So Legit You Quit Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 Still nothing I used to make. D: [IMG]http://i806.photobucket.com/albums/yy347/_SF3_/Signatures/BatmanXmenLP.png[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 Too much randomness bro. Try cleaning up your fractal work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 Thanks, this is the first ive really tried to make anything just using fractals like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 You [b]over[/b]killed it with the effects. It would've been better with textures and just basically a manipulation. However, I'd like to go over some main points. [list] [*]Perspective: This is the main issue here. It doesn't really build up the image or the composition. The two focals are pretty much in different moods. Wolverine's mouth is open, hence he's shouting which means batman should be alerted and not confidently standing there. Everything needs to work together for an image of such style to make sense. [*]Lighting: The lighting here is pretty much all over the place. As I said, overkill with the effects. You gave to many lightsources which basically made it harder for you to blend. [*]Composition: Overall artwork needs to be composed better. Since you have a tablet, you might wanna paint over Wolverine's mouth just to give it a more of an "assassination" and a quieter atmosphere so that Batman does actually fit. I think the depth could use a little more work as well. Try to use adjustment layers a lot at the end just to give it a more developed feeling. [/list] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 Thank you Ken. I'll be sure to remember these things when I make a new one. And would you care to be my teacher (for the ungifted school)? And give me assignments and such? I work better when I have someone pushing me to do better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 Sure why not. Alright your first assignment starts now. I want three conceptual pieces (something with a concept, so preferably manipulation but if you can pull it with another style it'd be smart!) by tomorrow. Pm me them when you're done. If you don't get them done by tomorrow I'll increase each assignment by 2 pieces each time you don't get them done. If you can't because of something important then I'll give you extra time (don't expect too long tho haha). If you get stuck PM me. I'll get onto TeamViewer and help you out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 @Caveman: I actually like his perspective, as it is for the focals. But he chose the wrong baseline (the perspective line for the background). As well as the effects just destroy what this could have had (as you said). That also ruins the mood you had in this. I'd think a more noir effect would have suited this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 [quote name='CAVEMAN.' timestamp='1307156277' post='5252742'] Sure why not.Alright your first assignment starts now. I want three conceptual pieces (something with a concept, so preferably manipulation but if you can pull it with another style it'd be smart!) by tomorrow. Pm me them when you're done. If you don't get them done by tomorrow I'll increase each assignment by 2 pieces each time you don't get them done. If you can't because of something important then I'll give you extra time (don't expect too long tho haha). If you get stuck PM me. I'll get onto TeamViewer and help you out. [/quote] [b]I'll get at least two done tonight. I've got a friend over, and i cant ditch him to chill on the computer. As for anything tomorrow, or sunday I'm having girls over and cant start on anything till about 11-12.[/b] [quote name='Icyblue' timestamp='1307158288' post='5252848'] @Caveman: I actually like his perspective, as it is for the focals. But he chose the wrong baseline (the perspective line for the background). As well as the effects just destroy what this could have had (as you said). That also ruins the mood you had in this.I'd think a more noir effect would have suited this. [/quote] Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Magician Master5 Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 [img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/2002/394154.jpg[/img][/img] this is my first card what do you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 Do post cards in other people's threads and in showcase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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