university222 Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 I never really post in this forum so here is a random card i just made feel free to give advice on improvements and comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 Quite alot of grammar errors, and the elephant should really be in the centre of the frame but good effort ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 Bad grammarBad pic.Should probably be a machine.Quite good Alex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 loads of grammar problems but good 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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