Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Idk random title and super long like a pro. XD New siggy [spoiler=old][img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/8003/001stn.png[/img][/spoiler] ED: [img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/5742/001st.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 I like this, it gives a darkening feeling when I see it. Maybe add a dark/black light over the girl's face because it blends in too well with the background and really hard to focus directly on it, for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 There is no doubt you can add some amazing fx to a piece. Although applying the fx so that it complements the focal; you lack in that criteria. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Okay, so it wasn't just my eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 I agree with Nightwalker, your tags would be the s*** if you learned how to use your awesome effects to compliment the focal. Right now, it's like the focal is just sitting there with only a few adjustments, not being affected by her surrounding environment, and that takes away from the piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted May 26, 2011 Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 tbh I hate long titles xd imo they seem like noobish xdd But anyways, yes, I agree, your effects are going pretty much everywhere else except near the focal, so you could work on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted May 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2011 Thx guys. I'll have to work on my blending. [quote]tbh I hate long titles xd imo they seem like noobish xdd[/quote] xPRO makes the longest titles you've ever seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 [quote name='Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh' timestamp='1306443065' post='5233589'] xPRO makes the longest titles you've ever seen. [/quote] Don't be xPRO then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Not the best flow for the effects though. Maybe find a decent way to make them direction-ize more effectively. I think the second version lacks the darkness and version 1 lacks the darkness. So you haven't really went in the middle of things. Try to do another version or for your next tag make 3 results and compare them then post the best. Overall it looks pretty good but I think the background can be improved slightly more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted May 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Thx ken. What do you mean by 'the darkness' though? They are both pretty dark IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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