:^) Posted May 20, 2011 Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 [color=indigo][center] [b]Drifquen[/b] Bug/Ghost 3'11" (1.2m) 62.7lbs (28.44kg) [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/abtpc1.png[/IMG] [u][b]Learnset[/b][/u] 1. Sweet Scent 1. Gust 1. Constrict 1. [b]Astonish[/b] 3. Poison Sting 7. Confuse Ray 9. [b]Fury Cutter[/b] 13. Defend Order 15. Pursuit 19. Fury Swipes 21. Power Gem 22. [b]Hex[/b] 25. Heal Order 31. Slash 33. Captivate 37. [b]Ominous Wind[/b] 37. [b]Attack Order[/b] 39. Swagger 43. Destiny Bond 44. Baton Pass 51. [b]Shadow Ball[/b] 56. Explosion [i][size=1][b]Bold[/b] indicates a move that gets STAB when used.[/size][/i] [b]CCPlease[/b][/color][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 Ooh! Ooh! I know, Lets give it a move @ every level!! Space the moves out more... and avoid giving multiple moves on the same level Also, remove moves like toxic and focus energy, which are good thoughts, but give it too many moves and are easily accessable through TMs or breeding plus it has 5 Moves @ Level1... which since you aren't giving any evolution chain isn't possible and I believe the way Pokémon does it, it should be "Bug / Ghost" Types I like the lower-half of the Sprite, the upper half I'm not to crazy about since you basically just colored over Vespiqueen's Head in head... you could have atleast changed the shape around a bit... I'mma give you like a 4 outta 10 overall... teh sprite itself gets a 5.5 outta 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted May 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 [quote name='Boss Z' timestamp='1305937582' post='5221582'] Ooh! Ooh! I know, Lets give it a move @ every level!! Space the moves out more... and avoid giving multiple moves on the same level Also, remove moves like toxic and focus energy, which are good thoughts, but give it too many moves and are easily accessable through TMs or breeding plus it has 5 Moves @ Level1... which since you aren't giving any evolution chain isn't possible and I believe the way Pokémon does it, it should be "Bug / Ghost" Types I like the lower-half of the Sprite, the upper half I'm not to crazy about since you basically just colored over Vespiqueen's Head in head... you could have atleast changed the shape around a bit... I'mma give you like a 4 outta 10 overall... teh sprite itself gets a 5.5 outta 10 [/quote] Thanks for the feedback. I forgot to add *WIP* into the title and I am not finished with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 [quote name='Boss Z' timestamp='1305937582' post='5221582'] Ooh! Ooh! I know, Lets give it a move @ every level!! Space the moves out more... and avoid giving multiple moves on the same level Also, remove moves like toxic and focus energy, which are good thoughts, but give it too many moves and are easily accessable through TMs or breeding plus it has 5 Moves @ Level1... which since you aren't giving any evolution chain isn't possible and I believe the way Pokémon does it, it should be "Bug / Ghost" Types I like the lower-half of the Sprite, the upper half I'm not to crazy about since you basically just colored over Vespiqueen's Head in head... you could have atleast changed the shape around a bit... I'mma give you like a 4 outta 10 overall... teh sprite itself gets a 5.5 outta 10 [/quote] Don't rate in showcase, read the f***ing rules. And that whole first paragraph has nothing to do with the splice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 Sorry... Sorry I forgot the rules, its been awhile since I've known what I was talking about in the Showcase and it has nothing to do with the splice? Its his facts for the splice!! They are off and could be changed to make it more realistic, so I commented on how he can change that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted May 22, 2011 Report Share Posted May 22, 2011 First of all, she is clearly a female. And no, you shouldn't. The extra wordage is just a prop to make the presentation better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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