Kakashi Hatake Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 [quote][b]Don't move this, it is in the right section, because I am asking for comments on the way it is made, not the story! [/b] Anyway, I need you to take a look at the PKMN Sprite comic below. It is a GIF, so I will post the link instead of the "IMG" code so that you won't miss anything. I would like to know what you think of the lay out and the way everything looks, but comment on the story if you want. Try to stay on the look, 'mkay? Also, try to read fast. The times are below. Title Screen : 10sec each Panels 1 - 3 : 20sec each Panels 4 - 6 : 10sec each Here is the link. ^^ http://i858.photobucket.com/albums/ab148/VanitusSpriter/Part1.gif Again, I am posting the link, not the IMG because some people have slower internet and it may make them skip a panel or two while everything else is loading.[/quote] Please read the above Quote... ^^' [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/8688/part1strip.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 lol, spoink sausage. OMIGAWD MUMS A MURDERER On topic now. It's real slow, to me. That may be because I'm a fast reader. I sorta reckon you should maybe try to make it a non-GIF comic, so a couple of the panels put together. I quite like how you sometimes put the little symbols in the speech bubbles. Very cute, and it works nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted June 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 [quote name='★Wishing Star★' timestamp='1307001895' post='5248366'] lol, spoink sausage. OMIGAWD MUMS A MURDERER On topic now. It's real slow, to me. That may be because I'm a fast reader. I sorta reckon you should maybe try to make it a non-GIF comic, so a couple of the panels put together. I quite like how you sometimes put the little symbols in the speech bubbles. Very cute, and it works nicely. [/quote] Thanks for the comment. ^^' I'll go ahead and post each panel. Give me a sec. '[size="1"]Should've done that to begin with...[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenacious Treachery Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 aawesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 Love it. Professor Juniper should've been in every region Yeah, it's a bit slow, so you should post each spanel seperate. And I want Spoink sausage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 [quote name='Darmanitan/Daruma Mode' timestamp='1307002377' post='5248376'] Professor Juniper should've been in every region [/quote] ^This For many reasons; 1. She's FEMALE. SO DIFFERENCE. 2. Last I checked, she's the youngest. YAY. 3. She's cute 4. She's cute 5. She's cute Why did it take intendo so long to think her up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted June 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 [center][b]Updated with new non-GIF version. Have fun and please comment on the layout.[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 Wishing Star, so quoting that Kakashi, so much easier to see now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 Its funny, nice and interesting, I'd love to know who was tickling "Mom" Keep it up And I'll take a side of Roast Farfetch'd with my Spoink Bacon!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WoShiGal Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 Nice Work ~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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