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Yu-Gi-Oh! - Forbidden World - Chapter 2 added


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[quote name='Hayate Ayasaki' timestamp='1304892293' post='5197109']
@Creator - You're good then. Because the only deck I use that can live up to today's metagame is Macros.

Because it's just so godly against meta.
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Six Sams - Grave? NOEP
Gravekeeper's - Grave? To a certain degree
Dragunity - Grave? NOEP
Chaos Plants - Ryko gogogo
Karakuri - Grave? NOEP

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It would be hard to work in a world without effect monsters. They just so vastly outnumber Vanillas...
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The remove from play effects are still very useful to combat metas, not necessarily the fact they don't go to grave.

Especially Synchros like Stardust and his friends.

Since they're practically immune to destruction.

@Fusion - LolBT.

You'll see~

[s]And I won't forget about KS....I hope[/s]
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Here's a list of Vanilla Fusion monsters that are usuable in this fanfic

[spoiler=usable Vanilla Fusions]- Amphibious Bugroth
- B. Skull Dragon
- Barox
- Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon
- Bracchio-raidus
- Charubin the Fire Knight
- Crimson Sunbird
- Darkfire Dragon
- Deepsea Shark
- Dragoness the Wicked Knight
- Flame Ghost
- Flame Swordsman
- Flower Wolf
- Fusionist
- Gaia the Dragon Champion
- Giltia the D. Knight
- Great Mammoth of Goldfine
- Humanoid Worm Drake
- Kaiser Dragon
- Kaminari Attack
- Kamionwizard
- Karbonala Warrior
- Kwagar Hurcules
- Man-Eating Black Shark
- Marine Beast
- Mavelus
- Metal Dragon
- Meteor B. Dragon
- Mystical Sand
- Pragtical
- Punished Eagle
- Rabid Horseman
- Rare Fish
- Rose Spectre of Dunn
- Skelgon
- Skullbird
- Soul Hunter
- Vermilion Sparrow
- Warrior of Tradition
- Zombie Warrior[/spoiler]
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Wow. I never expected anything like an effect monster ban in Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fics. I like your idea so far, but I'm not sure where this is going. I see some kind of irony there.
[quote]“Yeah, yeah, and you yourself retired from professional dueling because it’s just not like it was back in the old days. You’ve told me a hundred times. But I told you, I don’t care about that. I’ll become the best duelist someday, and change the dueling world!”[/quote]
The old days in this story are when effect monsters were used, while the old days in real life are vanillas.
Your writing is...not bad, I should say. I mean, it's good, but I see a lot of redundancy. Dave this. Dave that. Dave this. Dave that. He did this. He did that. He did this. He did that. Other than that, I found a couple little errors, but those are understandable.
The biggest mistake is the use of Valkyrion's effect in the Battle Phase, but I think you cleared that up with your explanation of the ban. I'll be looking for Chapter 2. Good luck!
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Well the beginning was just a bunch of Dave actions.

I mean, it's not redundancy because redundancy is

"Dave turned on the shower and steaming water sprayed from it. The water was hot"

It's redundant to say it was hot because it already said the water was steaming.


Regardless, I may have put too much "Dave"s and didn't notice.

I think I spaced them out quite a bit tho.




Also


NEW CHAPTER ADDED.


Huzzah, it's amazing.
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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1306331343' post='5230824']
Good chapter DL, liked it better than the first one.
I was expecting more from Z, but a oneshot character is a onehot character after all.
Looking forward to the next one.
But I'm leaning more toward KS tbh .-.
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[s]And here I was sure you would bring up the fact One has a strange resemblance to the person his theme is gotten from.[/s]

Thanks. I was sure people would like this more because the plot starts coming out here xD

And yeah, Z was....yeah....

Then again, I have been known to surprise people.

;33



@King - The tournament hadn't started yet, if you noticed. The referees weren't there, because it was too early.
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