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That is your opinion Deathly. Also, we've got YMB4 work to do. The thread has to be up at the end of November. The rough draft of the beginning story is finished. I need a talented writer to fix it up. Also, a logo is needed Deathly. "YMB4: Return of Two Evils" is a planned title. Any suggestions?

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As usual, your work is grand. Now with that out of the way, I present you guys with this rough draft that I need one of you to work on.

[spoiler=Le Rough]


[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Before YCM existed, there was a mysterious evil that ravaged throughout the world. Powerful it was indeed. It had the ability to send forces unimaginable to infiltrate and turn cities into a complete wasteland. Its goal was to destroy the world and rebuild it in its image. Before it could accomplish its goal, two brave warriors, codenamed Wiseman and Inventor, defeated this evil as it was heading to YCM. They sealed it away for what they thought was eternity. The evil did take something from each of the warriors before it was sealed. He took the sanity of one and the arm of the other.[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Thanks to the evil, Wiseman convinced Inventor to steal the possessions of people and force them to play sadistic games. They targeted YCM, which was the very place they defended from the evil. When they found a YCM super computer called “Smesh”, the two put their plan into action. They placed a virus in to the computer, which allowed them to attacked people without remorse, destroying everything in their path. Before they could reap the fruit of their plans, the officials of YCM, with the help of Black, shut “Smesh” down before it was too late.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Not willing to accept defeat, Wiseman and Inventor created a more powerful computer program called “Dark”. More sadistic that “Smesh”, “Dark” forced more people to play the sadistic games. The duo got closer to accomplishing their plan, but it was foiled again by their own program. “Dark” somehow gained feelings, when it confronted Clair, and shut itself down, but after telling the duo to complete their plan themselves.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]The duo started the same way as they have always done. They hack into peoples computers and force them to play sadistic, yet virtual games. However, Wiseman became more insane as the years went on. He finally cracked and persuaded Inventor to raise the stakes; that is make the games real. With Wiseman leading, the duo started trapping, even kidnapping, their victims to play their sadistic games. The games also came with a threat of death for those who didn’t win or didn’t want to participate fully.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Their plans were caught on by the Mods, yet they couldn’t move in to shut down the games due to the risk of serious injury being inflicted on the victims. Wiseman kidnapped Mods to use as protection, which left them at a tough disadvantage. Wiseman’s genius forced them to move their efforts under ground to avoid Wiseman from finding out. However, Striker, a former victim, infiltrated Wiseman’s base as part of a gambling corporation. He was discovered and quickly disposed of before he could leak anything, or so Wiseman thought. Striker discovered part of Wiseman’s true plan of attack and leaked it to the Mods before faking his death and going into hiding. The information gave the Mods an idea of Wiseman‘s nect move.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]As it turned out, Wiseman planned to take over the world through the internet. Inventor didn’t like the way Wiseman was doing things and feared that Wiseman became insane. His attack on Caeda and Clair made Inventor realize that Wiseman truly did go insane. However, it was some time after that he defected from Wiseman and started sending more information to the Mods about the exact location of Wiseman. This information with the information Striker provided allowed them to put together Wiseman’s end, or so they thought.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Wiseman wasn’t done yet, he brainwashed Black and Smeargle to distract the group while Wiseman dealt with Inventor, who changed his name to Nicholas. The Mods suffered a defeat against Wiseman’s group as they failed to capture Wiseman. Nicholas suffered life threatening injuries, but managed to mortally wound Wiseman as well. Both laid their motionless to be gathered by the dust, or so we all thought. A week later, Wiseman’s body disappeared with a note in its place. The note said “The Darkness will finally overcome the Light.” Six months after the tragedy, a group of old friends are coming back to play. Are you ready for the Darkness?[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]

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[spoiler=Le Rough *EDITED*]


[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Before YCM existed, there was a mysterious evil that ravaged throughout the world[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3], and it was powerful indeed[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]. It had the ability to send forces unimaginable to infiltrate and turn cities into a complete wasteland. Its goal was to destroy the world and rebuild it in its image. Before it could accomplish its goal, two brave warriors, code-named [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]'[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Wiseman[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]'[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] and [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]'[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Inventor[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]'[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3], defeated this evil as it was [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]headed[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] [/size][/font][/color]towards[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] YCM. They sealed it away for what they thought was eternity[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3], but[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] the evil did take something from each of the warriors before it was sealed. [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]It[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] took the sanity of one and the arm of the other.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Thanks to the evil, Wiseman convinced Inventor to steal the possessions of people and force them to play sadistic games. They targeted YCM, which was the very place they defended from the evil. When they found a YCM super computer called “Smesh”, the two put their plan into action. They placed a virus [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]into[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] the computer, which allowed them to [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]attack[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] people without remorse, destroying everything in their path. Before they could reap the fruit of their plans, the officials of YCM, with the help of Black, shut “Smesh” down before it was too late.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Not willing to accept defeat, Wiseman and Inventor created a more powerful computer program called “Dark[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]."[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] More sadistic that “Smesh”, “Dark” forced more people to play the sadistic games. The duo got closer to accomplishing their plan, but [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]"Dark"[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] was foiled again by their own program. [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]It somehow gained feelings when it confronted Clair and shut itself down after telling the duo to complete their plan themselves.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]The duo started the same way as they have always done. They [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]hacked[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] into peoples computers and [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]forced[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] them to play sadistic, yet virtual games. However, Wiseman became more insane as the years went on. He finally cracked and persuaded Inventor to raise the stakes; [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]to[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]make the games real[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]. With Wiseman leading, the duo started trapping, [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]even kidnapping their victims[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] to play their sadistic games. The games also came with a threat of death for those who [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]did not[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] [/size][/font][/color]win or want to participate fully[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3].[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]Their plans were later caught by the Mods[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3], yet they [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]could not[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] move in to shut down the games due to the risk of serious injury being inflicted on the victims. Wiseman kidnapped Mods to use as protection, which left them at a tough disadvantage. Wiseman’s genius forced them to move their efforts [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]underground[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] to [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]keep Inventor [/size][/font][/color][color=#ff0000][font=Arial][size=3](?)[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] from finding out. However, Striker, a former victim, infiltrated Wiseman’s base as part of a gambling corporation. He was discovered and quickly disposed of before he could leak anything, or so Wiseman thought. Striker discovered part of Wiseman’s true plan of attack and leaked it to the Mods before faking his death and going into hiding. [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]This[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] information gave the Mods an idea of Wiseman‘s [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]next[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] move.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]As it turned out, Wiseman planned to take over the world through the internet. Inventor [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]did not[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] like the way Wiseman was doing things and feared that Wiseman became insane. His attack on Caeda and Clair made Inventor realize that Wiseman truly did go insane. However, it was some time after that he defected from Wiseman and started sending more information to the Mods about the exact location of Wiseman. [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]This information, following[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] [/size][/font][/color]the information Striker provided, allowed them to put together Wiseman’s end; or so they thought.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Wiseman [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]was not[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] done yet[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]. He[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] brainwashed Black and Smeargle to distract the group while [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]he[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] dealt with Inventor, who changed his name to Nicholas. The Mods suffered a defeat against Wiseman’s group as they failed to capture [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]him[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]. Nicholas suffered life threatening injuries, but managed to mortally wound Wiseman as well. Both Wiseman and Nicholas laid there motionless to be gathered by the dust[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]; or so we all thought[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]. A week later, Wiseman’s body disappeared with a note in its place. [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]The note said,[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] “The Darkness will finally overcome the Light.” Six months after the tragedy, a group of old friends are coming back to play. Are you ready for the Darkness?[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]I noticed a lot of fragments, but I hope I helped fix it.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Read over it and see if it fits the slip.[/size][/font][/color]

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[quote name='Brothar' timestamp='1320378172' post='5616138']
[spoiler=Le Rough *EDITED*]
[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Before YCM existed, there was a mysterious evil that ravaged throughout the world[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3], and it was powerful indeed[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]. It had the ability to send forces unimaginable to infiltrate and turn cities into a complete wasteland. Its goal was to destroy the world and rebuild it in its image. Before it could accomplish its goal, two brave warriors, code-named [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]'[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Wiseman[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]'[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] and [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]'[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Inventor[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]'[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3], defeated this evil as it was [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]headed[color=#000000] [/color]towards[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] YCM. They sealed it away for what they thought was eternity[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3], but[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] the evil did take something from each of the warriors before it was sealed. [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]It[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] took the sanity of one and the arm of the other.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Thanks to the evil, Wiseman convinced Inventor to steal the possessions of people and force them to play sadistic games. They targeted YCM, which was the very place they defended from the evil. When they found a YCM super computer called “Smesh”, the two put their plan into action. They placed a virus [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]into[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] the computer, which allowed them to [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]attack[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] people without remorse, destroying everything in their path. Before they could reap the fruit of their plans, the officials of YCM, with the help of Black, shut “Smesh” down before it was too late.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Not willing to accept defeat, Wiseman and Inventor created a more powerful computer program called “Dark[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]."[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] More sadistic that “Smesh”, “Dark” forced more people to play the sadistic games. The duo got closer to accomplishing their plan, but [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]"Dark"[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] was foiled again by their own program. [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]It somehow gained feelings when it confronted Clair and shut itself down after telling the duo to complete their plan themselves.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]The duo started the same way as they have always done. They [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]hacked[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] into peoples computers and [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]forced[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] them to play sadistic, yet virtual games. However, Wiseman became more insane as the years went on. He finally cracked and persuaded Inventor to raise the stakes; [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]to[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]make the games real[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]. With Wiseman leading, the duo started trapping, [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]even kidnapping their victims[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] to play their sadistic games. The games also came with a threat of death for those who [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]did not[color=#000000] [/color]win or want to participate fully[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3].[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]Their plans were later caught by the Mods[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3], yet they [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]could not[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] move in to shut down the games due to the risk of serious injury being inflicted on the victims. Wiseman kidnapped Mods to use as protection, which left them at a tough disadvantage. Wiseman’s genius forced them to move their efforts [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]underground[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] to [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]keep Inventor [/size][/font][/color][color=#ff0000][font=Arial][size=3](?)[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] from finding out. However, Striker, a former victim, infiltrated Wiseman’s base as part of a gambling corporation. He was discovered and quickly disposed of before he could leak anything, or so Wiseman thought. Striker discovered part of Wiseman’s true plan of attack and leaked it to the Mods before faking his death and going into hiding. [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]This[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] information gave the Mods an idea of Wiseman‘s [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]next[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] move.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]As it turned out, Wiseman planned to take over the world through the internet. Inventor [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]did not[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] like the way Wiseman was doing things and feared that Wiseman became insane. His attack on Caeda and Clair made Inventor realize that Wiseman truly did go insane. However, it was some time after that he defected from Wiseman and started sending more information to the Mods about the exact location of Wiseman. [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]This information, following[color=#000000] [/color]the information Striker provided, allowed them to put together Wiseman’s end; or so they thought.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Wiseman [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]was not[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] done yet[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]. He[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] brainwashed Black and Smeargle to distract the group while [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]he[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] dealt with Inventor, who changed his name to Nicholas. The Mods suffered a defeat against Wiseman’s group as they failed to capture [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]him[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]. Nicholas suffered life threatening injuries, but managed to mortally wound Wiseman as well. Both Wiseman and Nicholas laid there motionless to be gathered by the dust[/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]; or so we all thought[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]. A week later, Wiseman’s body disappeared with a note in its place. [/size][/font][/color][color=#0000ff][font=Arial][size=3]The note said,[/size][/font][/color][color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3] “The Darkness will finally overcome the Light.” Six months after the tragedy, a group of old friends are coming back to play. Are you ready for the Darkness?[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]I noticed a lot of fragments, but I hope I helped fix it.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#000000][font=Arial][size=3]Read over it and see if it fits the slip.[/size][/font][/color]
[/quote]

Yea, I was in a hurry since I wanted that out of the way. I'm also thing about the Leadership Conference I'm going to on Sunday. If you are wondering, the "Return of 2 Evils" part will come into focus in Round 2.

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[quote name='Mr. Striker' timestamp='1320448530' post='5617642']
Nagi, Taiga, and Jaxcob. Do you swear to perform the duties placed upon you to the best of your ability? Do you swear to uphold the honor and integrity of The Treehouse?
[/quote]I do. I swear to [s]tell the truth, and nothing but the truth[/s] Perform my duties to the best of my ability, as well as upholding the honor and integrity of The Treehousse.

@Jax: You forgot to uphold the honor of The Treehouse. :3

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[quote name='Inferno Knight LC' timestamp='1320451302' post='5617752']
Glad everything got done. :3 *bows to JJ, our puppet leader controlled by Stikeout* ^^ Y U NO HAZ AVI? D:
[/quote]Who doesn't have an avi? That one Onion who looks like Roxas?

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[quote name='Nagi Sanzenin' timestamp='1320451411' post='5617755']
Who doesn't have an avi? That one Onion who looks like Roxas?[/quote]

That was weird. For a moment he (Jax) didn't have an avi. .-.

[quote name='フォトン・ロクサス' timestamp='1320451476' post='5617757']
Avi? Oh and is OMGPOP worth making an account on?
[/quote]

Avatar or Pic. And yes. ^^

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