MartMaemees Posted April 30, 2011 Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 [img]http://i1095.photobucket.com/albums/i477/MartMaemees/WickedBanner.png?t=1304268934[/img] This is my first Fan Fic. I dont speak english very well so....... [spoiler='Chapter I - The Beginning of Beginning']Chapter I – The beginning of beginning Max woke up in a street. It was dark and cold. He couldn“t remember anything, only thing he could remember was his name. He looked around but didn“t see anyone. Suddenly he saw a Duel Deck lying on the street. Then he remembered that he is a duelist, and noticed that he has a dueling disk on his arm. He looked at the deck, it had quite weak monsters but with right combos it will be a good deck. Last card of the deck was an odd card, he had never seen that type of card before. [spoiler='Nr. 01 Cursed Demon Dragon'][img]http://i1095.photobucket.com/albums/i477/MartMaemees/Nr01CursedDemonDragon.png?t=1304139713[/img][/spoiler] Max picked up the deck. There was a paper under the deck. Max picked it up and read it. You probably noticed the odd card in your deck. That is a Cursed Monster Card. Cursed Monsters can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 Spell or Trap card from your hand for Cursed Monsters with 1 to 6 stars and by discarding 2 Spell or Trap cards from your hand from Cursed Monsters with 7 or more stars. The world is in danger, the Gods are angry and will send their duelists to turn world to Chaos. These duelists all have Cursed Monsters. They will only duel for opponents Cursed Monsters. You must not let them get these. You must collect all 99 Cursed Monsters to create the 100th Cursed Monster, the duelist who has the 100th monster decides the fate of the world. There are 4 more duelists who you must find and unite with, they also own one Cursed Monster. The Wicked Duelists will stop at nothing! Max walked away, until he reached downtown. He saw a nice school „School of Talented Duelists“ There were people like him walking around there. He entered the gates. He went to a big arena where tens of students were dueling. He noticed a bit smaller girl than him dueling with a big, older and probably very talented boy. The girls Life Points just went to 0 and the girl fell down crying. The bigger boy went and just took girls deck. Girl begged him. „Please, please don“t take it, if you take it i won“t be able to duel anymore“ But the boy just turned around and started walking away. Max could see flames in the boys eyes. Max rushed to duelist and asked. „Why did you take that girls deck?“ „She lost to me and i only duel for decks.“ Boy laughed at Max.“ Max got angry and sayed. „Then duel with me! When I lose I give you my deck, but if you lose, you give me your deck and her deck back. And before we start dueling what is the name of such a bully?“ „Name is Dex! LETS DUEL!“ Max 4000 Vs. Dex 4000 Dex had a little annoying smile in his face. I start with the first turn! Dex drew a card and his smile went even bigger. He probably thought that he will defeat Max easily. - I summon „Little Pixie“ (Lv 2/Fairy/Tuner/500/700) and then i activate „Quick Summon“. Quick Summon lets me Normal Summon another monster this turn and I summon level 6 „Dark Ruler“ (LV 6/Warrior/2400/2300). Little red pixie got caught in a whirlwind and when it ended there was no pixie anymore, there was a big dark man with a cape. - I set one card face down and end my turn Max drew a card. He wasn“t very happy because he had only one monster in his hand. He didn“t get a good starting hand. - I activate „Glowing Monster“. This card lets me put one monster card from my hand to my deck and take one monster with equal or less stars from my deck and put it into my hand. I put my Level 7 „Royal Warrior“ to my deck and my Level 6 „Nr. 01 Cursed Dark Dragon“ to my hand. But because Glowing monster i can't summon that monster during this turn so I end my turn with one face-down. Dex seemed to be starting to get worried because Max changed stronger monster to weaker, so that weaker monster had to better for something. Dex drew a card. - I activate Monster Rebirth to bring back my Little Pixie. Now I tune my Little Pixie with my Dark Ruler. I summon......“Dark Interchaos“ (Lv 8/Beast/Synchro/3000/2800) Pixie turned into two dark rings and Dark Ruler into dark stars and then they formed big beast who has a big fireball in the middle. Max stepped few steps back. - Dark Interchaos direct attack! - I activate my trap card Negate Attack, this negates your monsters attack and ends battle phase. Dex seemed a little dissapointed. - I end my turn Max drew a card, it was just what he was hoping for. - I summon „Storm Angel“ (Lv 4/Fairy/1800/1500). And now i discard 1 Spell card to special summon the card I put in my hand last turn, rise, Nr. 01 Cursed Dark Dragon! Next to the Storm Angel appeared one spell card but that spell card vanished into a green glow and that green glow grew into a big dragon. That dragon was even bigger than Dark Interchaos. To be continued....[/spoiler] [spoiler='Chapter II - The first meeting'] - Cursed Dark Dragon, ATTACK! Cursed Dark Dragon unleashed a gigantic flaming green ray to Dark Interchaos. Dex started laughing. - Your Dragon has less attack points than my Interchaos! - I activate the effect of Cursing Priest in my hand. By discarding this card one of my Cursed Monsters attack points are doubled. So Cursed Demon Dragons attack is now 4000! - NO! - Storm Angel, Attack! Take his life points out! Green Ray went even bigger and Dark Interchaos wasn´t no more. Green ray turned to Dex. - I end my turn Max 4000 Vs Dex 1200 Dex drew. He didnt seem very happy anymore. - I set three cards and end my turn. Max was suprised that Dex did not play any monsters. Max drew, Max smiled, he probably just got lucky. - I activate spell card from my hand! Cursed Wipeover. When i have 1 or more Cursed monsters on my side of the field i can destroy all spell and trap cards on the field. Huge storm was created around Cursed Demon Dragon and that wiped out all Dexs face-down cards. - Cursed Demon Dragon ATTACK! Max 4000 Vs Dex 0 Dex fell down, he couldnt move, he had never lost, he was born to duel. Max took two decks and gave the girl her deck back. „What is your name?“ Max asked. „Lisa, I always lose all duels. I got this quite powerful card i think but i dont know how to use it.“ Lisa showed Max a Cursed Card. [spoiler='Nr. 53 Cursed Queens Protector'][img]http://i1095.photobucket.com/albums/i477/MartMaemees/Nr53CursedQueensProtector.png?t=1304274172[/img][/spoiler] Max stepped back a few steps and breathed deeply in. He showed Lisa the letter. Lisa sayed: „No, this cant be, Im not a good duelist, I cannot do this. Im not good enough. You take this card and go, i can“t do this.“ „But you have to. I cant do this alone, I know that if you train a bit you can become a great duelist. I will teach you.“ „Okay.“ Lisa answered slowly Lisa didnt have any parents so she lived alone. They went to Lisas home. Max told Lisa about how he woke up in the street with no memory. Then they started training Lisas dueling skills. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Crimson Blaze Posted May 1, 2011 Report Share Posted May 1, 2011 I like the idea of Cursed monsters. Although, I think the 99 Cursed monsters were based on the 99 Numbers monsters. How did you make that card? Anyway, I think the story started off kind of weird, but it got a little better once the duel started. Could you maybe provide a description of what the characters look like? I could tell that your English isn't very good from all the grammatical errors, but don't get discouraged. Other than that and a few repetitive words (big), I believe that you could make a nice fanfic. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MartMaemees Posted May 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2011 Made that card using Zextras Dark Template. I know that my English isn't the best because i don't live in English speaking country When I get time I will probably release Chapter II soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted May 1, 2011 Report Share Posted May 1, 2011 I agree with Crimson. Even when there are gramatical errors, you can still tell what you're trying to say. I liked the fanfic as well and can't wait for the second chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MartMaemees Posted May 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2011 added Second Chapter. There are some grammatic mistakes because of my stupid computer probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted May 1, 2011 Report Share Posted May 1, 2011 I like the second chapter as well... it could/should be longer but it was short and sweet. I liked how we have another duelist to add to the team though. And it's not like she's a hot shot either, she's a beginner and that will be interesting. I'm looking foward to the next chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MartMaemees Posted May 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 Next chapter may be up tomorrow. Today I'm too busy with other things to write. hope you also liked the banner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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