make sure to get rid of thr correct lines though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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