EndlessOcean Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Okay, i made these when i was like, 6, just thought they might be worth putting up here. (i corrected most of the OCG, i think) Hate Hero - Intrice DARK/Level 4/Warrior/Effect: When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, select 1 monster your opponent controls, and take control of it until your next End Phase. 1300/1000 Hate Hero - Orcano DARK/Level 3/Warrior/Effect: When this card is removed from the field, Specail Summon 1 "Hate Hero" monster from your deck. 1000/1000 Hate Hero - Drakonia DARK/Level 4/Warrior/Effect: When this card is removed from the field, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for every "Hate Hero" monster in your Graveyard. 500/300 Hate Hero - Aluxra DARK/Level 3/Warrior/Tuner: If this card would be destroyed, (by battle or by card effect) you can discard 1 "Hate Hero" card in your hand instead. (Damage Calculation is applied normally.) 800/900 Hate Hero - Orchistrain DARK/Level 3/Warrior/Effect: You can tribute 1 face-up "Hate Hero" monster you control to summon 1 "Hate Hero" monster from your hand whose Level is 1 lower than the tributed monster. 100/800 Hate Hero - Andromada DARK/Rank 3/Warrior/Xyz/Effect: 2 Level 3 monsters Once per turn, you can remove 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card to Special Summon 1 "Hate Hero" monster from your deck in face-up Defence Posistion. If this card has no Xyz Material Monsters, you can select 1 "Hate Hero" Xyz monster from your Extra Deck, and place it under this card as a Xyz Material Monster. 2300/2000 Hate Hero - Nebula DARK/Rank 4/Warrior/Xyz/Effect: 2 Level 4 monsters Once per turn, you can remove 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card to select 1 face-up Defence Position monster you control. Switch it to Attack Position and it gains 700 ATK points (Permanently), and you pay 500 Life Points during your Stand-by Phase. If this card has no Xyz Material Monsters, you can select 1 "Hate Hero" monster on the field and place it under this card as an Xyz Material Monster. 2000/1000 Deep Fury Spell Card - Normal Special Summon 1 "Hate Hero" monster from your Graveyard. It gains 1000 ATK and is destroyed at the End Phase. Searing Evil Spell Card - Continious If a "Hate Hero" monster on the field is destroyed, place 1 Hate Counter in this card. Face-up "Hate Hero" monsters gain 300 ATK for every Hate counter on this card. Reckless Revenge Spell Card - Continious Once per turn, you can destroy 1 face-up "Hate Hero" monster on the field to destroy 2 Spell or Trap cards on the field. Malicious Destruction Trap Card - Continious If a "Hate Hero" monster on the field is destroyed, Special Summon 1 other "Hate Hero" monster from your Graveyard with the same level as the destroyed monster. Will post more as i rethink there effects. Link to comment
EndlessOcean Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 BUMP Added a monster and 2 spells. Link to comment
Shadow-Master Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Hate Hero - Intrice DARK/Level 4/Warrior/Effect: When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, select 1 monster your opponent controls, and take control of it until your next End Phase. 1300/1000 [b]Seems rigged. Most card effects have a cost to taking control of a monster and even then, it's for about 1 turn only. You may want to lower the ATK just to make this card even.[/b] Hate Hero - Drakonia DARK/Level 4/Warrior/Effect: When this card is removed from the field, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for every "Hate Hero" monster in your Graveyard. 500/300 [b]Seems okay.[/b] Hate Hero - Aluxra DARK/Level 3/Warrior/Tuner: If this card would be destroyed, (by battle or by card effect) you can discard 1 "Hate Hero" card in your hand instead. (Damage Calculation is applied normally.) 800/900 [b]I would change the card lore to "If this card would be destroyed, you can discard 1 "Hate Hero" monster in your hand instead." I would get rid of the notice on the damage calculation because now it should be common sense that if a card can't be destroyed, you still take whatever damage from the battle, so you don't need to put that there. I may be wrong though.[/b] Hate Hero - Andromada DARK/Rank 3/Warrior/Xyz/Effect: 2 Level 3 monsters Once per turn, you can remove 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card to Special Summon 1 "Hate Hero" monster from your deck in face-up Defence Posistion. If this card has no Xyz Material Monsters, you can select 1 "Hate Hero" Xyz monster from your Extra Deck, and place it under this card as a Xyz Material Monster. 2300/2000 [b]Rank 3? Xyz? Effect? What? I'm assuming that you have a new concept called "xyz", I have not heard of it. Also, a monster on this card? How is that possible? You misspelled "defense" and "position", by the way. Can you explain briefly what "xyz" is? [/b] Deep Fury Spell Card - Normal Special Summon 1 "Hate Hero" monster from your Graveyard. It gains 1000 ATK and is destroyed at the End Phase. [b]A little powerful, but still okay.[/b] Searing Evil Spell Card - Continious If a "Hate Hero" monster on the field is destroyed, place 1 Hate Counter in this card. Face-up "Hate Hero" monsters gain 300 ATK for every Hate counter on this card. [b]I think you should put quotation marks over "Hate Counter". Overall, there are some errors that you could fix, namely OCG and spelling errors I have put out. Also, you could've come up with a better name than "Hate Heroes", just doesn't have a ring to it. [/b] Will post more as i rethink there effects. [/quote] Link to comment
EndlessOcean Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 [quote name='Shadow-Master' timestamp='1305757579' post='5217692'] Hate Hero - Intrice DARK/Level 4/Warrior/Effect: When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, select 1 monster your opponent controls, and take control of it until your next End Phase. 1300/1000 [b]Seems rigged. Most card effects have a cost to taking control of a monster and even then, it's for about 1 turn only. You may want to lower the ATK just to make this card even.[/b] Hate Hero - Drakonia DARK/Level 4/Warrior/Effect: When this card is removed from the field, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent for every "Hate Hero" monster in your Graveyard. 500/300 [b]Seems okay.[/b] Hate Hero - Aluxra DARK/Level 3/Warrior/Tuner: If this card would be destroyed, (by battle or by card effect) you can discard 1 "Hate Hero" card in your hand instead. (Damage Calculation is applied normally.) 800/900 [b]I would change the card lore to "If this card would be destroyed, you can discard 1 "Hate Hero" monster in your hand instead." I would get rid of the notice on the damage calculation because now it should be common sense that if a card can't be destroyed, you still take whatever damage from the battle, so you don't need to put that there. I may be wrong though.[/b] Hate Hero - Andromada DARK/Rank 3/Warrior/Xyz/Effect: 2 Level 3 monsters Once per turn, you can remove 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card to Special Summon 1 "Hate Hero" monster from your deck in face-up Defence Posistion. If this card has no Xyz Material Monsters, you can select 1 "Hate Hero" Xyz monster from your Extra Deck, and place it under this card as a Xyz Material Monster. 2300/2000 [b]Rank 3? Xyz? Effect? What? I'm assuming that you have a new concept called "xyz", I have not heard of it. Also, a monster on this card? How is that possible? You misspelled "defense" and "position", by the way. Can you explain briefly what "xyz" is? [/b] Deep Fury Spell Card - Normal Special Summon 1 "Hate Hero" monster from your Graveyard. It gains 1000 ATK and is destroyed at the End Phase. [b]A little powerful, but still okay.[/b] Searing Evil Spell Card - Continious If a "Hate Hero" monster on the field is destroyed, place 1 Hate Counter in this card. Face-up "Hate Hero" monsters gain 300 ATK for every Hate counter on this card. [b]I think you should put quotation marks over "Hate Counter". Overall, there are some errors that you could fix, namely OCG and spelling errors I have put out. Also, you could've come up with a better name than "Hate Heroes", just doesn't have a ring to it. [/b] Will post more as i rethink there effects. [/quote] Xyz is the official name for the new Exceed monsters coming soon, if you dont know what they are, google them, there pretty good. And, i didnt spell Defence wrong, im from england, and thats how we spell it over here. Although i did spell position wrong. Link to comment
EndlessOcean Posted May 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 BUMP + New Exceed monster Link to comment
Shadow-Master Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 [quote]Xyz is the official name for the new Exceed monsters coming soon, if you dont know what they are, google them, there pretty good. And, i didnt spell Defence wrong, im from england, and thats how we spell it over here. Although i did spell position wrong. [/quote] Okay, I just didn't know what they were (I haven't even watched Yugioh 5D's yet). Oh yeah, dang different English uses . Then I guess they're good. Link to comment
TCG warrior Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 [quote name='Shadow-Master' timestamp='1305837470' post='5219161'] Okay, I just didn't know what they were (I haven't even watched Yugioh 5D's yet). Oh yeah, dang different English uses . Then I guess they're good. [/quote] It has just been known for a very short time that exceed monsters will be called XYZ monsters. I think the way people found out is because of the image of the image of the first English starter deck with exceed monsters [i](I'm used to this term and I like it much better than XYZ, so I think I'm going to use it until there is more prove of exceed monsters being called XYZ monsters)[/i] Link to comment
Techi☺ Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 I'm favoriting this page for a refference tool during the Ghost duel and for whenever you and I are in a Rp duel, diggit?-You better. I like them so far. Link to comment
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