Dwarven King Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 I'll give everyone one more day. Hotaru, I'm posting in Legend! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greedx Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Hotaru: Yeah I guess i should take him back now, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Finished 12th cap app. Lemme know it anything's off since he might be a bit overpowered, I've tried to balance him out as best I can... [spoiler=Yon Reider] [b]Name:[/b] Yon Rieder [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Appearance:[/b] Yon is a mysterious entity, wearing a hooded, white coat over his Soul Reapers robe and captain Haori which goes down to his ankles, obscuring his body from view almost completely, additionally he wears a pair of white gloves and thick white boots. His face is concealed by a white mask in the shape of a Jackal with small holes along the muzzle, adding to this his hood is always up obscuring his head and identity completely aside from a pair of yellow eyes. Yon’s Zanpaktou is held on a belt at his waist in a black scabbard with a white handle and a simple blank circle as a guard. [spoiler=image][IMG]http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t270/TotalObelisk/YonReider.png[/IMG][/spoiler] [b]Personality:[/b] Yon is a shut in and appears very rarely outside of his own laboratory, seen mostly by only his closest subordinates outside of captain meetings. Yon is completely dedicated to his research and has little empathy for anything that would get in his way. His interest is very hard to spark but once he does find something that interests him it will almost become an obsession to him and he will not stop till his curiosity is satisfied. Yon has little regard for other forms of life and will often flat out ignore anything that doesn’t interest him. He has little patience and while he is hard to anger he can quickly become dangerous. As far as battle goes Yon will not engage with anyone unless they interest him and even then he will hold back his abilities, only unleashing his true powers if he deems his opponent worth of suffering his wrath. Yon’s tone of voice hardly ever changes and speaks in an almost constant, emotionless tone which remains no matter what situation he’s in, whether something interests or angers him or not, making it very hard for anybody to ‘read’ him as a person. [b]Biography:[/b] Very little is known about Yon and his backstory, leading most people to question his position as captain. Since the day he first arrived in the Seiretei, Yon has hid his appearance and identity from others (although there is a rumour that the captain commander knows who he is and what he looks like). When he arrived he practically demanded to be given the then open 12th squad captain position, taking the exam and passing easily. He has been the 12th squad captain for over 100 years and yet in that time little is still known about him and his true nature. [b]Rank & squad:[/b] 12th Squad Captain [b]Shikai Name & Release Phrase:[/b] Laugh at the Moon and Cry at the sun, grab the minds of the weak and drag them down into the oblivion of madness, Oukoku No Ankun (Kingdom of a Foolish Ruler) [b]Shikai Appearance:[/b] Visually, Yon’s Zanpaktou changes little, the handle becomes grey instead of black and either side of the weapon’s blade become pure white and pitch black respectively. [b]Shikai Abilities:[/b] When released, Yon's zanpaktou allows him to warp matter in his surroundings, giving him the ability to bend objects out of shape to suit his needs, even so far as changing the material entirely. For example he can shape and mould sand into solid glass structures, warp metal and break it apart into its base elements and so on. [b]Bankai Name:[/b] Rengoku no Ankun (Purgatory of the Foolish Ruler) [b]Bankai Appearance:[/b] Physically, nothing changes except a strange black aura seems to surround the area around Yon and his opponent, the size varying depending on Yon’s will. [b]Bankai Abilities:[/b] Yon’s bankai envelopes the immediate area around Yon and creates a form of pocket dimension. Yon can manipulate this dimension any way he chooses, including gravity, form and many other things. This power is limited, however, as he cannot use this ability directly on his opponent or himself and maintaining the dimension can take a considerable strain on him depending on its size, how much he’s affecting it and the time in which he attempts to hold it. As such Yon will usually hold back using this ability and simply use more simple aspects of it within a smaller space to try and conserve as much energy as possible. [b]Hollow Mask:[/b] Yon’s mask is unknown, many suspect that it’s the Jackal mask he wears and that Yon has mastered his hollow powers but he denies this claim. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Likey the Plot. Very Much. Also, if neither Total nor Visser opposes it, I would like to withdraw my third seat character and instead make a 12 squad Vice Captain. Okay? Because I dont see the third seat getting much action. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 good idea. go for it And as for the 12 cap app......... i need help with this one. Somebody help me out here, is this OP'd? warping itens and pocket dementions are something i am not familiar with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Depends. Occasionally, yes. Sometimes, no. It needs a drawback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Visser...TotalObelisk...it seems you both have a Squad 12 Captain. :< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 I only NPC'd the 12th squad until somebody ells took the position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 Oh. Well TotalObelisk just posted an app for that spot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 I know. Didn't you see the reply i made? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 [spoiler=TO REPLACE the 5 Division 3rd Seat]Name: Sakuzu Mishuri Gender: Female [spoiler=Appearance:][img]http://punkrocker179.tripod.com/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/sword_girl.jpg[/img] The sealed Zanpakuto is an Ordinary Katana with a Triangle Handguard.[/spoiler] Personality: Later Biography: Later Rank & squad: 12 Division Vice-Captain Shikai Name & Release Phrase: Darken the Moon & Cloud the Skies. Yurei(Spectre) Shikai Appearance: The Zanpakuto takes the form of the Blade in the Image, with a extremely pale blade that can occasionally become transparent. Shikai Abilities: Yurei can phase through objects, such as going through an opponent's blade, or escaping a chain. However, all of the blade must phase through. Bankai Name: Mun Yurei (Moon Spectre) Bankai Appearance: Later Bankai Abilities: Later[/spoiler] Will finish within the next few days. Gotta rush at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 the title of the spoiler sais 3rd seat of 5th squad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 [quote name='Visser' timestamp='1305445499' post='5209654'] I know. Didn't you see the reply i made? [/quote] My apologies. I missed that post. :3[quote name='TotalObelisk' timestamp='1305374272' post='5207425'] Finished 12th cap app. Lemme know it anything's off since he might be a bit overpowered, I've tried to balance him out as best I can... [spoiler=Yon Reider] [b]Name:[/b] Yon Rieder [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Appearance:[/b] Yon is a mysterious entity, wearing a hooded, white coat over his Soul Reapers robe and captain Haori which goes down to his ankles, obscuring his body from view almost completely, additionally he wears a pair of white gloves and think white boots. His face is concealed by a white mask in the shape of a Jackal with small holes along the muzzle, adding to this his hood is always up obscuring his head and identity completely aside from a pair of yellow eyes. Yon’s Zanpaktou is held on a belt at his waist in a pure white scabbard with a white handle and a simple blank circle as a guard. [b]Personality:[/b] Yon is a shut in and appears very rarely outside of his own laboratory, seen mostly by only his closest subordinates outside of captain meetings. Yon is completely dedicated to his research and has little empathy for anything that would get in his way. His interest is very hard to spark but once he does find something that interests him it will almost become an obsession to him and he will not stop till his curiosity is satisfied. Yon has little regard for other forms of life and will often flat out ignore anything that doesn’t interest him. He has little patience and while he is hard to anger he can quickly become dangerous. As far as battle goes Yon will not engage with anyone unless they interest him and even then he will hold back his abilities, only unleashing his true powers if he deems his opponent worth of suffering his wrath. Yon’s tone of voice hardly ever changes and speaks in an almost constant, emotionless tone which remains no matter what situation he’s in, whether something interests or angers him or not, making it very hard for anybody to ‘read’ him as a person. [b]Biography:[/b] Very little is known about Yon and his backstory, leading most people to question his position as captain. Since the day he first arrived in the Seiretei, Yon has hid his appearance and identity from others (although there is a rumour that the captain commander knows who he is and what he looks like). When he arrived he practically demanded to be given the then open 12th squad captain position, taking the exam and passing easily. He has been the 12th squad captain for over 100 years and yet in that time little is still known about him and his true nature. [b]Rank & squad:[/b] 12th Squad Captain [b]Shikai Name & Release Phrase:[/b] Laugh at the Moon and Cry at the sun, grab the minds of the weak and drag them down into the oblivion of madness, Oukoku No Ankun (Kingdom of a Foolish Ruler) [b]Shikai Appearance:[/b] Visually, Yon’s Zanpaktou changes little, the handle becomes grey instead of black and either side of the weapon’s blade become pure white and pitch black respectively. [b]Shikai Abilities:[/b] When released, Yon's zanpaktou allows him to warp matter in his surroundings, giving him the ability to bend objects out of shape to suit his needs, even so far as changing the material entirely. For example he can shape and mould sand into solid glass structures, warp metal and break it apart into its base elements and so on. [b]Bankai Name:[/b] Rengoku no Ankun (Purgatory of the Foolish Ruler) [b]Bankai Appearance:[/b] Physically, nothing changes except a strange black aura seems to surround the area around Yon and his opponent, the size varying depending on Yon’s will. [b]Bankai Abilities:[/b] Yon’s bankai envelopes the immediate area around Yon and creates a form of pocket dimension. Yon can manipulate this dimension any way he chooses, including gravity, form and many other things. This power is limited, however, as he cannot use this ability directly on his opponent or himself and maintaining the dimension can take a considerable strain on him depending on its size, how much he’s affecting it and the time in which he attempts to hold it. As such Yon will usually hold back using this ability and simply use more simple aspects of it within a smaller space to try and conserve as much energy as possible. [b]Hollow Mask:[/b] Yon’s mask is unknown, many suspect that it’s the Jackal mask he wears and that Yon has mastered his hollow powers but he denies this claim. [/spoiler] [/quote] When he "warps" matter, is it instantly, or over a certain period of time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted May 15, 2011 Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 It's not instant no, it takes time depending on the scale. So for example he can't just instantly magic up a wall from the ground he has to actually pull it up, so to speak... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 After googling pocket dementions I realize that your bankai is destrubingly similar to Ryusei's Oh well. I guess i'll accept it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 So when will the invasion take place? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Well I haven't thought of anything to take up the time until the invasion takes place. I would say lets do a time skip, but that would end the role play too soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 [quote name='Visser' timestamp='1305527059' post='5212446'] Well I haven't thought of anything to take up the time until the invasion takes place. I would say lets do a time skip, but that would end the role play too soon. [/quote] I have a suggestion; Lets have a small arc where we take Osuchin out for training in the Menos Forest (I know it was filler, but I liked it), and we meet some Soul Reapers there. Just an idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esplin 9466 Primary Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Go for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 I guess thats ok. You can have the ecuse of the adujas, and menos were growing to rapidly(like in the show) so that the soul reapers are there. However they will only be probably 3rd or 4th seats of numerous squads, since it wouldn't be needed for a captain or a vice-captain level soul reaper to get rid of them. While there they can accedentally run into the area where they (Aizen and the arrancars they have as a guard/sparring partner or whatever) are where the shinigami's are easily killed. Before dying one of them sends a destress signal via: hell butterfly (which is created by the shinigami's spiritual pressure) and tells one of the closest officers. It is then that the Captains figure out that Aizen is in the Menos Forest, however, their specific goals are still unknown to them. Just that they were there and seemingly fighting/training an arrancar that was considerably weaker than the others there. Or we can halve Magnets character (he has a 3rd seat right?) be the only one to survive and manages to make it back to the soul society battered and bruised, and tells his/her captain. The other NPC's can be controlled by the person who's squad their in. This way Visser isn't the one controling all of them, and Aizen and Oshi(your arrancer). As a meeting is held over this they decide not to go, chosing to wait and see how things play out. Then some other filler stuff can happen - like the annual Sakura Festival or something of that matter. A happy time before all hell breaks loose in the soul society. Something like that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 I'm erasing my Third seat character, as my latest app says(Visser, read it properly. It says to REPLACE The 5th Division third seat.) But we could use him as an NPC that survives(And I'll control him for that bit, before he seemingly Vanishes.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Or just have him not survive from the wounds he got from the fight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 But he has a Bankai!!! (I dont like my characters dying). But okay, he can die afterwards(Or he could just fade into an Unimportant person, kinda like Yachiru, or the 4th Squad in the Anime/Manga. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotaru987 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Lol, or that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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