Lunar Origins Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 I'm practicing my manga-style drawing skill, so I uploaded a picture I'm using for an RP. It's probably the sixth or seventh manga-style picture I've drawn, so how is it? [spoiler=The Picture][IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/6o28ie.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Proportions are a bit off, imo. It also needs more details. Good practice drawing though, KIU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sprite3G Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 I agree, proportions are really off here. Since you're drawing a girl, make the neck thinner, shorter, and smaller since only men have necks as big as that. The span of the shoulders too should be decreased. Arms should be thinner as well as the stomach. Breasts look a bit too low and droopy so raise it up. I guess that's all for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted May 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 [quote name='Legend Zero' timestamp='1306414518' post='5232978'] Proportions are a bit off, imo. It also needs more details. Good practice drawing though, KIU. [/quote] [quote name='Sprite3G' timestamp='1306424842' post='5233172'] I agree, proportions are really off here. Since you're drawing a girl, make the neck thinner, shorter, and smaller since only men have necks as big as that. The span of the shoulders too should be decreased. Arms should be thinner as well as the stomach. Breasts look a bit too low and droopy so raise it up. I guess that's all for now. [/quote] Thanks. I draw without references (free-hand, haven't used a tutorial yet proud of that), and now that I look at it I notice the flaws. I don't have a hand for detail, but I'll try harder in the next picture I draw. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Communityreborn Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 I'm going to be honest here: As a beginner drawer, or a free-style one, it's not a bad attempt. But like the others said, the proportions are off. When I 1st saw the picture, it looked like a man with breasts, and I got scared for a second. Don't fret, though. You know what they say, Practice makes perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 [quote name='Communityreborn' timestamp='1306459609' post='5234379'] 6.5/10 [/quote] Don't rate in this Section. Use words, not numbers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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