Buffer Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Take a look at my cards thank youThis last one effect dose not make much sense so i'll post what it says in case someone will want to help and reword this if you do i'll give you 3 positve reps thanksplease post a detailed commenet to tell me how to improve the cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 need some major improvements like ocg and grammar and some are overpowered. you're new so you're still learning, so 6/10 :D keep practicing and you'll get better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 please people give detailed instructions on how i can improve these cards and serisly help with the badly worded spell card effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 now that would take some time. im not an ocg expert myself, no, but i can tell these cards have grammatical errors. words such as Life Points, Summon, Deck, Spell, Trap, Monster (only when you use it as "Monster Card"), Graveyard, etc. should start with capital letters. Instead of saying 6 stars or less, say below Lvl. 6 or something similar. Don't place any sort of descriptions in effect cards, e.g your dark wizard card. just make it say "This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly." And the last resor spell card is totally messed! that card is very very unrealistic! hope all of this helps :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 What are you talking about theres a kinda old spell card out there that will do basicaly the same thing i think i have it somewhere in a box with the other 10,000 other yugioh cards i own. when i find it i'll post it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 What are you talking about theres a kinda old spell card out there that will do basicaly the same thing i think i have it somewhere in a box with the other 10' date='000 other yugioh cards i own. when i find it i'll post it[/quote']Â hmm well i dont play yugioh anymore so idk...it just seems totally unfair to me...thats all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 See here it is still don't belive me google it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 yeah but this is different from your card. your card says your opponents deck goes to the graveyard. this is saying all monsters on both sides are removed from play in graveyard and deck in a very unlikely situation. theres a big diff between graveyard and play! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 I guess but this is what i based the cards effect off of and your loseing two spellcasters and after all the card dose say last resort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 well its your card so each to their own i suppose :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dongaboy Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 WOWur the best noob ive seenA little more improvement and ull be the greatest card maker on this sightso shant we say great images and good day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 After this wounderful conversation i've disided your right so i re did the card heres the new finished card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 yea that makes things much more balanced and now fits the "last resort" title :) nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Thanks for the all advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
googlerocker2007 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 u are the nicest guy and best noob card maker ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
googlerocker2007 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 and now to say something in dutch. Ik houd pool van partijenFigure out what i just said in dutch an i'll give you two good reps first to pm me wins cant tell any one in the forms Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted February 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 I know the anser sending you the message now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
googlerocker2007 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 sorry some one won Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 oh darn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megakenny Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 well some of the cards are overpowered and the last card makes no sense whatsoever but my fave cards are spellcasters and some of those spellcasters were great 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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