Crystal Remnants Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 Glad to see another chapter Black! So far, your fic has been pretty okay. Could use a few improvements *references aforementioned ass-pulls*, but at least it's given me a reason to actually check out the Fan Fic forum every once in a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 I was literally laughing the entire time I read chapter 10. ..... Though why the hell was Parco using Magic Cylinder? He uses a swarm deck, not a burn deck :[b][/b]O I take it that it was just to showcase Unicore's effect, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1310663410' post='5354888'] I was literally laughing the entire time I read chapter 10. ..... Though why the hell was Parco using Magic Cylinder? He uses a swarm deck, not a burn deck :[b][/b]O I take it that it was just to showcase Unicore's effect, right? [/quote] Pretty much xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 Sorry about the writer's block >< Gonna be gone starting tomorrow until Mon/Tue, so no chapter for a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1310076774' post='5336372'] "Shut up and return all your cards to your hand, please~" Idk why, but that made me lol a lot. Good Riffview, bro. Although, there's one thing that I don't get. You mentioned Black didn't describe RDA at one point and that was a bad thing. Yet he described the other monsters. Do you remember the point Crab made a lot that sometimes description/exposition was unnecessary if the fic was about a franchise? For example, I think she mentioned in a Mario fic reviewed by the Swiss Assassin, that when he ripped on Chill (its author) for not describing the Parakoopa, she said that wasn't necessary because the targeted fanbase of a Mario fic is Mario fans, and the Mario fans would know what a Parakoopa was. So when regarding Duel Monsters, does Black need to describe them? I mean, I'm pretty sure everyone here knows what RDA looks like, so we went on fine without description. But then again, I see a lot of YGO fics give at least one sentence of description whenever a new monster appears. So maybe YGO is the exception to this rule since there are so many monsters. [/quote] A parakoopa is a turtle with a red shell that flies Describing it it silly Because if you describe it simply, the description is hardly needed. And If you describe it thoroughly, and artistically....fact remains it looks like this [img]http://th235.photobucket.com/albums/ee124/partypichu/Other/th_ParaKoopa.png[/img] Waay simplistic. With RDA, he's designed thoroughly enough you SHOULD describe at least SOMETHING of his. And thanks. THo it was boring as hell to write xD (as proof, 20th gave up trying, so I had to go solo) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted July 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 BUMP Finally found my spark again ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted August 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 Back from vacation, so gimme a few days... But, no one is gonna read this post, so, oh well =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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