Ren✧ Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 [center]This is my first time to post in Showcase and this is my first piece that I think looks okay. What do you think and which one is better?[/center][center][spoiler='First Attempt(with and without border)'] [/center] [center][img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/8227/castformformsbannerwith.png[/img][/center][center][img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/7134/castformformsbanner.png[/img][/center][center][/spoiler][/center][center] [/center][center][spoiler='Second Attempt (Castform, the Blazing Sun)(with and without text)'][/center][center][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/1443/castformtheblazingsun.png[/img][/center][center] [/center][center][img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/864/castformtheblazingsunwi.png[/img][/center][center] [/center][center][/spoiler] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack of All Spades Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 Not bad. The borders are simplistic, and that's my onlyy concern. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted May 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 Yeah I don't particularly care for the borders either, but I thought I would try it out... Thanks for your rating, I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 [quote name='+Whambulance' timestamp='1306795198' post='5242818'] Not bad. The borders are simplistic, and that's my onlyy concern. 8.25/10 [/quote] READ THE RULES. DO NOT RATE IN THIS SECTION. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted May 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 [quote name='Daemon' timestamp='1306795998' post='5242846'] READ THE RULES. DO NOT RATE IN THIS SECTION. [/quote] Oh yeah forgot about that. Thanks Daemon for reminding me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiri Tsukikawa Posted June 6, 2011 Report Share Posted June 6, 2011 This is probably not the place to ask this but I've seen those letters before and I don't know what they mean. Could you please tell me what CnC means? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 6, 2011 Report Share Posted June 6, 2011 Comment, and critique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiri Tsukikawa Posted June 6, 2011 Report Share Posted June 6, 2011 Okay, thanks. I didn't know. So, +rep for you. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 Really no comments on the actually piece? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted June 8, 2011 Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 Looks a bit simplistic to me. Try experimenting with more effects and incorporate them into the tag. If you get the chance there are some pretty good tutorials out there that teach the basics. Edit: My computer is effed up. I see you got some effects in there, just try as I said incorporating them all together to get some blending going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 [quote name='Catman25' timestamp='1307496070' post='5265591'] Looks a bit simplistic to me. Try experimenting with more effects and incorporate them into the tag. If you get the chance there are some pretty good tutorials out there that teach the basics. Edit: My computer is effed up. I see you got some effects in there, just try as I said incorporating them all together to get some blending going. [/quote] Thanks for the feedback. +REP for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted June 8, 2011 Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 I feel that you really cannot see what is going on because the renders/stock are taking up the entire space. Flow is all around because you want to see the background a little more. I suggest you use one render/stock for now and build up on that before clustering the entire thing. And, do not cluster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 [quote name='Daemon' timestamp='1307536933' post='5266561'] I feel that you really cannot see what is going on because the renders/stock are taking up the entire space. Flow is all around because you want to see the background a little more. I suggest you use one render/stock for now and build up on that before clustering the entire thing. And, do not cluster. [/quote] Thanks for the feedback. Alright I have tried it with just one render. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 Bring Up My Post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 Use a more interesting and workable focal, for starts. Read up on PSDs and Tutorials to find out how to better use effects and work around the concept of your tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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