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Yugioh Virtual Destiny

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Iv been working on chapter 1 for 3 days. I hope you like this more then my first fail one. Turns are separated, like paragraphs.

[spoiler=Characters so far that are introduced] Zack - Username: Night Walker
Maria - Username: Not yet known
Name Unknown - Username: Yami
Person - Username: Doesnt play the game.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Chapter One - Yami vs Night Walker]Zack was lying in bed, looking at his deck. He heard his sister log off of Virtual Alert.Finally, He thought.Her sister had been playing on it for 19 hours straight!! Thats alot of time. is sister opened the door and said, "This dude wants to duel you.His username is Yami." Zack thought for a second. Yami had beat him before. He decided that a rematch was necessary he said "Bring him on." He went over to his computer, and logged in "Welcome, Night Walker" said a voice. His character had a black racing helmet, a black jacket, and blue shirt that said " Night Walker ". His character looked 14. He walked around until he saw the entrance to a taxi, where he paid twenty-five reapers. Reapers were the game currency. He went 59 game-miles to an egyption temple. His character said "Wow,this.is.big."Then he knocked on the door, where an egyption pharoh answered the door. He had a golden robe, his right eye was a jewel, and he had a golden necklace with a jewel on it.

Yami said "I've been waiting for you. Follow Me." So follow he did. Zak saw all kinds of treasures on the walls, including the seven millenium items lined up together, except for the rod. He then noticed that Yami had the millenium rod in his hand. They entered the throne room, where a servent with a ancient egyption duel disk. Only he had a deck in it. Yami went over to his throne, and then he said "After this duel, im gonna get Noah's virtual world and make a virtual world where you get to transport into." Zack said “Wha?” So Yami said “Too long of a story.” He took the duel disk, put it on, and activated it. "GAME ON!!" They both yelled at the same time. Zack accidentally pressed the A key, which voted for 4000 life points because the yellow border was on the 4000 key. Yami agreed, and then Night Walker went first.

"I draw." he said. He looked at his hand. He had a pretty good one. "Come, Spellbreaker of the Ice Barrier." He yelled, as a girl in a red cloak, only with with hood and you could see the full black shirt under it. She also had a blue rod with a ball of ice with golden wing-like things coming from the sides.[1200 l 2000] "My turn ends with a face down."

"My draw" said Yami. "Then i summon Y-Dragon Head." and then, a machine that was a red and small dragon appeared in attack mode. [1500 l 1600] "Then i activate Frontline base, and now once per turn i ca summon one level 4 or below union monster in attack mode. So i choose W-Wing Catapult." A blue machine with no eyes, but only a big cube with small rocket boosters came down. [1300 l 1500]. "I attack your spellbreaker with Y-Dragon Head." 1500 vs 1200 . "Then i attack you directly with my catapult."

Night Walker: 2400
Yami: 4000

"I end with a facedown." He finished.

Maria, his sister, had gone downstairs to sneak them some cake. When she got down, she ran into a burgar with their parents tied up. Maria pulled out her duel disk to whack him, but the man dodged her assault and threw her down. He activated his own duel disk. "I should give you a fighting chance. Game On." He said. Maria struggled to get up. She put on her duel disk and put in her deck, which activated it. "LETS DUEL!!" They yelled.

"MY MOVE!!" Night Walker yelled. He drew a card. He gulped. "I summon Shock Troops of the Ice Barrier"A Ninja in a blue ninja suit came down, only he had a weird thing: a oval made of ice with golden lines coming out of it. [1500 l 800] "Then i activate double summon, which allows me to normal summon another monster, and i choose my Junk Synchron." A very small person with no mouth, orange scientist shirt and gigantic orange top hat, came down in attack mode [1300 l 599] "Next, i tune him with my
Shock Troops. When the ice is released, a dragon breaks Free!! SYNCHRO SUMMON!!
APPEAR, BRIONAC OF THE ICE BARRIER!!!" His person yelled. A icey monster with wings that looked like cyber dragon appeared. [2300 l 1400] "Now destroy his W-Wing Catapult." 2300 vs 1300. "Then i activate three hinotamas, hitting you with 500 for each. Turn end."

Night Walker: 2400
Yami: 1500

"Ladies first." Maria said, as she drew a card. "I summon Honest." A boy fairy with big wings and an orb in his hand came down. [1100 l 1900] "Then I activate Shield and Sword." [1900 l 1100] "Next i activate three hinotamas ,hitting you with 1500 total damage and then iend with a face down."

Person:2500
Maria: 4000

"My move" Yami said. "Now i summon Z-Metal Tank so i can remove both him and my Y-Dragon Head to create YZ-Tank Dragon." His dragon head gained two yellow machine claw things and the top of Z-Metal Tank on his back. [2100 l 2100] "I ACTIVATE ROYAL OPPRESION!! NOW WE CAN BOTH PAY 800 LIFE POINTS TO CANCEL ANY KIND OF SPECIAL SUMMON!!!" Night Walker yelled, as he lost 800 life points and YZ-Tank Dragon was destroyed. "I end with a face down." said Yami

"I End this duel by attacking directly with my Brionac." Yami fell down, as Night Walker gained 3 levels and 100 Reapers. He also moved up from rank 11 to 5.[/spoiler]
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[quote name='Crab Helmet' timestamp='1303446862' post='5158347']
*enters topic*
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*sees "I've been working on this for 3 days"*

[quote name='Crab Helmet' timestamp='1303446862' post='5158347']
*sees block of text with no paragraph breaks*

*leaves topic*
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[quote name='Clause' timestamp='1303475863' post='5158929']
im guessing your mad of my small chapter. Well, it looked longer on microsoft word. I decided to put in the duel. It will make it soooooooooooooooo longer. it will take a little while to do it though.
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We're "mad" at the complete lack of formatting.

The fact that it's short doesn't help, though.
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Okay, look, the first time I read this, I barely understood what was going on because of the shifts in point-of-view. But I understood it a little better after rereading it a couple times. This is just the first chapter. It could get better. Don't give up, Clause.

Also, please fix this.
[quote]"Then i activate Frontline base, and now once per turn i ca summon one level 4 or below union monster in attack mode.[/quote]
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