Pichu Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 I'm back guys! Welcome to the reviews! [spoiler=The Power of One-{Mario & Luigi-Lost In Space: Remake}] Guess who's back? Pichu! Pichu's Reviews are back and never better! Let's start shall we? [b]Over the pass years I've been on YCM, many member have started to review Fan Fictions. Ranging from the crappy ones to Crab Helmet's Foe Fiction. Then I started the reviewing too. Many hate mails and what-not drove me away from YCM. But now I've returned. Let's review![/b] My first review will be on [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/244869-mario-luigi-lost-in-space-remake/"]Mario & Luigi-Lost In Space[Remake][/url] by [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/205642-future-paradise/"]Future Paradise.[/url] Now let's start out good! [i][b]Prelude[/b][/i] So much for the good start... Did you mean Prologue? [i]In the world of Mario & Luigi, many live. A vast amount of creatures roam the worlds, minding to their own business. Everything is peaceful[/i] Since when is Mario peaceful? The fat dragon is always stealing the princess from the plumber... [i]- until Bowser tries to take over everything, but is always stopped by Mario and company. Bowser then gives up until he devises another plan. Now, Mario and company are back at home in the Mushroom Kingdom ruled by Princess Peach.[/i] Oh God... Peach ruling where you live..... HELL [i]Nothing is out-of-the-ordinary. Currently, it’s late winter, with temperatures at record lows- 32 degrees below normal. The snow is falling at a blinding rate. Several feet have built up. Many people are safe in Peach’s castle.[/i] Safe... in Peach's Castle. [insert lauging crowd here] [i]Mario is sitting in the Princess’s bedroom, watching her fall asleep.[/i] Stalker plumber from Hell. [i]Little he knows what is to happen next...[/i] YES! The torture is over! Wait. There's chapters to this. F***! [u][i]Chapter 1- Let The Goombas Lead The Way[/i][/u] [i]As he watches Peach fall asleep,[/i] Still a stalker.... [i]the hero of the Mushroom Kingdom, Mario, glances outside. The dark night makes the snow hard to see. Mario reflects back on how many times he has saved the Princess. Countless times, Mario thinks.[/i] Hint, Hint, fat plumber. Maybe the princess whats the dragon instead of a plumber who.... has really let himself go.... [i]After a couple more minutes of watching Peach, Mario decides to leave her to herself. He exits out of her room, closing the door behind himself. He starts down the hallway.[/i] Thank God! Now the princess dosen't have to worry about that creppy plumber staring at her. [i]Late at night, hardly anyone is out. He spots Toadsworth going to the bathroom,[/i] No he didn't. Mario characters don't use the bathroom! When was the last game you saw a bathroom. .....chirp.....chirp....chirp.... That's what I thought. [i]a Toad walking with a snack, and another Toad asleep on the floor. Mario looks up at the pictures on the wall- nothing but Mushroom Kingdom. Once he reaches the stairs, he turns and makes his way down. Once downstairs, Mario is only a few feet from his destination- Toad’s Cafe. Toad’s Cafe is a cafeteria filled with counters that have everything from breakfast to dessert. The cafeteria is one of the biggest rooms in the castle- with over one hundred 50x20 tables, and over three thousand chairs.[/i] Toad's Cafe! Coming to [b]YOUR[/b] city soon! [i]Mario enters, finding only about eight others scattered in the room. He walks over to a pizza counter and looks inside. He finds something small, round-ish, and green head first wiggling in the back. He begins to make his order. “I would like to order,” he begins. But then he freezes. The green thing turns around and sees Mario. It’s a goomba.[/i] Not it's not! Only Yoshis, Koopa Shells, Luigi, Mr. L, and Link can be green! Not Goombas! [i]Never before has Mario seen a goomba any other color but brown. But before Mario can move, the goomba attacks. Just before it knocks over Mario, something goes right by his head and strikes the goomba- a hammer. Mario turns to find his brother, Luigi, standing there.[/i] Because all brothers follow their brothers around with a hammer. Perfectly normal, right? [i]“There’s more of them around,” starts Luigi, “and I know where they’re coming from. Remember the pipes in the basement? I found a portal there leaking them out. I came to get you to help me stop them.” “Well, it’s probably just Bowser again,” states Mario. “We can easily finish this.” With that, the bros. took off running. Mario stops, then Luigi with a questioning look on his face. “Why are we stopping?” he asks. “We have to make sure the Princess if safe!” Mario exclaims. Mario bolts upstairs to Peach’s room- open.[/i] Remember kids. You are never safe in Peach's castle. There is always a chubby dragon and his children stalking you there. [i]Oh no, Mario thinks. He runs in to find her gone. “Peach!”[/i] Remember, always safe! [i]“Bro, she might have been taken by the goombas, come on!” exclaims Luigi, half-way down the stairs.[/i] How? They have like..... no hands... just sides. [i]Mario and Luigi sprint down to the basement door. They stand there, then Mario busts open the door. The sight is a nightmare. The room is half-full of green goombas. There must be at least three hundred of them. What comes through the portal next is horrific. A thing that looks like Bowser- just four times bigger- comes out. It’s also green and has a symbol on it’s stomach. It’s a circle that has a big “L” with the text “W O R L D” underneath. It lets out a mighty scream and points at Mario.[/i] See kids. Here's the dragon. A green one! Puff the Magic Dragon! [i]It then speaks. “Get Mario!” The goombas obey. They begin until Luigi leaks his emotions. “No, don’t hurt him, please, he’s all I’ve got!”[/i] "Because that princess that wears orange means nothing to me!" [i]The goombas instantaneously freexe in place. “Oh,” Mario lets out, “they listen to you.” Before Luigi can start, one of the many goombas come forward and interrupts. “Of course we do, he’s our leader.”[/i] Wow. Major Plot Twist! I like plot twists. If only this one didn't happen so early in the story. [i]“Leader of what?” questions Mario. With a long look on his face, the goomba explains, “Of Luigiworld, the planet in the galaxy next to Marioland. You should know, you’re the leader of Marioland.” At this surprise, Mario lifts his eyebrows. He looks over to his brother, who is in shock. Mario thinks to himself, Galaxy? Luigiworld? Marioland? Green goombas? None of this makes sense. We’ll have to see for ourselves.[/i] [s]Marioland is the same shape as Starship Mario and Luigiland is shaped like a Weegee head![/s] [i]“Well then, let’s go,” says Mario. The green look-alike Bowser agrees. He begins, “since we only listen to Luigi, it’s his decision.” All eyes go to Luigi. He nods. “Then go through that portal,” says the look-alike. The bros. walk to the portal, then go in. The goombas and look-alike follow. But just then, the portal closes.[/i] Now they are dead! But there's another chapter, dammit! We this is it guys. Good job Paradise! And I'm not just saying that! Stay tuned for more reviews guys! [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squidward Tentacles Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 i lol'd at just about every part... keep up with the reviews! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Ok man, personally this isn't really a good review. You aren't noting any mistakes, any grammar errors, and all you are doing is commenting with what YOU think. So, no better way to say it, that review stunk...... Damn I fail at sugar coating. But you have a saving grace; It's actually pretty funny. But that is it. However, I'll need to see some more reviews to be sure..... [s]DAMMIT REVIEW ME WHEN I PUT UP MY POKEMON FIC IN LIKE 3 SECONDS MAN[/S] ....yeah. Good luck in future reviews. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Congratulations! You're still absolutely incompetent at everything! Also, bathrooms appeared in Paper Mario 2 and Super Paper Mario, so there's an extra fail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 [quote name='Crab Helmet' timestamp='1303530799' post='5160904'] Congratulations! You're still absolutely incompetent at everything! Also, bathrooms appeared in Paper Mario 2 and Super Paper Mario, so there's an extra fail. [/quote] CRAB, YOU ARE RETARDED. GO CRY ABOUT IT, WAH, WAH! STOP ALWAYS ACTING LIKE YOU KNOW EVERYTHING; YOU DON'T. PICHU IS MORE THAN COMPETENT AT WRITING REVIEWS. YOU ARE JUST PISSED BECAUSE YOUR OWN REVIEWS SUCK... A LOT. ALSO, PAPER MARIO "2" DOESN'T EXIST, RETARD. WOW, YOU REALLY ARE AS STUPID AS PICHU MAKES YOU OUT TO BE. SERIOUSLY, GO AWAY. NO ONE LIKES YOU. Pichu, I found your review to be perfectly enjoyable. Maybe that's because it was so stupid that it was partially amusing to see you terribly fail at attempting to review a terrible fanfic, but it was funny nonetheless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted April 23, 2011 Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 I am trying to be as nice as possible here (so much so that I even read that book about how people with Asperger's comment on things to stop myself from accidentally being too honest). You can't write one liners. Your narrative and style of writing is so poor and so try-hard [sic] that it is rubbing off on me as I type this sentence. But back to the point - your narrative and delivery is appalling. A good comedian can make a bad joke funny. You aren't a good comedian. You can't deliver lines well at all. Don't try to do it again until you learn how to deliver something well, to develop a style of prose that is somewhat bearable. Moving on to the flesh of the 'review' - it isn't a review. It's your opinion - you don't cite anything other than things you perceive to be bad writing - you don't pick up on many grammatical errors or problems with prose, you just lazily plough through the work whilst acting like a wanker. Good comedians can make being a repugnant, sneering idiot funny. Every single sitcom has a real ba[b][/b]stard of a character who is funny for being one in the first place. You aren't a good comedian. You seem to actually be a repulsive (albeit slightly pitiable) person who is trying too hard to be funny. Overall, it's terrible, but I slightly pity you. I feel that you are actually trying hard. A person that just reads this 'review' would probably feel sorry for you, but as most of YCM know, you are not a nice person. You have been nasty and childish in the past. This 'review' is so terrible that it actually makes me overlook how repulsive you are and find ample room to pity you. And believe me, it has to be really terrible to be so bad it distracts people from how bad the writer's personality is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted April 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2011 Thank you Dark. Ahh. Crabby is back. I hope we can be friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 ...I kinda liked the review, to be honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted April 26, 2011 Report Share Posted April 26, 2011 You should review Crab Helmet's Foe Fiction reviews. [IMG]http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss75/DonPantalones/trollface.gif[/IMG] [quote name='Pichu' timestamp='1303523978' post='5160692'] Now let's start out good! [/quote] [i]Now, let's start with something that's good![/i] If you have write with poor grammar, you shouldn't review fan-fictions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted April 26, 2011 Report Share Posted April 26, 2011 Pichu, you are the guru and I am your lowly pupil. These reviews are simply [b]fan[/b]tastic (terrible pun), and I would be greatly honored [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/247275-an-untitled-fan-fiction/]if you would review my literary piece[/url]. I would be indebted to you forever if you could bestow upon me such a review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted April 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2011 I will dark! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 [quote name='Dark' timestamp='1303532088' post='5160935'] ALSO, PAPER MARIO "2" DOESN'T EXIST, RETARD. [/quote] [size="1"] there kind of was... people just called it "the thousand year door..." game was kind of a big deal... [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catterjune Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 [quote name='Crab Helmet' timestamp='1303530799' post='5160904'] Congratulations! You're still absolutely incompetent at everything! Also, bathrooms appeared in Paper Mario 2 and Super Paper Mario, so there's an extra fail. [/quote] Also in Super Star Saga and... for God's sake, they're PLUMBERS. They HAVE used the "we're off to fix the bathroom! Lawl!" excuse in the game. =\ Anyway, as has been already said, that was terrible. It wasn't a review, it was you repeating your opinion in an unfunny way. "Isn't a review supposed to be an opinion?" Not particularly. It's supposed to be a critique of their work, not just saying "good" "bad". And then not even being funny about it. [Something about a cafe] "toad cafe! Coming to a city near you!" That's like... not funny, not insightful, not clever, nor does it critique his work in anyway. tl;dr - You have terrible prose, terrible delivery, and you're reviews are neither funny, clever, charming or entertaining. tl;dr of tl;dr - stop posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 I kind of enjoyed it, I admit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted April 29, 2011 Report Share Posted April 29, 2011 [spoiler=The Review of One] Guess who's back? Pichu! Pichu's Reviews are back and never better! Let's start shall we? [b]I’d rather not. But better to get this over with.[/b] Over the pass years I've been on YCM, many member have started to review Fan Fictions. Ranging from the crappy ones to Crab Helmet's Foe Fiction. Then I started the reviewing too. [b]Pichu: “Sadly, mine were crappy too.”[/b] Many hate mails and what-not drove me away from YCM. But now I've returned. Let's review! My first review will be on [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/244869-mario-luigi-lost-in-space-remake/"]Mario & Luigi-Lost In Space[Remake][/url] by [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/205642-future-paradise/"]Future Paradise.[/url] Now let's start out good! [i][b]Prelude[/b][/i] So much for the good start... Did you mean Prologue? [i]In the world of Mario & Luigi, many live. A vast amount of creatures roam the worlds, minding to their own business. Everything is peaceful[/i] Since when is Mario peaceful? The fat dragon is always stealing the princess from the plumber... [b]He’s not a dragon, he’s a large Koopa. At least TRY to play the Mario games before reviewing a Mario fic. Though to be fair, it is pretty hectic over in the Mushroom Kingdom.[/b] [i]- until Bowser tries to take over everything, but is always stopped by Mario and company. Bowser then gives up until he devises another plan. Now, Mario and company are back at home in the Mushroom Kingdom ruled by Princess Peach.[/i] Oh God... Peach ruling where you live..... HELL [b]Not really, just have to hire a plumber to rescue her from the fat [s]dragon[/s] Koopa king every few days.[/b] [i]Nothing is out-of-the-ordinary. Currently, it’s late winter, with temperatures at record lows- 32 degrees below normal. The snow is falling at a blinding rate. Several feet have built up. Many people are safe in Peach’s castle.[/i] Safe... in Peach's Castle. [insert lauging crowd here] [b]The only one who’s really in any danger is Peach. It’s not like Bowser the fat dragon king is going to smuggle Toads out of the castle for child labor, he has Goombas for that.[/b] [i]Mario is sitting in the Princess’s bedroom, watching her fall asleep.[/i] Stalker plumber from Hell. [b]More like patient plumber from Hell. A stalker follows people stealthily. If he’s watching her fall asleep he’s not being a stalker.[/b] [i]Little he knows what is to happen next...[/i] YES! The torture is over! Wait. There's chapters to this. F***! [b]What torture? We have not been subjugated to any form of really terrible writing yet, because this just began a few sentences ago. The only torture here is having to listen to someone refer to Bowser as a fat dragon.[/b] [u][i]Chapter 1- Let The Goombas Lead The Way[/i][/u] [i]As he watches Peach fall asleep,[/i] Still a stalker.... [b]Still not. No matter how much he watches her fall asleep (which is undoubtedly questionable) he will NOT be able to become a stalker.[/b] [i]the hero of the Mushroom Kingdom, Mario, glances outside. The dark night makes the snow hard to see. Mario reflects back on how many times he has saved the Princess. Countless times, Mario thinks.[/i] Hint, Hint, fat plumber. Maybe the princess whats the dragon instead of a plumber who.... has really let himself go.... [b]Yes, the princess [s]wants[/s] whats the fat dragon instead of the fat plumber who always takes time from his job to rescue her from said fat dragon.[/b] [i]After a couple more minutes of watching Peach, Mario decides to leave her to herself. He exits out of her room, closing the door behind himself. He starts down the hallway.[/i] Thank God! Now the princess dosen't have to worry about that creppy plumber staring at her. [b]Can we please move on from this?[/b] [i]Late at night, hardly anyone is out. He spots Toadsworth going to the bathroom,[/i] No he didn't. Mario characters don't use the bathroom! When was the last game you saw a bathroom. .....chirp.....chirp....chirp.... That's what I thought. [b] Just because you don’t see bathrooms, or them going to bathrooms, (which...I mean, they're plumbers. Come on.) doesn’t mean they don’t go to the bathroom. Heck, I can say you never go to the bacthroom, because I never see you go. Does that make it so? Perhaps, but not necessarily.[/b] [i]a Toad walking with a snack, and another Toad asleep on the floor. Mario looks up at the pictures on the wall- nothing but Mushroom Kingdom. Once he reaches the stairs, he turns and makes his way down. Once downstairs, Mario is only a few feet from his destination- Toad’s Cafe. Toad’s Cafe is a cafeteria filled with counters that have everything from breakfast to dessert. The cafeteria is one of the biggest rooms in the castle- with over one hundred 50x20 tables, and over three thousand chairs.[/i] Toad's Cafe! Coming to [b]YOUR[/b] city soon! [b]By the way, did anyone notice how Crab already reviewed this fic?[/b] [i]Mario enters, finding only about eight others scattered in the room. He walks over to a pizza counter and looks inside. He finds something small, round-ish, and green head first wiggling in the back. He begins to make his order. “I would like to order,” he begins. But then he freezes. The green thing turns around and sees Mario. It’s a goomba.[/i] Not it's not! Only Yoshis, Koopa Shells, Luigi, Mr. L, and Link can be green! Not Goombas! [b]There are so many things I can list that are green right now. And by the way, Pichu, this was probably supposed to be surprising (thought it sort of fails at that) so don’t kill the mood so suddenly, dude.[/b] [i]Never before has Mario seen a goomba any other color but brown. But before Mario can move, the goomba attacks. Just before it knocks over Mario, something goes right by his head and strikes the goomba- a hammer. Mario turns to find his brother, Luigi, standing there.[/i] Because all brothers follow their brothers around with a hammer. Perfectly normal, right? [b]The Mario brothers are known to have a hammer handy at all times. Even if he was just passing by, he could give that thing a whack. Plus, he has to follow his brother with a hammer, it’s not like he can discard it from his inventory.[/b] [i]“There’s more of them around,” starts Luigi, “and I know where they’re coming from. Remember the pipes in the basement? I found a portal there leaking them out. I came to get you to help me stop them.” “Well, it’s probably just Bowser again,” states Mario. “We can easily finish this.” With that, the bros. took off running. Mario stops, then Luigi with a questioning look on his face. “Why are we stopping?” he asks. “We have to make sure the Princess if safe!” Mario exclaims. Mario bolts upstairs to Peach’s room- open.[/i] Remember kids. You are never safe in Peach's castle. There is always a chubby dragon and his children stalking you there. [b]So Bowser lost a few pounds throughout the course of the story? Sweet. Anyway, the Toads are never really in much danger. It’s the Princess herself that gets kidnapped. Why? Because royalty is worth far more as a bargaining tool than one of several hundred mushroom-head people.[/b] [i]Oh no, Mario thinks. He runs in to find her gone. “Peach!”[/i] Remember, always safe! [b]Notice the author never once said it was safe, he just said peaceful. Truth be told, a few levels really are very peaceful, even if they’re not safe.[/b] [i]“Bro, she might have been taken by the goombas, come on!” exclaims Luigi, half-way down the stairs.[/i] How? They have like..... no hands... just sides. [b]Well aside from forming into a group and pushing her into the group so they suspend her from the ground, then carry her back to Bowser the [s]fat[/s] [s]chubby[/s] [s]dragon[/s] Koopa king, they really can’t do much, I suppose.[/b] [i]Mario and Luigi sprint down to the basement door. They stand there, then Mario busts open the door. The sight is a nightmare. The room is half-full of green goombas. There must be at least three hundred of them. What comes through the portal next is horrific. A thing that looks like Bowser- just four times bigger- comes out. It’s also green and has a symbol on it’s stomach. It’s a circle that has a big “L” with the text “W O R L D” underneath. It lets out a mighty scream and points at Mario.[/i] See kids. Here's the dragon. A green one! Puff the Magic Dragon! [b]See kids. This is how NOT to help the writer. At all.[/b] [i]It then speaks. “Get Mario!” The goombas obey. They begin until Luigi leaks his emotions. “No, don’t hurt him, please, he’s all I’ve got!”[/i] "Because that princess that wears orange means nothing to me!" [b]He’s really the only known family Luigi has. I’d be like that too if my brother was being taken away. Unless my brother was Pichu.[/b] [i]The goombas instantaneously freexe in place. “Oh,” Mario lets out, “they listen to you.” Before Luigi can start, one of the many goombas come forward and interrupts. “Of course we do, he’s our leader.”[/i] Wow. Major Plot Twist! I like plot twists. If only this one didn't happen so early in the story. [b]Plot twists can happen early, who named themselves God of Writing and said they can’t? There’s no timing for a plot twist. Sadly, this one sucked. Sadly, Pichu didn’t point out the poor deliverance and instead went on to talk about it being too early.[/b] [i]“Leader of what?” questions Mario. With a long look on his face, the goomba explains, “Of Luigiworld, the planet in the galaxy next to Marioland. You should know, you’re the leader of Marioland.” At this surprise, Mario lifts his eyebrows. He looks over to his brother, who is in shock. Mario thinks to himself, Galaxy? Luigiworld? Marioland? Green goombas? None of this makes sense. We’ll have to see for ourselves.[/i] [s]Marioland is the same shape as Starship Mario and Luigiland is shaped like a Weegee head![/s] [b][s]This doesn’t help the writer, and it’s not funny. Why do you subject us to this Pichu? WHY?[/s][/b] [i]“Well then, let’s go,” says Mario. The green look-alike Bowser agrees. He begins, “since we only listen to Luigi, it’s his decision.” All eyes go to Luigi. He nods. “Then go through that portal,” says the look-alike. The bros. walk to the portal, then go in. The goombas and look-alike follow. But just then, the portal closes.[/i] Now they are dead! But there's another chapter, dammit! [b]Then they’re not dead…[/b] We this is it guys. Good job Paradise! And I'm not just saying that! [b]you ARE just saying that, because this fic was horrible. YOU’RE horrible at this. And I’m not just saying that.[/b] Stay tuned for more reviews guys! [b]No thanks. All in all, I got worse than I expected. And I didn’t expect much. Instead of talking about the bad writing, or the poor plot devices, or the bad deliveries of everything that was supposed to be dramatic, Pichu talked about a fat dragon. Who is not even a dragon. I think that sums up my thoughts on this. Good day to you, SIR.[/b] [/spoiler] And THAT is how you review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted April 29, 2011 Report Share Posted April 29, 2011 Ah, brings back memories... (Has flashback to when Pichu reviewed a fanfic I did, Crab Helmet reviewed that review, and the three of us got entangled into an internet war of sorts) Oh yeah, those were the days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 29, 2011 Report Share Posted April 29, 2011 [quote name='PikMan' timestamp='1304043176' post='5175248'] Ah, brings back memories... (Has flashback to when Pichu reviewed a fanfic I did, Crab Helmet reviewed that review, and the three of us got entangled into an internet war of sorts) Oh yeah, those were the days. [/quote] You think I was at war with you and Pichu? You think far too highly of yourselves. Like I said to C4, my interactions with Pichu and yourself may have felt like a war to the two of you, but for me... it was Tuesday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted April 29, 2011 Report Share Posted April 29, 2011 [quote name='Crab Helmet' timestamp='1304070418' post='5175758'] You think I was at war with you and Pichu? You think far too highly of yourselves. Like I said to C4, my interactions with Pichu and yourself may have felt like a war to the two of you, but for me... it was Tuesday. [/quote] YOUR M. BISON REFERENCE MAKING ME LAUGH. EDIT: I think I'll have something crazy for Pichu to review in the near future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted April 29, 2011 Report Share Posted April 29, 2011 Why would you want Pichu to review your fic? >.> Except maybe to waste his time, your time, and any readers' time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted April 29, 2011 Report Share Posted April 29, 2011 [quote name='Hayate Ayasaki' timestamp='1304075417' post='5175825'] Why would you want Pichu to review your fic? >.> Except maybe to waste his time, your time, and any readers' time. [/quote] I'm curious about how he'll handle the insanity I'm working on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted May 1, 2011 Report Share Posted May 1, 2011 [quote name='Hayate Ayasaki' timestamp='1304075417' post='5175825'] Why would you want Pichu to review your fic? >.> Except maybe to waste his time, your time, and any readers' time. [/quote] Well you see, my good sir, my fanfic was the first review he ever did. In the title, I put out a request for reviews by whoever, Pichu saw it, and said ,why not? Hilarity ensued. Oh the hijinks, oh the hijinks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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