TCG warrior Posted May 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2011 [quote name='Qu@ke' timestamp='1306604990' post='5237811'] Sweet, so we'll know the victors in a few hours eh, good, good >=D [/quote] Not a few hours, just tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qu@ke Posted May 28, 2011 Report Share Posted May 28, 2011 [quote name='TCG warrior' timestamp='1306612564' post='5238110'] Not a few hours, just tomorrow [/quote] but that's only 8 hours away! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted May 28, 2011 Report Share Posted May 28, 2011 Nine here, haha. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 [quote name='Qu@ke' timestamp='1306613666' post='5238143'] but that's only 8 hours away! lol [/quote] and then there's still max. 24 hours before the winner is announced. Also, I put the entries in the first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 OCG results are in: [spoiler=Cody Frost] OCG: 2 points All correct OCG, you were on the right way to the 3 points until I saw a sentence from number 3: When this card is removed from the field. In the problem solving card text it should be: When this card leaves the field[/spoiler] [spoiler=Qu@ke] OCG: 0 points too many, though small, mistakes. the mistakes were. [u]When[/u] this card [u]is[/u] Special Summoned by the effect of “Darkfire Soldier #2” you may draw 2 cards from your deck. When this monster is Summoned you may Special Summon 1 “Darkfire Soldier #1” from your [u]h[/u]and or Deck. [u]When[/u] this card is destroyed as a result of battle[u],[/u] your opponent [u]discards[/u] 2 cards from their hand.[/spoiler] [Spoiler=Dwarven King] OCG: 0 points A few mistakes, some bigger then the others: During a battle involving this monster, should be: When this card battles, Fire should be FIRE and it’s not a type. So this should be changed into. FIRE monster instead of Fire type monster graveyard should be [u]G[/u]raveyard until the end of the battle should be: during the Damage Step only and lastly, defense mode should be Defense Position[/spoiler] [spoiler=AngryBird] OCG: 3 points. No OCG errors.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sorin Markov] OCG: 0.5 points the following errors occurred: Once during each of your turns should be: Once per turn (it’s not a quick effect, so you still won’t be able to use this during your opponent’s turn) Deal should be inflict (2X)[/spoiler] [spoiler=J-Max] OCG: 1 points. The following things in the text were wrong: in battle should be by battle. non FIRE should be non-FIRE and in that your opponent controls, you can leave the word that out.[/spoiler] [Spoiler=VoiceofChaos] 0 points. OCG mistakes: phases should be capitalized. So not main phase, but Main Phase. and the last sentence should be changed into: During the End Phase, if this card’s effect was activated, you take 1000 damage.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Hounds of Anubis] OCG: 3 points. no errors found[/spoiler] Ps. I was really strict with this, 0.5 points less for each error, but this is only a max. of 3 points, so even the ones who scored 0 can still win. PPs. I'm not sure if I'll be finished checking by the end of the day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Does this mean we have time to edit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 [quote name='Cody Frost' timestamp='1306668794' post='5239400'] Does this mean we have time to edit? [/quote] no, this means it'll just take longer before the winner is announced. _____________________________________________________________________________ next results (had some trouble, accidentally locked down the electricity and then I lost half of the results). [spoiler=Cody Frost] balance/effect: 14 points rather easy effects, nice to use, but not too strong. They work well together, because number 3 brings back the monsters removed by numbers 1 and 2. I only don’t get why you would remove the monsters from play for number one.[/spoiler] [spoiler=qu@ke] balance/effect: 6 points OP, this is because of a few reasons: deck thining, extra draw, 2 monsters at once, no drawback.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Dwarven King] balance/effect: 10 points a little underpowered, it does have a nice effect. But when you don’t have any monsters left in your graveyard it only has a low 1700 ATK and then you get the effect that you have to put it defense position afterwards.[/spoiler] [spoiler=AngryBird] balance/effect: 14 points Nice effect and everything, you may have given it a little extra bonus.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sorin Markov] balance/effect: 15 points Nice effect, not too strong nor too weak.[/spoiler] [spoiler=J-Max] balance/effect: 12 points nice card, only the 1700 damage per turn when you have a second FIRE monster on the field is I think OP. It would be better if the damage would be reduced, like happened with amethyst cat.[/spoiler] [spoiler=VoiceofChaos] balance/effect: 13 points nice effect, but the drawback (1000 damage) may be a little bit too much.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Hounds of Anubis] balance/effect: 12 points a nice spirit. The only reason why it’s not 15 points is because of the fact that it can attack twice without another drawback.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 i'm getting nice scores lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 ditto! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 I wanted to finish this contest today and I don’t have enough time to put some reactions on this marking area. Cody frost, originality: 9 points Qu@ke originality: 7 points Dwarven King originality: 8 points AngryBird originality: 8 points Sorin Markov originality: 9 points J-Max originality: 8.5 points VoiceofChaos originality: 8 points Hounds of Anubis originality: 9.5 points [u]end scores:[/u] Cody frost: 25 Qu@ke: 13 Dwarven King: 18 AngryBird: 25 Sorin Markov: 24.5 J-Max: 21.5 VoiceofChaos: 21 Hounds of Anubis: 24.5 I'll have another round of judging (you don't have to do something) for Cody Frost, AngryBird, Sorin Markov and Hounds of Anubis. This means the prices won't be given already. This round of judging, the cards will be judged on playability with a maximum number of points of 0.4 points. Ps. Also, thanks for participating and tomorrow, I think VoiceofChaos is going to start the original contest "retrain that vanilla" again. I think he/ she would appreciate it if you participate in that contest too. _________________________________________________________________________________ The winners can now be announced: Cody frost: 25 + 0.3 AngryBird: 25 + 0.2 Sorin Markov: 24.5 + 0.35 Hounds of Anubis: 24.5 + 0.4 WINNERS: 1. Cody Frost 2. AngryBird 3. Hounds of Anubis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Damn... talk about close. Glad I positioned top 3 again in one of these contests. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 yay! 1st place Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 I'm pretty sure "During a battle involving this monster" is actually used in the effects of some real cards. I'm tempted to delve into my collection to find one of said cards. Good job though everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 lol 2nd place never get 1st lol will join the Retrain the Vanilla Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qu@ke Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 [quote name='Dwarven King' timestamp='1306695930' post='5240130'] I'm pretty sure "During a battle involving this monster" is actually used in the effects of some real cards. I'm tempted to delve into my collection to find one of said cards. Good job though everyone! [/quote] You'd be correct sir, however there's no sense getting angry over anything. We got knocked down so let's get back up and try harder next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 [quote name='Qu@ke' timestamp='1306744995' post='5241471'] You'd be correct sir, however there's no sense getting [b]AngryBird[/b] over anything. We got knocked down so let's get back up and try harder next time [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TCG warrior Posted May 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 [quote name='Dwarven King' timestamp='1306695930' post='5240130'] I'm pretty sure "During a battle involving this monster" is actually used in the effects of some real cards. I'm tempted to delve into my collection to find one of said cards. Good job though everyone! [/quote] This was one of the things I wasn't sure about. So when I encountered one of these sentences, I first did the other OCG errors and then I chose whether or not to state it. I stated it only when it made no difference in your score. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted May 30, 2011 Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 Meh, I wasn't really complaining. Merely pointing it out for future references. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted May 31, 2011 Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 lol, didn't even get a look in XD> Well it was a hurried card anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catterjune Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 This contest was marked as ended and has been automatically moved to Finished Contests. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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