So Legit You Quit Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 [IMG]http://i806.photobucket.com/albums/yy347/_SF3_/Signatures/ENw.png[/IMG] I still lack a Wow factor. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 Oh s*** son. The "sprite" doesn't do this tag justice, I'd much prefer it if you'd have used a better focal. REALLY love the atmo in ALL of your tags, you may lack that wow factor but the atmosphere within your tags connect with the viewer. Loving your improvement, best imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 Like NW said a sprite doesn't really provide a focal powerful enough for the bg in this one. Try to change the focal to something different, it could look pretty bad ass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted April 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 I dont really have many resources for renders/stocks. D: Im constantly looking for some, if i find one, ill consider editing this. or making a similar tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 The only thing that bothers me is the bg and the text. Would've been cool with a smudge texture on the bg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted April 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 Well the background is smudge. It needs textures though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikaeo Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 It's a nice looking tag. The lighting seems appropriate. Except for the fact that the light source is behind the fractal, and it is showing up on the front of the sprite... The text isn't distracting in any way. I've seen text overdone too many time so good job. I only have 2 issues with this tag. The sprite which I think just needs to be removed. And the lack of saturation with the colors. I mean, there is a nice color scheme, but it lacks contrast to distract the eye just enough to not get bored. So, keep up the good work, you seem like a very capable artist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted May 2, 2011 Report Share Posted May 2, 2011 I suggest removing the sprite, sharpening it and making the transition a little more smoother. There should be more darkening since the lighting is a bit bright. Then I suggest applying the image and making the colours feel more underwater with a bit more dodging on the lighting side. You can finalize this piece by adding some wow factors. How? Easy: You see those yellow pigments on the C4D? Make them shine, [i]realistically[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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