♠Decietful King♠ Posted April 30, 2011 Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 [center]Here I am looking for another challenger. So this time the requirements will be a little less specific than the last. But I hope to find someone this time I want someone to make a sort of balanced Field Nuker. This card cannot be a Synchro Monster or Exceed Monster. Make its Summoning requirements sort of not extreme but respectable. So I'll post my card as soon as someone accepts my challenge. The Prize is a smacking 300 points and runner up shall receive a rep Contestant 1: [IMG]http://i1140.photobucket.com/albums/n563/DecietfulKing/DivineBeastApophis.jpg?t=1304177064[/IMG] Lore: [list]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 “Divine Sanctuary” Field Spell and 2 Monsters you control. This card cannot be selected as an attack target. If your opponent activates an effect of a card that targets a card you control, you can remove from play this face-up Attack Position Monster to negate that effect. You can Special Summon this card during your next End Phase after this turn. If this card is removed from the field and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove it from play to destroy all cards on the field. If this card is removed from play by this effect it cannot be reused during this duel.[/list] Contestant 2: [img]http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff415/ks2ill34/createcard.jpg[/img] LORE:[list] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing at least 2 monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy cards your opponent controls up to the number of monsters you Tributed. This card gains 300 ATK for each card you destroyed with this card's effect.[/list] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Punk Posted April 30, 2011 Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 I accept your challenge. Wait, can we use a card we already used? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted April 30, 2011 Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 i'm up for it card will be up after in a minute[img]http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff415/ks2ill34/createcard.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted April 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 I'll be accepting AngryBird. First to four wins. My card is being posted now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted April 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 Come on and vote don't make me start spamming inboxes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2011 RAWWWRRRR =3 Need some votes (hint by extended Rawr, this is rather serious) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 Here's my LORE: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing at least 2 monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy cards your opponent controls up to the number of monsters you Tributed. This card gains 300 ATK for each card you destroyed with this card's effect. i also consider this as a bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark345678 Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 I vote "Divine Beast Apophis" for a couple of reasons: 1. Less OP'd than other card. Has good effect but has harder requirements to meet 2. More yugioh-ish name than "Dark Persona". Also is a little more creative ___________________________________________________________________________________ So here's my rating: [Spoiler=Divine Beast Apophis] Name: 8/10 Picture: 9/10 Effect: 8/10 Requirements: 7/10 Realistic: 7/10 [/spoiler] [spoiler=Dark Persona] Name: 6/10 Picture: 9/10 Effect: 7.5/10 Realistic: 7/10 Requirements: 8/10 [/spoiler] Which adds up to Divine Beast Apophis: 39 Dark Persona: 37.5 ________________________ That is why I voted for Divine Beast Apophis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 Alright then that's 1-0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted May 3, 2011 Report Share Posted May 3, 2011 deceitful king 1) Card looks better 2) effect is decent 3) Dark Persona isn't a creative name... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Punk Posted May 4, 2011 Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 Deceitful King's Card It's nice and original. Eye pleasing too. However, my concern is that it's Stardust Dragon, except with a not much harder summoning condition and a nuke effect. Not only that, but it can't be selected as an attack target. So your opponent needs to use a Spell or Trap card to destroy it. Not only that, but it can destroy itself in order to destroy the Spell or Trap that is trying to destroy it, just so it can be resummoned. Unless you want to nuke the field, in which case you can whenever you want to, since your opponent get's their Spell, Traps, and Monster Effects that target your monsters get cock-blocked once. This would all be the case, except for one glaring OCG problem. It's effect states "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. [b]This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 “Divine Sanctuary” Field Spell and 2 Monsters you control.[/b]". Bold part is key. It can't resummon itself since it doesn't fit the requirements for the Special Summon. This is an OCG problem since that part of the effect should be re-written as "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 “Divine Sanctuary” Field Spell and 2 Monsters you control, [b]or by it's own effect.[/b]" Bold part is change. Still it's a nice card and it's eye pleasing, and might balance itself with it's Summoning Requirements. However, once it gets on the field, your opponent is pretty much screwed. I know I would run this over other field nukers, you know, if this card were real and for some odd reason legal. Angry Bird's Card It's just a flat-out boring card all-round. Name is boring. Card's Effect is boring. Even the art is boring. However, it's pretty balanced actually, if not a little UP. At most you get to destroy 5 cards at the cost of 5 of your own monsters. And then it becomes a beatstick with a decent 3500 ATK. Which it needs, since it's pretty much a useless vanilla after it's summoned. At least you get to destroy 2 at the cost of 2 of your own, and then it becomes a meh-ish Beatstick with only 2600 for 2 tributes and no other effect. People will be returning this to their hands if they really wanted the nuke effect, however, it's a +1 that gives you a near-useless beatstick. Not only that, but if it's summoned is canceled, you get at least a -3 and at most a -6. One thing that makes it's a little OP is that once you nuke the field, you have a chance of hitting with a great 3500, since I doubt you will be clearing the field with anything less than that. Maybe a 3200, but that's a stretch. It's main drawback, however, is that other cards do it better than this. Like, almost all of the other field nukers do it better. My point goes to Deceitful King. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 4, 2011 Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 looks like i lose.. sheesh looks like i gave out a wrong card.. 300 pts are up but let me correct you Daft Punk Its a semi-nomi dude so it means you don't have to put the "or by its own effect" it's only for nomi guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Punk Posted May 4, 2011 Report Share Posted May 4, 2011 [quote name='AngryBird' timestamp='1304485106' post='5187287'] let me correct you Daft Punk Its a semi-nomi dude so it means you don't have to put the "or by its own effect" it's only for nomi guys [/quote] Bleh, forgot how Semi-Nomi's work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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