Sorrow. Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 [center][b]These are a couple of Avis I've made with Gimp. I am still a beginner at this so criticizing is appreciated, but try to keep it clean and not too negative. Anyways enough of me trying to keep you from flaming me, I'll post Avis in here and whenever I feel like it. This is not necessarily an Archive but feel free to use any of my creations you don't have to show credit or anything but if anyone asks who made your Avi then you know what to say. I would possibly turn it into an Archive once I get better. Well,here are the avis:[/b] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/5915/6249170132f630m3.jpg[/img][IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2wgy9f7.png[/IMG][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/73dkrp.png[/IMG][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/28v84ua.png[/IMG][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 Kind blandish again and far too simple with the side of flat. Text towards the right side is hard to notice at times from POV. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted May 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 POV? Sorry like I've said in the past I'm new to GIMP and Graphic Design in that matter.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 Perspective view. Sorry, I was also typing an essay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 They are flat and the text is barely noticeable. They are also too dark and it seems like all you did was take a render and put it over a background with some text. [b]Could use work.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted May 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 What do I need to improve on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted May 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 Added two new Avis.. Are they better than the previous ones? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 Seems like a simple BG smudge with a background and the last one a simple recolor. All flat. Bland Need work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 That doesn't really help you know. You could try sharpening your focal, or blurring around your vocal. As I did with my avatar. Daemon improve yours first before giving advice. I rather like the assassin's creed one, it could work if you sharpen the focal more. The shoulder is a little too sharpened compared to what I deem to be the focal point such as the face you want to look at. Remember Avatars don't need to be complex, you don't even need to use a render to produce a good result. I admit with mine I could erase more around the back of the hair/wing section as well as the hand to match more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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