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Yu-Gi-Oh! CP: Cosmic Path - Chapter 10 [PG-13]


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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1304505230' post='5187487']
And uh, Exceeds have chants?
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Yea, in Zexal, every Exceed monster basically has the same chant.
Its like with Starforce and how everyone was like: "EM WAVE CHANGE! [character X] ON THE AIR!"
But anyway....

Anti-Meta Exceed Gadgets made me LOL, as everyone will probably be running when Exceed monsters are printed in the US.
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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1304505230' post='5187487']
What Cherry said.
And uh, Exceeds have chants?
Still liked it though.
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Technically, anything can have a chant... Such as EBIs and the God Cards.

@Arm: It IS Starforce xD With card Games. Astral = Omega

Also, Exceeding Gadget Monarchs ftw

@Nex: Not really. He is serving the role of messenger, ATM, but his real role will come out.
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[quote name='iCherry' timestamp='1304537474' post='5188038']
Exceeds don't have chants. If anything, all the numbers have the same thing.

"With these [Number Of Overlay Units], I construct the Overlane Network!"
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It's my fic, isn't it?

I gave it a chant. Sue me. Not like non-Synchros never have chants.
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[quote name='Zetsubou Black' timestamp='1304537743' post='5188047']
It's my fic, isn't it?

I gave it a chant. Sue me. Not like non-Synchros never have chants.
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I was answering Fusion's question.
Not saying there was a problem.
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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1304537291' post='5188035']
Aha.
As for the new guy, I have no clue as to who he could be.
DL?
But yo, I don't think El would do the chant thing either, but you probably knew that >.>
DL would =P
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It's proto.

Thats literally proto's real name.

New "Proto" Guy.
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[quote name='iCherry' timestamp='1304487191' post='5187331']
I like this chapter. Though... the duel result seemed kinda... obvious.[b] Just, too obvious. idk.[/b] Randomly getting SSD, RND, and LSD from a random hobo is stupid, yet it made me lol. xD Cerise is just hilarious. [b]Isaac and Andrew, I expected to have some personality by now[/b]. They just seem... bland. Especially Andrew, but, eh.
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Cherry is regularly stealing my thoughts on these chapters before I get to really even say them myself. Weird. >>
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I don't think Proto is given enough credit in fics like this. Fusion makes him an awesome series of robots but everyone else always makes him out to be the weakest of the bunch in these situations.

Proto is this story's real hero me thinks.

Anyway, random driver knowing about a bunch of stuff is odd.
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[quote name='Enzax Aito' timestamp='1304546501' post='5188352']
I don't think Proto is given enough credit in fics like this. Fusion makes him an awesome series of robots but everyone else always makes him out to be the weakest of the bunch in these situations.

Proto is this story's real hero me thinks.

Anyway, random driver knowing about a bunch of stuff is odd.
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Proto gets credit here, don't worry.

.... The driver is Isaac @_@ Look at chapter 2, and you'll see that.
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[quote name='Zetsubou Black' timestamp='1304546975' post='5188372']
....

Why would a random guy get in and be the driver?
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/facedesk

It was an example to show you that you weren't being specific enough.

Besides, I'm having issues not skimming anything that isn't a duel.
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[quote name='Pinkie Pie' timestamp='1304504983' post='5187484']
DELL IS MOKUBA
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[quote name='Enzax Aito' timestamp='1304546501' post='5188352']
I don't think Proto is given enough credit in fics like this. Fusion makes him an awesome series of robots but everyone else always makes him out to be the weakest of the bunch in these situations.Proto is this story's real hero me thinks.Anyway, random driver knowing about a bunch of stuff is odd.
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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1304547178' post='5188381']
Why NOT Black?And aha, it's Proto....I see it, I just can't see how people figured out it was him >.>
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I love how I appear for like, one sentence and I'm the most discussed thing in the chapter.

Creator, the reason I'm the weakest of the bunch is because.... well name one fight I've actually won.

Yeah, they're sorta justified with that.

Though I appreciate the thought! ^^
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I would not chant because I would not use Exceeds. Just as I hardly use Synchros.

And for them I wouldn't use a chant because I still dislike most of them (except Drill Warrior) I just find them necessary to win in today's metagame.


Anyway, Black, I forgot to say how in duels you seem to add...a LOT of "now"s. A LOT.

Especially in chapter 1.


Needless tell, and obscuring dialogue from the reader is bad idea.

Lily should just have told Mack "Wait up, I'll be right there!" or something. There was no reason, or excuse, for why that should have been in narrative.


All the duels in this fic so far are ridiculously one-sided. That's not good for building up tension. And it makes it seem like the ranks go like this

Amelia >>>>> Lily >>>>>> Isaac


Probably not what you were aiming for.
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